majolie
Monday 5th January 2009 20:49 | Defining the Relationship |
| Nice chapter. I enjoy the Harry / Ginny dynamic you have going and Little Charlie sounds so adorable I almost want another one. I do NOT miss those sleepless nights though!!! |
DebbieO
Tuesday 22nd May 2007 09:29 | Defining the Relationship |
| Loving Uncle Moony and Arthur as MOM. He'd be great! |
Patches
Wednesday 14th March 2007 02:13 | Defining the Relationship |
I really like the scene with the baby. Harry and Ron making faces for the baby. That is cute. Of course Ginny in the "red coctail dress" is quite an image. I liked Ron's reaction. That was great with Remus and the chess game while Harry asked for dating advice. Things are moving right along.
Thanks for writing. p |
daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 14th November 2006 14:15 | Defining the Relationship |
| I love the A B C thing. And Ron and Harry's reaction to the dress. Briliant. Hehe. Very good chapter. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 14th November 2006 14:15 | Defining the Relationship |
| I love the A B C thing. And Ron and Harry's reaction to the dress. Briliant. Hehe. Very good chapter. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 14th November 2006 14:15 | Defining the Relationship |
| I love the A B C thing. And Ron and Harry's reaction to the dress. Briliant. Hehe. Very good chapter. |
GryffindorDragon
Sunday 24th September 2006 11:46 | Defining the Relationship |
So the letter from McGonagall (I know, last chapter) and Harry's appointment with her -- maybe you are going to move in the direction of Harry as teacher -- Yeah . .
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rupertgrintsgirl
Wednesday 7th June 2006 19:55 | Defining the Relationship |
Wicked Cool |
ImmortalPhoenix
Wednesday 1st March 2006 14:27 | Defining the Relationship |
Loved it! I especially liked this:
"You only call me that for one of three reasons. A. You want something. B. You're playing a prank on me. Or C, you're about to ask me a question that really should have been answered by your parents or your Godfather. So which is it?" Remus asked, leading Harry to the living room.
Kortnee |
Surplus Imagination
Saturday 13th August 2005 08:03 | Defining the Relationship |
| Thanks for the update! I like Harry's conversation with Remus best. It seemed appropriate that he had missed normal dating advice up until now. I look forward to the date! |
| Tuesday 16th August 2005 11:57 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and hope you enjoy the rest! |
dragon-breeder
Wednesday 10th August 2005 20:31 | Defining the Relationship |
| Oh, I LOVE this fic! Somehow, it's strangely somehow my boyfriend and I met... (his sis was my best friend and she was having a baby and I met him... yadda yadda yadda final word now we live together in an apartment seperate beds of course) I like how you use your own style... and it's also great that it's a guy writing this, because usually when girl's write romance fics they're all about the lovey-dovey-lets-get-straight-to-the-point-first-chapter kind of thing. More of a masculine point of view. Very hilarious parts here, I like Harry as the 'Crazy Uncle Ed'. One thing I didn't like was the naming children after other family members. I kind of got confused. Other that thatl, I really love this fic! Remember, good writing takes patience! |
| Thursday 11th August 2005 19:37 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
I'm glad you enjoyed the story! Thank you for reading it, and your kind review. I'm trying to keep the characters the way I picture them in cannon, and I can just see Harry loosening up and becoming a little goofy (like his dad was in school) after all his responsibilities are gone.
Hope you enjoy the rest! |
Lulabelle
Wednesday 10th August 2005 18:47 | Defining the Relationship |
Well I for one still love your series, even though it's all definitely AU now. I'm very attached to your universe of writing, just like I am to a few other stories that were still WIP when HBP came out. Keep it up! I'll definitely be around for more! Now on to the "big date." Finally! |
| Wednesday 10th August 2005 19:16 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| Thank you! It means quite a bit to me that people still want to read it even though it's now AU. I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I hope you enjoy the rest! |
Lady Padfoot
Wednesday 10th August 2005 17:50 | Defining the Relationship |
| Uncle Moony! :lol: Nice work Gov. I want more! |
| Wednesday 10th August 2005 19:30 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it. More coming soon. |
Wolf's Scream
Wednesday 10th August 2005 17:38 | Defining the Relationship |
I get the impression that there may well be fireworks during that date. :-)
Well done!
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| Wednesday 10th August 2005 19:21 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
Now where would you get that idea? *looks innocent*
Heh heh. Anyway, thanks for reading, and I'm sure you'll enjoy the next chapter. |
jeanne
Wednesday 10th August 2005 15:32 | Defining the Relationship |
| It wasn,t Remus he wasn,t paying att. to,it was the game moves,as he was getting advice on the dating ritual, and so,was preoccupied re. the upcoming date. |
jeanne
Wednesday 10th August 2005 15:28 | Defining the Relationship |
| I am so glad to see another ch. Please finish this fic before you get caught up in writing an HBP one.It,s cute the way H/G are "dating" I really like that idea. |
| Wednesday 10th August 2005 19:22 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
I will finish, I promise. I actually don't even have any ideas for a post HBP fic yet. I'm focused on finishing this one.
Thanks for reading! |
amamama
Wednesday 10th August 2005 13:51 | Defining the Relationship |
Awww, no date and no Hogwarts meeting. Means I'll have to wait
for an update. then. At least I got a glimpse of Ginny's coctail
dress, and luckily - so did Harry. He'll have a chance to be
prepared and able to speak at their date then... I'm really happy
Arthur is minister and has changed the classification of werewolves,
it's wonderful to see a properly working Remus.
Thanks for sharing!
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| Wednesday 10th August 2005 19:30 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
I know, I'm terrible. I make you wait for it. The good news is the big date is next up. You'll have to wait a bit more for the meeting with McGonagall.
Hope to hear from you again soon, and I'll keep at it. |
snowbear96
Wednesday 10th August 2005 13:28 | Defining the Relationship |
| I don't care that this doesn't go with cannon! I still love this story!!! I hope the date goes well. |
| Wednesday 10th August 2005 19:15 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| Thank you! It means a lot to me to know that people are still going to read it, even if it's now AU. Thanks for reading! |
Melindaleo
Wednesday 10th August 2005 13:11 | Defining the Relationship |
| I liked picturing Harry's face when he saw Ginny in the red dress, lol. I also really enjoyed his not paying attention to Remus during the chess match. It was a nice moment between the two, but sad in a way. It's easy to forget all the little things Harry's missed out on. |
| Wednesday 10th August 2005 19:20 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
Oh, that red dress is going to haunt him...trust me... :D
I really had fun when I was writing the chess scene. I had this picture in my mind of Harry, staring into space, while Remus methodically destroys him on the chessboard. It was so much fun to do. And I wanted to show how Remus had tried to step into that missing role in Harry's life. There's going to be more between the two before all is said and done. Good stuff to come.
Thanks again! |
