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Rocky235
Wednesday 18th January 2006 19:27 | Through a Dark Mirror | Nice and concise writing. You didn't confuse me. lol
Your grammar was good and your dialog to the point.
I liked it. | Ari
Thursday 8th December 2005 20:07 | Through a Dark Mirror | | Absolutely amazing. I hope you get the next chapter (if there is one) up soon! | Jake
Thursday 8th December 2005 16:39 | Through a Dark Mirror | Ahh, great start to whats going to be an excellent story! Keep up the great work!
-Jake
| Teen Prodigy of Ravenclaw
Wednesday 7th December 2005 21:37 | Through a Dark Mirror | | This is brilliant! I can't wait for the next chapter! | pfan2
Wednesday 7th December 2005 20:54 | Through a Dark Mirror | | I don't quite see where this is going ... it's well written though. | hewithnoname
Monday 5th December 2005 16:36 | Through a Dark Mirror | | Oh dear you can't do this to us. Good start, I'm not complianing but it was to short. Good but to short, I suppose you have a plan? Well I for one will carry on with it. Well done. (Didn't mean to sound condisending.) | Lulabelle
Monday 5th December 2005 13:32 | Through a Dark Mirror | | Well I'm definitely interested. What's next? |
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