I'm a Neville-Fan from way back. The story showed our hero in the light he deserved.

And curses, curses upon y'all.  It was so well written, it made me tear up on more than one occasion.

More please?

Sam

Very Nice Kelley, it seems your Neville has had quite an Epihany!  Wonderful story Kel, thanks for posting it.

Great Job!

There's just something about Neville that tugs at the heartstrings.  Thanks for not making Gran a complete shrew like so many fan fics.  I liked your choice of a wand for him and his mother's maiden name.  Very fitting.

It would be cool if Neville's plant was like a guard plant - unlike the other one that killed what-his-name at Christmas in OotP.  Hopefully we'll find out more about Neville's plant and Neville in just a few hours! 

Thanks for this thoughtful one-shot!

Ah, I love the way Neville stand on his own two feet in this; the firm but calm way he takes charge warms the heart and is good to see. I especially loved the bit about Gran seeing the fleeting reflection of her son in him--that was poignant.

The whole tone is warm and affectionate and I soooo hope we get to see something like this in a few hours. *Squeeeee*Bounces*

I too think that Neville will be at Harry's back come the showdown --and the title was perfection!

I was really impressed reading this. I have a soft spot for Neville as I'm sure others do as well. It's nice to see a glimpse into what going to the DoM did to and for him.

I would imagine it would make him more self assured and confident. I really enjoyed how you made him more self aware and confident in his abilities. He's not the kind of boy to mouth of to his gran but he would be more vocal aobut his wishes.

Your words made a simple glimpse into daily life a powerful story through the emotions you managed to convey. Again, very impressive.

Your review was well thought out and very gratifying.   Thank you so much.

Wonderful, Kelleypen, but where did you get the healing properties from?

Great story :applause:

Ari

Great, Kelleypen. Magnificant!

Ari

How absolutely lovely!  I was in tears at the end.  Thank you, Kelley.  I'm so touched.  It's a wonderful snapshot. 

I like the wand he chose - that vines would be the result is fun.  And phoenix feather core - hmmm.  Have to be another phoenix, but still.  Interesting connection. 

I’m part of this war.  I’m not doing it just for you two.  It’s for everybody. I don’t want anyone else to go through what you two have, or die like Harry’s parents and Godfather did, or grow up alone, or lonely because of these Death Eaters. So I helped. And I know I’ll be called to do much, much more before this is over—even if it means giving up everything, like you did. 
That glimpse into Neville's thoughts is what set me crying.  He's a good lad, our Neville.  He's suffered just as much as Harry.  And he's just as noble.

It’s showing properties that may restore memory damage and stabilize brain wave patterns.  Someday, maybe this plant will let us be a real family . . . or at least real friends.
I do so hope JKR has something wonderful planned for the Longbottoms.  We've heard of them, we've met them and had some insite into Neville's feelings on the matter (Moody's unforgivable curses lesson in GoF).  Oh, how I hope.

Thank you very much sweetie!!

You're very welcome.  Thank you for inspiring (read pushing) me to do it.  I have a soft spot for Neville, and I do hope Jo gives him a happy ending.

Oops, my friend arrived to pick me up about 2 minutes after I sent the PM.  This was really cute.  I usually don't read Neville fics, but I'm glad I read this one.  I like your portrayal of Neville, how he's slowly growing up, and having reached a major turning point, it's difficult for his Gran to accept that.  I also like the idea that Neville's Mimbulus Mimbletonia could help cure his parents so that they could be a family.  Hope to see more from you in the future!

-Lina