majolie
Wednesday 26th March 2008 08:12 | A Moment in Time |
| I found this story and thought it was so lovely. Sad that it's the only one you have posted here. |
| Monday 7th April 2008 04:46 | A Moment in Time (Author Response) |
| thankyou for reviewing and I am glad that you enjoyed reading this story. I was only thinking about it the other day, and wondering about extending it. May get the urge to do so. |
gymnastgal19
Saturday 13th October 2007 22:41 | A Moment in Time |
| lol cute story!!! |
| Monday 22nd October 2007 01:55 | A Moment in Time (Author Response) |
| thanks so much for reviewing. |
pyromain
Saturday 15th September 2007 09:39 | A Moment in Time |
| this can get whicked. |
| Monday 22nd October 2007 01:53 | A Moment in Time (Author Response) |
this can get whicked.
Yes it could. It was written before I knew the potential of fan-fiction. However I do like the simplicity of this story - it shows a promise that is better off not being written in detail.
Thanks for your review. |
Evelyn
Sunday 29th April 2007 02:48 | A Moment in Time |
| Wow! I looked at the word count of this story and thought - hm, not that long. But now I see it shouldn't be a single word longer. Lovely little moment, I'd love to read more of that sort. |
| Monday 22nd October 2007 01:58 | A Moment in Time (Author Response) |
| Thanks for reviewing (so long ago). I like the idea of the reader wondering what happened next. |
lacyrachil
Monday 11th December 2006 11:28 | A Moment in Time |
| Nice, sweet, simple. I enjoyed this a lot. Thanks for writing. |
| Monday 22nd October 2007 01:55 | A Moment in Time (Author Response) |
| Thankyou for reviewing (a long time ago now!). This was my first fic and I am happy to see that Harry and Ginny came to fruition in DH |
DADAGinny
Tuesday 5th July 2005 21:45 | A Moment in Time |
Yum! I liked that story!
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| Friday 8th July 2005 00:29 | A Moment in Time (Author Response) |
| Thanks - I love chocolate!
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snowball
Monday 4th July 2005 22:59 | A Moment in Time |
| I presume H/G are officially a couple here? A bit short though but I like the ending, nice touch there. |
| Friday 8th July 2005 00:26 | A Moment in Time (Author Response) |
| Yes, I see Harry and Ginny as a couple in this story. I can't
imagine Harry being bold enough to touch Ginny otherwise. This
was my first story - I thought that I would start of small and see how
it went from there. Thanks for your review
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z2a_a2z
Friday 1st July 2005 06:59 | A Moment in Time |
| I loved the descriptions and imagery in this one - it felt hot and
humid while I was reading, and the ending just makes me want to
beg for the next moments to be described, lol! Just *how* does
Harry get that chocolate off Ginny? ;) yummy.
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| Friday 8th July 2005 00:28 | A Moment in Time (Author Response) |
Having lived in a hot climate all my life, it was easy to draw on that
experience. I originally thought that it would start to rain in
the story, and that would have washed off the chocolate, but I think
that Harry has other ideas!
Thanks for the review
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Arnel
Friday 1st July 2005 00:23 | A Moment in Time |
Cute story. I’m glad Ginny was with Harry, but from the way the beginning of the story was written it seemed to me that Harry was alone. You’ve done a nice job of including little-remembered facts from Book 1 which can so easily become confused with how the Express scene was done in the movie. I enjoyed reading your story. |
| Friday 8th July 2005 00:34 | A Moment in Time (Author Response) |
Harry found everything fascinating about Ron on the train ride to
Hogwarts in the first book, and I believe he would have remembered
every detail about the chocolate frogs and other sweets he ate.
His mind was so open to any information about the wizarding
world. This story was just a short duration, showing his thoughts
as they randomly popped into his head. Being a boy and just
waking up, it took him a bit to remember Ginny!
Thanks for the review
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Kelleypen
Thursday 30th June 2005 18:10 | A Moment in Time |
| Tantalizing--even a little sexy. fun! |
| Friday 8th July 2005 00:35 | A Moment in Time (Author Response) |
| Thanks. I believe that Harry and Ginny would have made the most of the secluded area they had found.
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Trelawney2213
Thursday 30th June 2005 17:00 | A Moment in Time |
| Chocolate frogs in summer--Sticky! And sweet!
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| Friday 8th July 2005 00:21 | A Moment in Time (Author Response) |
| Thanks for all the help!
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Megan SQ
Thursday 30th June 2005 16:16 | A Moment in Time |
| How perfectly drowsy and lazy. Wish I had time to lie around like that this summer... :-)
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| Friday 8th July 2005 00:20 | A Moment in Time (Author Response) |
| Thanks. I wouldn't mind the opportunity to have an afternoon sleep myself - lucky Harry and Ginny
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