Thorn Monday 8th December 2008 12:26 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
that line "you've got your whole life in front" of you is so sad |
OnceInALifetime Sunday 25th February 2007 17:11 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
luv the story! whens ur next update? cant wait!
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Evelyn Friday 18th August 2006 12:28 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
Woo... Nice.
Poor Lily is a swot, no matter what she says... Quite good results, indeed.
And, now, it's settled. Fun mixed with fluff is a trademark of yours. This proves it. Lily pointed her wand at the bright light bulb. “Nox,” she instructed it firmly. The bulb cracked cleanly in half and fell to the floor, where it broke into even smaller pieces.
Oops, Lily thought to herself. “Ah, well, at least it’s off,” she mumbled aloud. She allowed herself to chuckle for a minute before falling into a deep slumber. She dreamt of James kissing her as light bulbs shattered all around them.
Brilliant. |
amorentia Wednesday 1st February 2006 17:58 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
This is great! Please tell me you'll be continueing with the story!! |
WhiteWitch Monday 9th January 2006 14:51 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
NONONON! You can't do that you evil woman! I LURVE this story and you write more right now. PLEASE! I'll beg, *begs*, threaten *threatens*, and do other stuff *does other stuff*, but PLEASE write more soon!
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Cherry Wednesday 28th December 2005 10:39 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
Come on Bella! I've been waiting for EVER for the next chapter of this! Please hurry!
Cherry xxx |
GryffindorKT Tuesday 20th December 2005 09:05 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
I absolutely love this story!!! It is exactly the way I pictured James and Lily's relationship in my mind. Please update soon!!! |
Redhead Tuesday 29th November 2005 15:10 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
i am one of the girls that hearther got addicted to your story...and use to think fan fiction was well pointless...but i love your writing, more for its stlye than the Harry Potter aspect...it is amazing and well juice...can't get enough i adore it! |
Heather Tuesday 22nd November 2005 19:15 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
This is the best Lily/James fic I've read! I got about half the girls in my grade to start reading it by accident, and now they're bugging me every day asking if you've updated.
So...You'd better make it soon or I'll be pestered to death. :)
And one of them is probably going to read this, so I'd better shut up.
Heather |
Cherry Wednesday 9th November 2005 09:39 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
Come on! Needing update VERY soon! I feel as if I've wait for years! come on, come on! please hurry!
Cherry xxx |
SillyGillie Saturday 8th October 2005 11:31 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
How unfair! You have to update really really soon or I might go mad. What a brilliant chapter! I loved it! How adorable and cute and excellent. Please update as quickly as you can manage! I loved it! |
Bucktavius Monday 3rd October 2005 17:05 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
yay! i'm glad that your back! been a while between updates. but the story is still as good as ever. can't wait for some new developments. sirius' place shouldbe good |
Xaphania Monday 3rd October 2005 08:35 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
Oh, I love this story so much! This chapter was great, really well written. I'm looking forward to chapter 3! |
Jake Sunday 2nd October 2005 11:39 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
Great chapter, I think this is the only ME fic I've read and I'm really enjoying it! Keep up the great work!
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Connor Landon Saturday 1st October 2005 22:27 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
Aww, man! I was hoping for more! This is a great story. Though it's one of the only out-of-school L/J fanfics I've ever read, it's definately one of the best. Top two, I'd say. I loved it, please continue writing it! |
Cherry Saturday 1st October 2005 04:27 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
Aww, so sweet! Love James's "Too-much-clothes" LOL. I laughed the hardest I have in ages. Keep 'em coming!
Cherry xxx |
TigerLily8186 Friday 30th September 2005 18:50 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
Oh that dinner sounded quite fun. Ahh room hopping... hmm. I love the intensity that you put in their relationship. This was just the thing I needed to read right now. One of the better L/J's out there. |
martita Friday 30th September 2005 15:36 | Following the Natural Curve: Part Two |
*sighs* extremely funny, and innocently sexy (if there is such a thing). Wonderful writing, as usual. |