kopfsalat2000
Wednesday 5th October 2011 16:32 | A Little Piece of You |
| I prefer this one. I don't approve of Harry killing. |
Prongs739
Saturday 30th August 2008 16:12 | A Little Piece of You |
| I like the AE better. |
gymnastgal19
Tuesday 11th March 2008 22:20 | A Little Piece of You |
haha i liked this ending too
didnt make me cry :p |
QuidditchLover
Sunday 17th February 2008 12:57 | A Little Piece of You |
| im a hopeless romantic. i like this one so much better! |
gymnastgal19
Thursday 1st November 2007 06:58 | A Little Piece of You |
much better :p
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pippa..
Saturday 15th September 2007 00:01 | A Little Piece of You |
I like this ending better than the other one ... but im not saying that the other one was bad because their both great!
happy writing!!! |
pyromain
Tuesday 11th September 2007 17:20 | A Little Piece of You |
| well I really enjoyed the alternate ending, to original is more logical but he I like it when Harry lives and has a good life to live |
babygrl3
Sunday 24th June 2007 17:28 | A Little Piece of You |
| very nice fic... although a firm believer in happy endings I have to say the Alternate ending is much better.... . |
hahaheeheehaha
Tuesday 15th May 2007 12:32 | A Little Piece of You |
| aww i liked that ending a bit better than the other one, but only because its happy! fluff rocks my socks thanks for writing |
Novera
Tuesday 6th June 2006 21:36 | A Little Piece of You |
| AWWWWW. soo sweet |
Melian
Monday 10th April 2006 07:51 | A Little Piece of You |
| Very much preferred this alternate ending! Thank you! |
Guns 'n' Ginny
Friday 24th March 2006 20:37 | A Little Piece of You |
Oh, now this is better.
23.7/10 |
ImmortalPhoenix
Monday 27th February 2006 19:58 | A Little Piece of You |
| I loved the story! I liked the alternate ending better than the original ending. I am planning on reading most of your other stories and possibly every single one of them depending on how much spare time I have. Hope you continue writing because I have read two of your stories and both were awesome! Good luck with future works, Kortnee |
Believer
Friday 25th November 2005 20:11 | A Little Piece of You |
Most definetly liked the alternate ending better.
I was really shocked that you killed harry in the first ending. But I'm glad that you rewrote it. |
ridgeback77
Saturday 10th September 2005 11:38 | A Little Piece of You |
| Having read both, I can't really pick which one I like better.
Both endings are equally enticing. Good work all around on this
one.
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Delfino
Tuesday 16th August 2005 19:10 | A Little Piece of You |
Wow. Well, I have to admit I like this ending better than the previous one, even if the first "A little Piece of You" was a lot more emotional and with powerful writing, I'll admit. But yes, this was definately a lot more happy. When I first read about Harry being blind in one eye, I had to re-read the paragraphto make sure I wasn't making a mistake. I nice touch, definately. Thanks for putting the alternate ending. Otherwise, I think I would have had nightmares of Harry dead....
Great job, your writing is amazing as ever and I'm very impressed. |
happydog
Tuesday 9th August 2005 07:47 | A Little Piece of You |
| Well, I'm always a fan of the happy ending. Both are good but I like the second one best.
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| Tuesday 9th August 2005 14:15 | A Little Piece of You (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked them. Thanks for reading.
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CryptoManiac
Monday 8th August 2005 20:20 | A Little Piece of You |
I very much liked the second (alternate) ending. I hate it when Harry Dies, especially when Ginny is so much in love with him.
Crypto(\/)aniac |
| Tuesday 9th August 2005 14:11 | A Little Piece of You (Author Response) |
| Sad, eh? I hope it doesn't end that way for real. Gah!
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Krypa Dakay
Monday 8th August 2005 18:43 | A Little Piece of You |
Which one did I like best? Of course the second one, are you kidding? Ginny conceived Harry's baby and then he DIES on her? Grrrr...
However, as much as I'm ticked about that ending, I do have to applaud you for your genius - I had no idea until a few seconds after reading the last sentence that it was Harry's funeral. I read "...and waited for the funeral to begin," and thought, "who's funeral?" And then my heart stopped. Very strange how attached we get to these characters!
Anyway, you are a fantastic writer and this is a very moving piece. After I went back and re-read the first chapter, I was shocked and amazed that I hadn't picked up on all the hints. I look forward to your next story, but I really hope we don't have any more Harry deaths! |
| Tuesday 9th August 2005 14:09 | A Little Piece of You (Author Response) |
It isn't strange at all. How could anyone not like Harry?!?
I don't plan on killing him off any more, but you never know when I'm
compelled by my muse. :D
Thanks for the great review.
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Pirate Ginny
Monday 8th August 2005 18:43 | A Little Piece of You |
Both endings were superbly written, but...well...I like happy endings best. :)
That said, there was quite a lot to like about the original
ending. It was sad, but the angst wasn't overdone. I
just...prefer a happy end. ;)
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| Tuesday 9th August 2005 14:06 | A Little Piece of You (Author Response) |
| Me too, to be honest. I just had to write it out where he was
dead. The muse wouldn't let me do anything else. Thanks for
the review!
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Shadow Hider
Monday 8th August 2005 15:30 | A Little Piece of You |
| yay! |
| Tuesday 9th August 2005 14:05 | A Little Piece of You (Author Response) |
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SiblingCreature
Monday 8th August 2005 12:42 | A Little Piece of You |
*smiles* I much prefer the happy ending version myself... tragedy isn't really my thing.
