DreamGlow186
Sunday 16th June 2013 18:36 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
| This story and the first one were absolutely wonderful to read! Please think about finishing this story |
LuckyLotto
Monday 27th August 2007 08:11 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
Hello Bella. You will have to bare wth me as this is my first review and I am new to this!
Well I'd just like to say that I really enjoyed your story and hope that there is more to come. I was really engrossed and would just love to know what happens. Form my point of view you have done a very good job and are a talented writter and I would like to read more of this story.
Thankyou for writing it in the first place and giving everyone something enjoyable to read. Regards, LL |
Evelyn
Friday 18th August 2006 12:02 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
You did it again! First, you had me choking out laughter, and then, moments later, I was nearly dabbing tears from my eyes from being so touched (the last part - just aw...).
Brilliant.
Just a couple of things now: I loved Lily forgetting about the being a witch when she was looking for a handbag... The jos of being muggle-born.
Then, of course, Vernon stumbling onto Petunia. *snort* Not just the mental image of that, but also James' reaction...
The scene in the compartment. Cuteness!!! And I loved Lily being taller than James. It's those little things...
I could go on and on but I won't because I want to read the next chapter. |
willow
Wednesday 8th February 2006 09:24 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
| i love this story so much- there are far too few good lily/james fics! i only started reading part one though cos it was finished and i didn't need ANOTHER story on my update list but then i found the second part which hasn't been updated since september- SEPTEMBER!! PLEASE update soon!- with LOTS of new chapters! |
Luna Lovegood 007
Saturday 17th December 2005 10:41 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
I absolutely love this story!!! Heather introduced me to it i guess a little over a year ago and we've been enjoying it ever since. (by the way, heather i do not pester you, as i check this site often. thanks for writing such a great story. can't wait till the next chapter comes out!!
Luna Lovegood 007 aka AW |
Heather
Tuesday 22nd November 2005 19:11 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
This is the best Lily/James fic I've read! I got about half the girls in my grade to start reading it by accident, and now they're bugging me every day asking if you've updated.
So...You'd better make it soon or I'll be pestered to death. :)
And one of them is probably going to read this, so I'd better shut up.
Heather |
bianquita4
Sunday 4th September 2005 08:21 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
| I absolutely LOVE this story! please update soon! |
SillyGillie
Sunday 21st August 2005 15:43 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
Brilliant job!! I loved the Natural Curve Part I and this one is even better!
YAYAYAY! James and Lily admit they love one another!
YAYAYAY! |
| Tuesday 23rd August 2005 20:52 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it! |
praesul femella
Friday 19th August 2005 18:54 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
| Oh, poor Lily! But that ending was just so sweet! I can't wait to see what happens next. Loved the bit on the train in first year! |
| Tuesday 23rd August 2005 20:51 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it! Yes, that bit on the train was very fun to imagine and write. I like thinking that Lily and James have had a rift for so long. |
wvchemteach
Friday 19th August 2005 09:44 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
Wonderful start...I say that if JKR won't tell us their story I'm glad you are...you are doing a wonderfully brilliant job. This is one of only two stories that Harry and Ginny aren't the center of that I'll read...the other being Lee Jordan: Tour Guide by St. Margarets.
I'm always excited when I see your Author Updates. Thank you for opening my eyes to another part of the Potter 'Verse I never thought I could enjoy. |
| Tuesday 23rd August 2005 20:50 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two (Author Response) |
I am very flattered that you put my story next to St. Margarets! I agree, Lee Jordan: Tour Guide is excellently written and I'm very honored that you think my story is too! And you're very welcome for opening your eyes - it's fans like you that keep me writing! |
Bucktavius
Thursday 18th August 2005 16:30 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
| great story. this one is off to a good start. the last part was great too. I'm interested to see where things go, what with auror training and Lily's career. I hope the other Marauders are still plenty involved! :) |
| Tuesday 23rd August 2005 20:45 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two (Author Response) |
| Thank you! Yes, it is fun to see where things go - and don't worry, I'll throw you many twists and turns.... *evil grin* |
hjdevnull
Thursday 18th August 2005 14:09 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
| This is such a great series, I'm so glad that you're back and writing it again. And it's hard to believe you're still in high school -- you have a narrative ability and structure that seems much more experienced than that. I can barely wait for the next iteration of this story. Wonderful, wonderful stuff. |
| Tuesday 23rd August 2005 20:44 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two (Author Response) |
Thank you very much! Especially for the lovely compliments! My writing ability has been in the process since I began fanfiction when I was thirteen and I'm still working on it. I'm glad to know you enjoy it. Thank you again. |
pfan2
Thursday 18th August 2005 12:19 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
| very nice !!!! I like! |
| Tuesday 23rd August 2005 20:41 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
