DukeBrymin
Friday 16th October 2009 08:21 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
Wow! What a fabulous story! I don't, as a rule, like Ron/Hermione-centric stories. And I didn't have a lot of hopes for this when I realized it was such a story--but the by-line made me give it a chance. And I'm glad I did--I loved to see Hermione learning, and from Ron, of all people!
Thanks, it was perfect! |
| Friday 16th October 2009 11:24 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it. I don't write a lot of R/Hr, but I do love the pairing. Next to H/G Ron is my favorite character. Thanks for resurrecting (and reviewing) this old story! |
gymnastgal19
Monday 28th April 2008 07:56 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
ahahah!!! I love the ending! what would marguerite do?
loved this story
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| Tuesday 29th April 2008 14:29 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
| Glad you got the joke! Thanks for reading! |
gymnastgal19
Wednesday 19th December 2007 20:57 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
nice story I loved the ending, what would margret do? lol nice
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DebbieO
Thursday 16th August 2007 19:44 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
Very cute slice of married life. I like Hermione learning from Fleur, who learned from Marguerite. I also appreciated Joanne and Kathleen, the Rowling twins.
Thanks! |
| Friday 24th August 2007 10:49 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you got the reference to JK! Thanks for reading! |
rupertgrintsgirl
Saturday 10th February 2007 23:06 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
| very funny! loved it! |
| Monday 12th February 2007 06:25 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it. Thanks! |
lacyrachil
Wednesday 6th December 2006 13:13 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
| That was great. I love the setting and the timing. Great. |
| Thursday 7th December 2006 07:22 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
| I wrote this last year at Christmas for all the busy moms out there. It's a crazy time of year - perfect for migranes, unfortunately. |
Phirebrand
Saturday 28th October 2006 11:30 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
| I've just started reading through some of your writing, and I like the humor that you find in almost everything. But I really liked this short story - it's very "real" for a completely fictional place! (and I am not a writer, so I generally don't do technical critique) |
| Saturday 28th October 2006 12:05 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
| It's so nice to know this "old" stuff is being read! Unlike laundry and cleaning the house, a story stays done! LOL - I don't think the magical world has how to be the mom all figured out - that's probably why if felt real. Thanks for reading! |
Grandma Kate
Thursday 24th August 2006 21:00 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
| Just wonderful. |
| Friday 25th August 2006 12:57 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
| A good reminder to take it easy at Christmas! (or anytime of year, for that matter) |
snowbear96
Monday 3rd April 2006 08:25 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
| I like Kathleen and Joanne as references to JKR Cute story. |
| Tuesday 4th April 2006 15:30 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
| You're digging in the vault for the old stories! Thanks for reading! |
alianne
Friday 3rd March 2006 17:26 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
| that's really cute. i like it alot, plotline characterization, etc. little much of the fleur-accent, but no other negatives! |
| Saturday 4th March 2006 14:00 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
| Yes, it's hard to know how far to go with Fleur's accent and still keep her in character. Thanks for reading! |
Jenglory
Tuesday 10th January 2006 18:09 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
| I really enjoy all of your stories, and this one in particular gave me
that "warm and fuzzy" feeling. I love the endings of all your
stories, things always seem complete and just _right_.
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| Wednesday 11th January 2006 06:57 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
| This was just a fun thing I did for my live journal. It was fun to imagine the characters older and a bit wiser. I do like Fleur and Hermione together! LOL Thanks for reading! |
critmo
Wednesday 28th December 2005 04:36 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
| Nice one, I like the way you wrote Ron here. |
| Thursday 29th December 2005 12:39 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it. It was fun to think of what kind of people Ron and Hermione would be so far in the future. Thanks for reading! |
freshwater
Sunday 25th December 2005 11:45 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
| Nice story with a good point to remember at this busy time of year. I particularly liked the last line. **grin** |
| Monday 26th December 2005 11:40 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
| Nothing like a self-insert! LOL. Thanks for reading! |
PHsname
Saturday 24th December 2005 20:49 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
aww...cute story.
i like, i like. :D
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| Monday 26th December 2005 11:40 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it. It was fun to imagine Ron and Hermione and their life together. |
ChaoticK
Thursday 22nd December 2005 03:09 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
Yay!
Love it, as always. Hermione is SO 'Hermione' and Ron is SO 'Ron'.
And Fleur saves the day!
Thanks!
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| Thursday 22nd December 2005 07:52 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
| Oh good. I'm glad R/Hr were in character. It's hard to imagine exactly what they would be like twelve years older - so I'm glad they were recognizable. Thanks for reading! |
Astrid
Wednesday 21st December 2005 23:36 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
| Wonderful as always! I enjoyed the bit of irony at the end. Fluffy and cute, with the tiniest of morals- just how I like it!!!
