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MercuryBlue
Monday 17th October 2005 11:56 | The Last Month Before Hogwarts | | Interesting choice of Missing Moments. May I note, however, that Aquarius and Leo are on opposite sides of the sky, so they can never be seen at the same time. | | Monday 17th October 2005 12:16 | The Last Month Before Hogwarts (Author Response) | Thank you for taking the time to review
May I note, however, that Aquarius and Leo are on opposite sides of the sky, so they can never be seen at the same time.
That's why I gave him a star chart to look at :-) I don't know enough about astronomy to get stuff like that right when looking at the actual sky.
I chose this missing moment, for the simply reason that it hadn't been done. I was walking into work one day when it came to me. There is so much material available to include that we have since found out, so it's a good first story for me too. | cckeimig
Saturday 15th October 2005 18:47 | The Last Month Before Hogwarts | | I love the amount of detail you've put into each chapter, not to mention the bits of foreshadowing. | | Saturday 15th October 2005 19:49 | The Last Month Before Hogwarts (Author Response) | Thank you fr ryour review, again. I do like getting reviews.
I planned the story out in advance so I could put the little bits of foreshadowing in, without making it too blatant. Also so I could put in a very little foreshadowing for this story.
As for the detail. I've tried to make this the kind of story I like to read, and I like detail.
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