gymnastgal19 Friday 29th August 2008 19:15 | With a Tentative Touch |
aww!!! nice story!
that would be a very sweet invention! its almost like texting lol
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DebbieO Sunday 6th April 2008 21:34 | With a Tentative Touch |
Great idea. I love the parchment. |
keira azul Saturday 15th July 2006 15:49 | With a Tentative Touch |
Very cute! If only you decided to continue with it, I think it's a great idea! |
EmeraldPrincess Tuesday 20th December 2005 18:02 | With a Tentative Touch |
Awww that was so SWEET |
brad Thursday 6th October 2005 15:12 | With a Tentative Touch |
Nice little story! I've always liked those tales which have an epistolary component; it's a nice way to expose Harry's feelings and examine the way he regards his friends.
I guess every second reviewer by now has mentioned a couple of little errors? In Remus's note he substitutes 'James' for 'Sirius', and a 'reducto' spell - I'm pretty sure - is a 'blow something to smithereens' enchantment, rather than a 'reduction' charm for diminishing size.
Cute bit of dialogue from Ginny; I particularly enjoyed the references to her previous 'singing' efforts. 'Ha!' indeed. Grin on face.
Thanks for the story!
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Cherry Thursday 29th September 2005 09:36 | With a Tentative Touch |
aww, how sweet. I hope you are making more.
cherry |
weasleysrcool Wednesday 28th September 2005 19:19 | With a Tentative Touch |
That is just the sort of thing that Ginny would think of for Harry. No-one in the wizarding world understands him like she does. Wonderful little story. I loved it. |
amamama Wednesday 28th September 2005 10:48 | With a Tentative Touch |
Neat idea, and the uses are limitless. Both for good and bad.... Nice little fic.
Thanks!
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Rocky235 Wednesday 28th September 2005 10:15 | With a Tentative Touch |
That was a pleasent and mellow story.
The grammar was good plus I always enjoy the 'letters' in a story. (Although, they do remind me of all the crappy ones I've written.) |
ridgeback77 Wednesday 28th September 2005 07:14 | With a Tentative Touch |
Very nice. I've seen items similar to this in other fics, and I
really like the idea of long distance instand communication.
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kaiserzacc Tuesday 27th September 2005 20:56 | With a Tentative Touch |
mmm...good start...i love it when the twins come up with useful things
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Melindaleo Tuesday 27th September 2005 20:49 | With a Tentative Touch |
Awwwwww, this was so nice. I really enjoyed it - left me feeling all warm and fuzzy inside. I love the connection to the diary, as well, only this time, Harry and Ginny get something nice out of it. Nicely done. |
cryslin Tuesday 27th September 2005 20:14 | With a Tentative Touch |
*Happy sigh*
That was a good idea! Wizarding Instant Messaging. Maybe the Twins will name this invention soon enough! Now for the story, great as always. I'm not too good a reviews, but this motivated me. I would have thought that the writer's penmanship would show more, but that may be a computer code thing. Anyway, great job! |