majolie
Sunday 23rd November 2008 19:01 | Worth A Thousand Words |
| Such a fun story. You've caught Ron and Hermione's personalities so well. |
gymnastgal19
Thursday 17th January 2008 18:15 | Worth A Thousand Words |
hehe cute story. thats a neat idea :p
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Aqua Fountain*
Monday 2nd April 2007 00:41 | Worth A Thousand Words |
That was so sweet
I loved it
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Novera
Thursday 22nd June 2006 10:28 | Worth A Thousand Words |
| sooo sweeet |
critmo
Monday 9th January 2006 01:39 | Worth A Thousand Words |
| It all seems VERY realistic to me ... and that's why I'll never tell my girl friend about your story. I'd be in trouble. |
Hoss
Friday 6th January 2006 19:40 | Worth A Thousand Words |
Quit nice Thanks |
Gabriella Du Sult
Friday 6th January 2006 06:33 | Worth A Thousand Words |
This is a lovely Christmas tale -- and Ron and Hermione! Very sweet. My favorite line: "“Oh! Will you never understand what it means when I cry?” she asked, sounding exasperated."
I snorted with amusement there -- truer words, my dear, truer words. |
ginnybaby1017
Thursday 5th January 2006 13:26 | Worth A Thousand Words |
Once again, absolutly smashing! I love how you end your stories with 'passion'...so cute!!
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| Thursday 5th January 2006 17:07 | Worth A Thousand Words (Author Response) |
| lol Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. ;)
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Spark Soliton
Thursday 5th January 2006 13:02 | Worth A Thousand Words |
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TWO (2) Stories from you, Velvethope, in one evening?! I'm over the moon, chuffed to bits - one story is a rare but wonderful treat but two is just - WOW!!! Thank you so much!!!
Once I got over the of seeing you write a story with and as leads I started really enjoying it but you had me as soon as I saw that you had sneaked in and in the story as well and then I knew the world was right again!
A lovely little story, your depiction of Hermione very much reflects my own view of Hermione; she's a lovely girl but very difficult to live with I think. I'm sure that Ron has found though that the effort is well rewarded.
I loved some of the dialogue - especially memorable is the "what's in your pocket, Ron?"-section, it had me !!!
Impeccable, envy-inducing, super-quality writing makes me wanna go and hide in a cupboard and brood over my own failings as a writer - you inspire me to try but oh, the heights I need to reach to match you... Oh, well - it's a challenge but that's what I need. |
| Thursday 5th January 2006 17:07 | Worth A Thousand Words (Author Response) |
| lol Thank you, Spark. Are you sure you haven't had too much caffeine this evening? ;)
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