gymnastgal19
Friday 18th July 2008 01:51 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
yikes:S
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gymnastgal19
Friday 8th February 2008 12:56 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
huh that was interesting... i dont get why dumbledore didnt tell harry that voldemort was in his mind...
wow... dudley was eavesdropping that was an interesting convo that he overheard...
haha i wonder what will happen when the dursley's come home :p
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Narumi
Tuesday 12th June 2007 15:49 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
| Very interesting indeed. I must say, this story has provided a delightful distraction from my work- I never thought I'd say this, but I almost want to work late so I can finish the story! |
legobean
Monday 19th March 2007 22:20 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
This was a very different story. I enjoyed it, even if I found it slightly odd, and a little difficult to follow. There were some stretches that were difficult to believe. Harry running off to find Stephen with no method of communication to his friends, who he swore he wouldn't leave behind. Stephen apparating away and leaving Harry behind just as Voldemort appeared were both pretty difficult to believe. Ginny opening a strange package delivered by an unkown owl without having Harry, sitting right next to her check it for dark magic.
However beyond those moments I thought that Stephen worked pretty well. I thought Macoa was a brilliant device, and leaving us to constantly question her loyalty to Harry was brilliantly done. The scenes of Harry battling the shadow in his own mind, and eventually giving into it were well done.
Keep up the good work, and good luck with your new stories.
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Patches
Sunday 4th March 2007 23:20 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
| This is a really good chapter. Of course Voldy hit Harry when he was distracted and weakened by other circumstances. But Harry isn't stupid. He figured out that Voldy doesn't have all the cards. Harry didn't get this far by being a quitter. At least he recognized that he wasn't doing things the right way even if he didn't have control over them at the time. He will make it up with Ginny and Mr. Weasley. I know you can fix thix. You just have to torment the poor readers first! Thanks for writing. I look for ward to the end of this story and the sequel. p |
GryffindorDragon
Thursday 14th December 2006 13:45 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
Interesting condition of Harry
What is Arthur doing? Isn't Harry like a son to him?
Is Harry free of Voldie's control for now?
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daniel_r_crazy22
Sunday 11th June 2006 10:37 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
| Voldemort is a crackpot! |
gemz1313
Wednesday 1st February 2006 03:24 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
Wow....so emotional for both Harry and Ginny. I just want to wrap Harry up in a huge hug and cry for him! Why can his life never be simple for him.
This is a great story, and the rewrite is amazing. Please post soon, i love reading you work.
Any idea how lond it's going to be before you can next update 'shadows of the serpent' on SIYE's? hope its soon!
keep up the excellent writing. 10/10
Gemz |
| Thursday 2nd February 2006 05:50 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising (Author Response) |
| Hey... I think I just responded to you over at SIYE... I wrote that I am working on chapter 19 of SotS now and as soon as I have a good rough draft I will publish chapter 17. Sorry to have to do it like that, but I hate posting chapter by chapter, just in case I need to go back and change something. So I'm staying ahead of the game and posting only when I complete another chapter. But hey... I originally wanted to be 5 chapters ahead, so I'm cutting you'all a break, lol. It coming along nicely though. Look for a new update in a week or so. Thanks for reviewing both places! I enjoy your comments. |
Anakin
Tuesday 31st January 2006 18:46 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
| My only problem with this new control Voldemort has over Harry is that it seemed to come out of nowhere. Besides that, I hope you explain whats going on here in greater detail- it seems as if Vodlemort got near total control while he was sleeping. Great story, update soon! |
| Thursday 2nd February 2006 05:57 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising (Author Response) |
| Hmmm... I thought I'd established something funny going on all evening. Harry's scar attacks, the massive headache, and his mood swings were all not-so-subtle clues that V was up to something. Plus the distraction with the Dementor attack and Wormtail in the house... However, yes, you will get a better explanation for how our favorite Dark Lord is getting into Harry's head. Unfortunately, you'll have to read the sequel, Shadow of the Serpent, in order to find out what he did. Hope to see more reviews from you in the future. Thanks for reading! |
