critmo
Wednesday 31st May 2006 10:22 | The First Horcrux |
| That doesn't look good. Does this have anything to do with the tropical birds Sirius sent Harry with letters? |
daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 30th May 2006 22:15 | The First Horcrux |
| That's odd. And why don't they just Apperate away? Or can they not scense it is consdidered magic? I'll find out 'cause I'm on to the next chapter. |
Wooster
Saturday 11th February 2006 23:52 | The First Horcrux |
Well this is interesting. Really interesting. And hear I thought from the chapter title you were going to explain that odd statement of Ginny's in the last chapter. This is vaguely C.S. Lewis-esque (in a good way!) and the magic cancellation is an interesting twist as well. Totally didn't see this chapter coming and I salute you for it.
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Lady Ginny Potter
Monday 30th January 2006 14:31 | The First Horcrux |
| Okay this story is...so brilliant! It's the first one I've read Post HBP and I love it. please keep me informed on this story and keep the updates coming! |
| Thursday 2nd February 2006 18:18 | The First Horcrux (Author Response) |
| You are very kind. I hope the rest is a good! |
Jake
Saturday 28th January 2006 23:29 | The First Horcrux |
| Hmm, I seem to remember a story where a wardrobe transported a bunch of children to a strange place. Great chapter, can't wait to see why the Malfoys could get in to grimmauld. |
| Thursday 2nd February 2006 18:17 | The First Horcrux (Author Response) |
| It sounds familiar to me, too. |
snuffles007
Saturday 28th January 2006 20:46 | The First Horcrux |
| An interesting turn of events. Keep the updates coming! |
| Thursday 2nd February 2006 18:17 | The First Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
KEDme
Saturday 28th January 2006 16:58 | The First Horcrux |
| I love it! First, I'd say someone is channelling a bit of Narnia here. This story reminds me of one I started at checkmated where the four end up stranded inside a book where they are on an island and can't use magic. The story was, unfortunately, abandoned and never finished. The twist here is Draco's presence. I'm betting that they stay long enough to reach an understanding and that when they do go back they don't lose any time but have gained an alliance with said Malfoy. *chuckle* I'm looking forward to future chapters. You really threw me for a loop with this creative plot twist. |
| Thursday 2nd February 2006 18:16 | The First Horcrux (Author Response) |
Just a little Narnia (or anti-Narnia)
As to Draco reaching an understanding... I can't say. It'd spoil the whole ending. |
Hearts on Fire
Saturday 28th January 2006 14:58 | The First Horcrux |
| Another great one...sounds very adventurous!!!!! |
| Thursday 2nd February 2006 18:15 | The First Horcrux (Author Response) |
| I hope so! We'll see what the characters have to say about it. |
mary-v
Saturday 28th January 2006 12:10 | The First Horcrux |
Woah. Now that's one weird place... Great chapter! I admire your imagination- you always come up with briliant plots!
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| Thursday 2nd February 2006 18:15 | The First Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I hope the plot continues to be brilliant. |
Arnel
Saturday 28th January 2006 07:13 | The First Horcrux |
| You always seem to find the most interesting predicaments for Harry and company to find themselves in. Oh, Molly's going to have a fit when she finds that note on her kitchen table and then can't get into number twelve because of Hermione's Fidelius Charm. I love Harry's last thought about the fact that he's finally seventeen and can't use the magic he's longed to do for so long! Well done. I'm looking forward to Chapter 5. |
| Thursday 2nd February 2006 18:15 | The First Horcrux (Author Response) |
The predicaments only get better and better. Chapter five is almost done!
Thanks for reviewing. |
obsidiana
Saturday 28th January 2006 01:24 | The First Horcrux |
Ahhh! Yet another wonderful addition to your fic! I can't wait to figure out how the Malfoy's got to Grimmauld Place. Where they four of them ended up and who get's to trounce Draco next time.
Wonderful and I am waiting impatiently for more...
Sid |
Melindaleo
Friday 27th January 2006 17:38 | The First Horcrux |
| Ooooh, Harry Potter meets the Blue Lagoon, lol. Let the fun begin. Of course, Malfoy is there and the adults most likely to find them are Lucius and Narcissa, so all is not good. I wonder how the Malfoys got in? Not only with the Fidelius, but with the fact it's now Harry's house. They were acting as if it were theirs? Also, how is Malfoy not in hiding. He was as involved as Snape in Dumbledore's death. I had the impression he was on the run, too? Hmm. |
Xaphania
Friday 27th January 2006 15:34 | The First Horcrux |
| And the plot thickens....I enjoyed this chapter, even if it made me confused One thing I didn't really understand (though it may be because it's part of the plot?) was why their magic wouldn't work. Great chapter. |
| Friday 27th January 2006 17:03 | The First Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Yes, it's part of the plot. More to that in future chapters! |
luvjb
Friday 27th January 2006 15:15 | The First Horcrux |
| OOh, interesting turn of events!!! I'm on the edge of my seat, come back soon and update!!!! |