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| Thursday 22nd December 2005 07:50 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
| Yes Fleur didn't become Fleur without some role models! LOL. I'm glad you liked it! And good to "see" you again! |
EJH0904
Wednesday 21st December 2005 20:20 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
| Lovely Good Ship story! Sweet and romantic and pretty realistic. Nice job. |
| Thursday 22nd December 2005 07:50 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
| Thanks for reading! I enjoyed writing it. |
cootiepatootie
Wednesday 21st December 2005 19:25 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
ps
I'm still voting for Charlie! Charlie! Charlie! Charlie! ;-)
Cassie
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cootiepatootie
Wednesday 21st December 2005 19:24 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
St. M.;
This is a cute story with Ron & Hermione. The thing I like best
about it is the end, though - WWFD is Hermione & Ginny's question
for someone they grudgingly admire (grudgingly I said! :-)) and it
turns out, Fleur has a question too. It just goes to show that no
matter how much you think someone has it together, they might need
help, too!! :-) [I used to have a little sign - I finally got it all
together...but I forgot where I put it!]
Merry Christmas & Happy New Year!
Cassie
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| Thursday 22nd December 2005 07:49 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
Oh, yes. Part of this is the truce Ginny and Hermione declared at the end of HBP! They will never be best buddies - but Fleur has her place in the Weasley clan!
LOL I like your sign - because it is so true.
Um - do you hear a distant echo? I keep hearing Charlie, Charlie, Charlie. Fleur would suggest writing a shameless fluff piece for her brother-in-law. Hmmm. I might have to listen to Fleur. |
levotatingT
Wednesday 21st December 2005 19:20 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
Very cute awsome!!
great job, keep writing
levotatingT |
| Thursday 22nd December 2005 07:45 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
| Thanks for reading! It was fun to write. |
Lady Padfoot
Wednesday 21st December 2005 19:12 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
| Very nice, I'll have to remind myself of that every now and then. "What would Katie do?" It's a wonderful piece all in all, and I can definitley see Hermione doing something like that. |
| Thursday 22nd December 2005 07:39 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
I think we can all relate to Hermione wanting everything perfect this time of year! LOL Thanks for reading! |
Aberforth's Avatar
Wednesday 21st December 2005 18:11 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
I have always loved your treatment of Ron. If wisdom is the ability to cope successfully, I think Ron will have it in spades. Your stories seem to show Ron on the verge of some adult quality -- wisdom, understanding, self-confidence -- and make us believe that he'll get there just fine.
"They won't remember bread, but they'll remember that this was the first Christmas you let them help." This line of Ron's took me back to the days -- long ago, now -- when our girls were small. My wife was the wise one, who made sure that they were included in the preparations, with things that they could both enjoy and learn to do well. Thanks for making those days live again.
Happy Christmas to you and yours. |
| Thursday 22nd December 2005 07:38 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
I'm glad you liked Ron and Hermione (and that they were recognizable after all these years) I 've always liked Ron's sense of humor and his loyalty. Both of these qualities wear well over the years, I think.
It's so true about letting the kids help - and really - Christmas is for them - not impressing all the adults!
Thanks for reading. It's always nice to "hear" from you in a review! |
amamama
Wednesday 21st December 2005 15:20 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
Next time I feel my shoulders tensing and stress creep up on me, I know
what I'll do. I'll just sit down to think "What would Mary do?"
Thanks a lot, I loved it! And the lesson is invaluable.
Big hugs,
Berte
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| Thursday 22nd December 2005 07:32 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
| Oh the shoulder tension. That creeps up on you in the cold weather especially! Fleur would definitely advise more rest and more laughter. Hope you have a good holiday. :) |
Bella
Wednesday 21st December 2005 15:14 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
Ahahahahaha. That was wonderful, fluffy goodness. Excellent. I think we should all ask ourselves, "What would Fleur do?" more often. :)
Bella |
| Thursday 22nd December 2005 07:30 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
| LOL. No one would understand but us! No, seriously. I wrote this for all the stressed out moms out there! |
jeanne
Wednesday 21st December 2005 14:40 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
| You know what? I really liked this.It really gets one to thinking.Good job.You,ve maybe started something great. |
| Thursday 22nd December 2005 07:29 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it! I wrote it for all the overwhelmed moms out there! Thanks for reading. |
Stephanie
Wednesday 21st December 2005 13:58 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story |
"When I have ze stress, my 'air does not curl."
Very funny :). I liked this story, again a short and sweet one :). I can't wait for the long story you promised. Merry Christmas! |
| Thursday 22nd December 2005 07:29 | What Would Fleur Do? A Christmas Story (Author Response) |
Thanks for reading. I think Fleur has a lot of comic potential. The long story is already written - I just want to put some finishing touches on it. With the Christmas crazies, it's taking me longer than I thought. |
