Wow! This is such a wonderful story! You packed so much emotion into such a small amount of words. I was alternating between joy that Harry became a father and sarrow with everyone he's lost. I liked that the first sweet was shared by Harry and Arthur rather than Harry and Ron has I had been expecting.

I like that you had only the women present at the birth. An ancient tradition that you don't read about very much anymore. Very nice tribute to the past. :) I'm so happy that Harry and Ginny had twins, yet also so crushed that it was suppossed to be triplets. Thanks for not killing all three of them! ;)

Harry's connection to Molly was so sweet. It seems very fitting that Harry would be the one Molly is finally able to reach; he's so used to having his dreams infiltrated. I'm so glad they were able to all work together to heal both Molly and Arthur.

I liked the sweets you invented as well - the parchmint was a cute idea.

Very well done! Thanks for sharing and good luck! 

awww. that was really good and i actually felt content after reading it. I truly enjoyed it.

I really like the suspense of this story, especially the beginning.  You showed a very private moment between Arthur and Harry and I really liked the silent companionship they shared...along with the melt-in-the-hand jelly beans.  (My four-year-old son hangs onto handfuls of Bertie Bott’s Beans for a half hour or more and often opens his fingers to reveal the sticky coating has transferred from the beans to his hand.  It’s quite fun to see, actually.)

I’m glad the story ended happily with Molly awakening and Ginny and Harry happily displaying their new family.  I really enjoyed reading this entry.