gymnastgal19 Tuesday 25th March 2008 00:06 | Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered |
aww ww ww!!! that was a really cute story! I love the ending!! and i guess we know how arthur gave molly the nickname mollywobbles lol
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Rincewind the Wizzard Thursday 23rd February 2006 02:40 | Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered |
Brilliant, absolutely brilliant! Your explanation for the origin of "Mollywobbles" is pure genius. If I had been drinking soda/milk/coffee I definitely would have snorted it out my nose. Note to self: Always drink something while reading fanfics, just in case they're hilarious... |
Arnel Saturday 11th February 2006 09:41 | Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered |
I have long wondered when someone was going to use this song as a springboard for a fanfic and I must say that you’ve done a wonderful job of creating a story to one of my favorite songs. I love how you show the development of Arthur’s love for Molly and how he makes these four Valentine’s days special for her. My two favorites were the last two when he gave her the bracelet and we see the impetus for her nickname...leave it to Ron to say something cute which can easily be changed into something endearing. I’m going back to read this story again. |
Ladybug Friday 10th February 2006 03:45 | Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered |
Years had taught them well.
What a beautiful sentiment, thanks for this most romantic story. |
Astrid Tuesday 7th February 2006 16:03 | Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered |
Cute, good work. |
JamieBell Monday 6th February 2006 22:07 | Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered |
My gosh, that was beautiful. Possibly the best Arthur/Molly that I have ever read! Seriously, I was almost in tears, it was so sweet. I adored the different segments, ranging through their school years and their children. Loved how you brought "Mollywobbles" about. I worship little Ron and Ginny--their fight over the Puffskein was so realistic. You've really fit this into canon, and it's just wonderful. I sincerely hope you win, because you've written a most fabulous story!
Always,
Margaret |
mary-v Monday 6th February 2006 20:02 | Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered |
Oh bloody hell that was awesome. I especially love how you made the name Mollywobble fit! It's so appropriate!!
Love this! |
Fuzzy Monday 6th February 2006 18:51 | Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered |
A breathtaking overview of how that particular nickname came to be in use. Fantastic! |
aschowin Monday 6th February 2006 17:25 | Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered |
Really great story, I enjoyed your view of married life particularly. You did an excellent job connect little parts of canon with your story. |
juliet Monday 6th February 2006 04:34 | Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered |
It was quite different and really pleasing to read about the growing relationship with Arthur and Molly. Beautifully written. |
Wild Magelet Sunday 5th February 2006 23:15 | Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered |
Real love, how it should be. Beautiful. |
tante Sunday 5th February 2006 21:37 | Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered |
Charming. I'd like a bracelet like that.
You wrote Molly and Arthur beautifully.
Thank you! |