GryffindorDragon
Monday 25th September 2006 09:29 | Redefining |
So they've got a date...but Chris should've stayed for dinner .
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realm flower
Tuesday 31st January 2006 14:59 | Redefining |
| yay. |
| Friday 3rd February 2006 20:19 | Redefining (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
brad
Tuesday 31st January 2006 04:58 | Redefining |
Always fun, or oddly satisfying, to read of the whole HP struggle summarised in just a few sentences to an outsider - makes it more real, somehow, particularly when it's couched in Muggle terms.
And thank God that *someone* has caught onto the possibility of Draco seeking revenge! "I haven't really given it much thought". Duh! Nice little chapter, thanks. |
| Friday 3rd February 2006 20:19 | Redefining (Author Response) |
I tried to bring my expertise as a histroy teacher to the process. I think it worked well.
And the others are catching on quick, don't worry. Thanks again! |
juliet
Tuesday 31st January 2006 04:13 | Redefining |
What a great chapter. I really enjoyed Ron and Chris' discussion on blood, Voldermort and the Malfoys - it was rather like a good history lesson, without the usual emotion that is seen when this topic is discussed. Yeah - I think you did really well with that.
I also liked the pathetically clumsy interaction between Ron, Penny and Chris and the sense of uncertainty was palpable.
One small typo when Penny opens the door - "creak" instead of "creek".
Cheers! |
| Friday 3rd February 2006 20:08 | Redefining (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I tried to bring a historian's viewpoint to the war, and it did come off well. And Ron, as we all know, is hopeless when it comes to romance. Hope you like the rest! Thanks again! |
fritz42
Monday 30th January 2006 17:20 | Redefining |
| *dances gleefully* Ahhh! Penny and Chris have a date! And Ron set them up!! I can't wait to read about the date. I am assuming that Chris and Penny will be a couple. I will enjoy reading about the differences of a Muggle dating a witch as compared to a wizard and a witch. Loved how Ron explained the whole Voldemort and 2nd war to Chris. I am kind of hoping that the wizard world could help Chris with his leg. *sigh* As always, can't wait until the next update! |
| Friday 3rd February 2006 20:04 | Redefining (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. There are going to be some fun, awkward moments coming up, as they try to make the whole Muggle/wizard thing work. And a lot of explaining! Hope you like the rest! |
BeckiSoup
Monday 30th January 2006 14:27 | Redefining |
I forgot these guys! |
BeckiSoup
Monday 30th January 2006 14:26 | Redefining |
Buba! Buba! Buba!
Hey you! I left a message on your phone the other night, and you didn't call me! Humph!
I love this chapter! I like the development of Penny. I hope their date goes well. I hope you update again soon!
Love,
Your cute, adorable, wonderful, fabulous, precious, and humble little sister |
| Friday 3rd February 2006 20:00 | Redefining (Author Response) |
| Will you grow some paitence please? I was getting there. Thank you sistwerp, it's always nice to hear from you! |
Ladybug
Monday 30th January 2006 07:45 | Redefining |
| Another good chapter - loved the embarassment and uncertainty on both sides and the gorgeous Arthur cameo! It was nice to have a little summary of the DTR investigation to catch us up to where it's at - but just wondering, will we need to read both stories to keep up with developments? (Not that it would be a burden to do so!) I like seeing the wizarding world through Chris's muggle eyes - I think you do that very nicely. |
| Friday 3rd February 2006 19:59 | Redefining (Author Response) |
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
It is my hope that you should not need to read this to understand DTR. This is just a set of "missing scenes" from DTR, and anything important covered here will be covered again, or sumarized, in DTR. That's my intention anyway!
Hope to hear from you again soon! |
