GoDons
Sunday 10th October 2010 01:26 | Too Young to Fall Asleep Forever |
| Loved this fic. I am a supporter of all HP pairings, especially H/G, and I've read this fic more than once over the last few years. Found another one of your stories called This Moment on sugarquill some time ago, but was surprised that it hadn't been posted here on phoenixsong, with it being a missing HBP moment between Harry and Ginny . |
gymnastgal19
Sunday 20th January 2008 09:07 | Too Young to Fall Asleep Forever |
nice story
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daniel_r_crazy22
Wednesday 2nd August 2006 20:03 | Too Young to Fall Asleep Forever |
| That was really good. Yeha the scene where Ginny finds Harry reminds me of a poem that I wrote about them The only real differance is that Harry dies in mine. But it was very good and well written. |
Delfino
Saturday 27th August 2005 12:17 | Too Young to Fall Asleep Forever |
Awww, how cute! And sad, if you think about it...amazing job. Keep writing! |
Black_White_And_Grey
Friday 26th August 2005 19:31 | Too Young to Fall Asleep Forever |
| Awwwwwwwwwww! A million awwws in the world could never, never describe what real noises I'm making right at this moment. Somewhere between crying and laughing; my face is just all scrunched up with happiness. This is beyond touching, and I mean it. What a powerful set of paragraphs and sentences. Bravisimo, person. :) ;) |
dragon-breeder
Friday 26th August 2005 13:34 | Too Young to Fall Asleep Forever |
AWWWWWW!!!!!!!1 That is SO cute!!!!! |
dophingirl79
Tuesday 23rd August 2005 11:49 | Too Young to Fall Asleep Forever |
| Good little ficlet. Well written. |
Velvethope
Monday 22nd August 2005 19:51 | Too Young to Fall Asleep Forever |
| Very nice, short piece. It brought a smile to my face as well as a few heart tugs. Nice work.
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Penny Lane
Monday 22nd August 2005 14:15 | Too Young to Fall Asleep Forever |
I remember reading this on the Quill ages ago, but that was back when I was very, very bad about reviewing. Sorry.
I think it's even better the second time around. I loved the inversion of the scene in CoS ("Please don't be dead"). And that was a great opening conversation. "What, up my nose? I'm sure that's attractive." Heh.
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amamama
Monday 22nd August 2005 10:58 | Too Young to Fall Asleep Forever |
Oh my... Wonderful, wonderful. And poor Ginny - first having
Harry fall asleep when she has something important to tell him (she
should rest assured that it then goes straight to his subconscious,
where he needs it the most - like a potion to heal his emotional
wounds), and then having the flashback. Wonderfully written, I
loved it.
Thanks for sharing!
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Cherry
Monday 22nd August 2005 05:12 | Too Young to Fall Asleep Forever |
that was great I hope you are making another chapter
Cherry xxx
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J.R. Lewis
Monday 22nd August 2005 02:34 | Too Young to Fall Asleep Forever |
WOW!?! Maybe I was asleep too... but I didn't see the flashback coming.
Jerked a tear out before I could recover. Great short story!
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critmo
Monday 22nd August 2005 01:58 | Too Young to Fall Asleep Forever |
| Hey, a Sayers fan! Wonderful story. |
SillyGillie
Sunday 21st August 2005 21:24 | Too Young to Fall Asleep Forever |
| Aw what an adorable story! Harry's too sweet! I loved it! |
hpiknut
Sunday 21st August 2005 20:17 | Too Young to Fall Asleep Forever |
| This was wonderful. It made me cry. I could feel what Ginny was feeling so vividly. Very nice work! |
Mr Flibble
Sunday 21st August 2005 18:15 | Too Young to Fall Asleep Forever |
| lawks.a wicked little piece of fluffage
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Arnel
Sunday 21st August 2005 17:47 | Too Young to Fall Asleep Forever |
| What a nice little story, so full of love and fluffy feelings. The flashback was a nice addition and reminded me of the last chapters of CoS with Ginny's "Don't be dead" line. You did a nice job of setting the scene and creating the mood for this story. By the way, it would have been nice to read the poetry lines at the beginning. I'm now going to look up that poem to read the rest of the lines. |
Wolf's Scream
Sunday 21st August 2005 17:20 | Too Young to Fall Asleep Forever |
| Cute & well-written; nicely done!
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