majolie
Monday 5th January 2009 20:39 | Defining the Relationship |
| Loved it. Poor Ron and his hand. My husband never knew how lucky he was. I was kind of surprised to read about the bottle though - it seems kind of unwizardlike. |
assosson
Saturday 25th August 2007 20:39 | Defining the Relationship |
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Patches
Wednesday 14th March 2007 01:53 | Defining the Relationship |
| A very good chapter. I liked the way everyone worked together to help with the baby coming and how Harry reacted to the "labor scene"! It was nice that Penelope and her son came to help with food. Very good and it is looking up for Harry and Ginny. I suspect that McGonagall is going to offer Harry a teaching position! Thanks for writing. I look forward to more. p |
daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 14th November 2006 14:02 | Defining the Relationship |
| I love the name. That baby has a big name to live up to. But, sense it came from Ron and Hermione, i bet it can make it. And I wonder what McGonagall wants. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 14th November 2006 14:02 | Defining the Relationship |
| I love the name. That baby has a big name to live up to. But, sense it came from Ron and Hermione, i bet it can make it. And I wonder what McGonagall wants. |
GryffindorDragon
Sunday 24th September 2006 11:31 | Defining the Relationship |
Pregnant Hermione is hilarious. I love the line 'Never again Ronald Weasley!' She'll probably ended with several more kids (if not the Weasley 7 or 8) .
Green ink . . . somehow I thought Minerva would use a different color than Albus .
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ImmortalPhoenix
Wednesday 1st March 2006 14:09 | Defining the Relationship |
Wonderful chapter.
Kortnee |
Hearts on Fire
Saturday 14th January 2006 07:22 | Defining the Relationship |
| Wiping away the tears....baby Charles!!! So glad he arrived safe and sound, and that Hermione is OK. very tender moments!!!!!! |
amamama
Wednesday 10th August 2005 13:33 | Defining the Relationship |
Poor Hermione! You had to give her a hard labor, didn't
you? I'll forgive you that, but I'm not so sure I'll ever forgive
you not letting little Charlie suckle his mother's breast instead of a
stupid bottle. Artificial stuff can never compare with what the
mother makes herself for her baby, and Hermione, as the smartest witch
her age, definitely knows that. I seriously doubt she would've
allowed that baby to go anywhere befroe being properly fed. That
and, in my experience, after a childbirth you're so high on endorphins
there's no way you're able to sleep that soon. Even if the birth
lasted for 36 hours....
That said, I look forward to the H/G date and Harry's talk with McGonagall. Covered in chapter five?
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| Wednesday 10th August 2005 19:29 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
I struggled with this chapter, being a guy, and not ever having had kids (yet), so I relied heavily on experiances others shared with me and what little other literature I'd read on the subject. Everybody does things differantly, I suppose, and I appreciate your feedback.
For more on Hermione's pregnancy, be sure to check out the prequel to this story, Defining Moments. Her pregnancy is covered in the last chapter.
I'm glad you took the time to share with me your thoughts, and I'm really glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks again! |
Irishkat127
Monday 18th July 2005 21:56 | Defining the Relationship |
| Great Story.. Cant wait to hear more |
| Sunday 31st July 2005 15:37 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| Glad you're enjoying it! More to come soon! |
jeanne
Saturday 16th July 2005 17:58 | Defining the Relationship |
| Have the happiest wedding day ever. I wish you all the happiness in the world. Read ya back in Aug. |
jeanne
Saturday 16th July 2005 17:51 | Defining the Relationship |
| Hey gov! Really good chapter. I always enjoy the ones when a baby is being born,and "ALL" the family comes. All the love that comes through is so nice. this was a great chapter,and aaaaaw! Charles Albus! I love Charlie,and would have preferred Bill being sacrificed. Oh well .Truly enjoy this fic,enough that I just reread the first 3 chaps. Our library didn,t get in HBP,today,as didn,t most of the libraries here or in Toronto,etc. So I,m enjoying fics,till I get it.Read HBP fast so you can update soon. |
| Sunday 17th July 2005 06:57 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it. I finished HBP, and now I'm giving myself a chance to push it all into the background, so I can focus on this story again. |
BeckiSoup
Thursday 14th July 2005 18:35 | Defining the Relationship |
Hi Ugly Brother!
Amazing as always! So, how soon do I get to be an aunt? Just Kidding! I love you!
Love, Sistwerp |
juliet
Wednesday 13th July 2005 05:26 | Defining the Relationship |
Thanks for the update. It is just as exciting reading your story,
as seeing that it is classed as pre-HBP! Not post-OOTP.
Happy July 16th
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| Sunday 17th July 2005 06:56 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| Thanks! Hope you had a good one too, and I'll have more out in August. |
J62442
Tuesday 12th July 2005 22:59 | Defining the Relationship |
I"m really enjoying this! I'll be looking for the update in August. Enjoy HBP! |
| Sunday 17th July 2005 06:55 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| Thanks! It's reviews that keep me motivated, especially after all the cannon changes in HBP. I'm going to keep at it though. |
Wolf's Scream
Tuesday 12th July 2005 18:55 | Defining the Relationship |
Very nice; would be excellent if the typos were fixed. :-}
I had read that kittens were all born with blue eyes; didn't realize
that that was also the case with humans. Guess those of us with
blue eyes never did mature enough, eh? :-}
Poor Hermione -- a breech birth, and for her first, yet -- how cruel!
I've not been following your wedding planning, but I will take the
liberty of passing along a thought that I would express when folks
started getting tense during the planning for my wedding: the
purpose of the wedding is to unite a couple of families and have fun in
the process. (Other considerations are, at best, secondary.)
I look forward to the next chapter after your hiatus.
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| Sunday 17th July 2005 06:54 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
Thanks! I'll be sure to pass that along and remember it when things get tough.
Glad you enjoyed this chapter, good to hear from you again. We'll keep trying to catch all the typos. Nobody's perfect ;)
Look forward to hearing from you again after the HBP break. |
brios
Tuesday 12th July 2005 18:03 | Defining the Relationship |
Aww, do we really have to wait 'till August for a new chappie??
I'll be awaiting then. |
| Sunday 17th July 2005 06:52 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| Sorry to keep you waiting so long! I'm giving HPB a chance to settle in my mind before going back to this, since I'll have to ignore it in order to continue. But I'll be back, I promise. |
