pyromain
Thursday 29th November 2007 05:39 | Till I Collapse |
| well this was different a nice view on the troubled mind of Mr. Potter. |
Ladybug
Wednesday 16th August 2006 19:12 | Till I Collapse |
| This is a very touching story. I love the friendships depicted, from the misguided help of the twins to the overprotective interference of Hermione and the stability and unwavering support of Ron. A nice metaphor about the stories, ironic but very fitting nevertheless. I certainly hope there will be a happy ending, too! Your portrayal of Harry is great, I love getting inside his thoughts and you did it really well. Overall, a moving story. Great work! |
Evelyn
Saturday 22nd April 2006 05:16 | Till I Collapse |
I read this story ages ago and today, I stumbled upon it again - so here you are with a late review...
I liked it from the beginning to the very last sentence (Bar’s closing up kids, last call... excellent ending). It's such a quiet and sombre little story. Sniff. I could do with a cheering charm, too, now. |
Connor Landon
Thursday 23rd February 2006 20:53 | Till I Collapse |
| This is a very good story, well written. Keep up the good work! |
SillyGillie
Thursday 13th October 2005 14:34 | Till I Collapse |
| Brilliant job. I really liked Harry comparing life to a book. Very ironic. Aw what a sad tone this chapter has. I hope Harry feels better soon. |
EJH0904
Tuesday 11th October 2005 19:18 | Till I Collapse |
| I'm interested in this story, and I'm wondering where you're planning to take this. Please keep writing and update soon. : ) |
| Tuesday 11th October 2005 22:10 | Till I Collapse (Author Response) |
| Well, sorry to disappoint, but this is the last chapter. I do plan on following up with other stories though. Thanks for taking the time to read and review, I really appreciate it. |
Melindaleo
Tuesday 11th October 2005 15:52 | Till I Collapse |
I want a happy ending, too! I love all the drama and angst, but it still needs a happy ending for Harry to make it all worth it in the end.
Thanks for a great read. I really liked Hermione in this chapter. |
| Tuesday 11th October 2005 22:13 | Till I Collapse (Author Response) |
| I'm sure he'll have a happy ending someday. Thanks a lot for reading this, and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