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| Tuesday 9th August 2005 14:04 | A Little Piece of You (Author Response) |
| Glad I wrote it, then! :D
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amamama
Monday 8th August 2005 05:22 | A Little Piece of You |
Ahhh, yes! This is more like it. I do prefer happy endings,
and I really want Harry and Ginny to have many, many happy years
together (at least 100!). SO - while the last chapter was
bittersweet and sad and wonderfully written, this take was just as
wonderful as I want the ending to be. Voldemort dead, Ginny and
Harry together and no hints to anything but OBHWF. Perfect.
It is a bewitched fairy tale after all, so it needs a magic ending.
I prefer this *grins and nods like a maniac*.
Thanks for sharing!
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| Tuesday 9th August 2005 14:02 | A Little Piece of You (Author Response) |
Amen to long, happy lives. After what's sure to come in book seven, Harry'll deserve it!
Thanks for the review.
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kaiserzacc
Monday 8th August 2005 00:22 | A Little Piece of You |
| ummm which did i like better?...hmmm...welllllll...actually i thought that both endings were well written and nicely thought out...somehow i think that the original ending is more likely to actually happen but its always nice to see a happy ending...so...they were both well done |
| Tuesday 9th August 2005 14:01 | A Little Piece of You (Author Response) |
| Thank you for letting me know that they both worked for you. I'd
prefer the happy one in canon, but that's just because I want to write
more Harry when the last book is done. :D
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PHsname
Sunday 7th August 2005 23:23 | A Little Piece of You |
the other version was better imo...it's a lot more dramatic. happy endings aren't always the best endings...haha. anyway, i enjoyed this version as well.
keep writing!! |
| Tuesday 9th August 2005 13:59 | A Little Piece of You (Author Response) |
| True. Sometimes, a proper cry is what's needed. Thanks for the review.
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brios
Sunday 7th August 2005 23:22 | A Little Piece of You |
Hmm you know? I really like both endings. So, I don't know which one to choose. Must be that I'm on a happy/sad/fluffy/angst mood
:-)
Bea |
| Tuesday 9th August 2005 13:58 | A Little Piece of You (Author Response) |
| Well, I'm glad I could accomodate all your moods at once. :P Thanks for reading, Bea.
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BloodlessAce
Sunday 7th August 2005 21:39 | A Little Piece of You |
| This is a great story. for me i do like happy endings. where he does
live after getting rid of Tom. the first chapter was ok as well, but i
liked the seconed one better.
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| Tuesday 9th August 2005 13:58 | A Little Piece of You (Author Response) |
| Happy endings have there place, certainly. I only hope that it's what ends up happening in book seven!
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juliet
Sunday 7th August 2005 20:49 | A Little Piece of You |
"I love you. I've been waiting for over a year to tell you that
and I'm really sorry its taken me so long to get around to it."
Only Harry could say something like this. Apologizing for the fact that he was off fighting Voldermort!
And he didn't end up blind! Too nice, lovely fluff, and excellent
work with the spell. That will take a bit of explaining back up
in the Burrow.
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| Tuesday 9th August 2005 13:57 | A Little Piece of You (Author Response) |
| A whole 'nother plot bunny to have Molly being told that her daughter is pregnant. :o
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Aberforth's Avatar
Sunday 7th August 2005 20:10 | A Little Piece of You |
I admit to enjoying this ending better than the first. I refuse to believe that Harry must die to end Tom's reign of terror.
Although I enjoyed this piece, I don't find its internal logic convincing. Molly and Ginny at the Burrow seem in much greater danger than they'd be in wherever the others are. And the whole idea that Harry and Ginny mustn't bee seen together even at the Burrow is a bit too contrived as well.
The whole breakup that JKR inserts at the end of HBP is a bit of formulaic claptrap, it seems to me. You've kept to the spirit of her plotline here, butI don't think your heart's really in it. One can only hope that the characters will assert themselves strongly before Book Seven gets too far along. |
| Tuesday 9th August 2005 13:56 | A Little Piece of You (Author Response) |
Thank you for your honest opinion, AA. I suppose greater
explaination of the purposes for Molly staying at the Burrow would have
helped. Think of it as how WWII britain was. The war was
'over there' (save for the bombings) and people generally kept their
efforts on supporting the troops abroad.
Harry and Ginny can see each
other, they just avoid it because it'll be too painful for them (think
of the reason Harry left the funeral). Yet, you admit that JK
didn't do right by it and I don't think she did either (again, as you
point out). I'd much rather have them live happily ever after (as
Nothing and Everything Good attempted to 'fix').
This is sort of a hedging of my bets for how Book seven will turn out. It'll either be Ginny does assert herself, or we don't see her until the end, after Voldiemort's dead.
Either way, thanks for leaving your review.
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Aaran St Vines
Sunday 7th August 2005 18:11 | A Little Piece of You |
Harry Potter started as, and should remain, a story for older kids and pre-teens.
Thais is as far to the dark ending it should go.
I really like this - a lot |
| Tuesday 9th August 2005 13:50 | A Little Piece of You (Author Response) |
| I'm flattered, Aaran. I hope that it doesn't end sad, simply
because of my own selfish predilections to be able to write in canon
post-hogwarts stories where Harry is alive and married with
Ginny. :D
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Fuzzy
Sunday 7th August 2005 15:43 | A Little Piece of You |
| Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww, the alternate ending was much better than the original in my opinion... but I suppose it's just cause I don't like it when Harry dies off. There're both great stories! |
| Tuesday 9th August 2005 13:49 | A Little Piece of You (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I really enjoyed writing both and I'm glad they both appealed to you.
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