Rocky235
Friday 2nd March 2007 09:54 | Consequence and Redemption |
You write well and I'm enjoying your story. I read some of this in the distant past.
It was poetic justice that Dudikins was the one to hit Vernon. Sweet.
You don't need to respond to anything I might say as I won't be looking back at the reviews. (Gees, I don't mean to sound like Percy.) |
GryffindorDragon
Sunday 30th July 2006 10:50 | Consequence and Redemption |
Interesting start . . . very curious as to what was hidden in the Department of Mysteries -- obviously it had to do with Harry , based on the picture found on the guy who stole the decoy. I also find you assumption about potions not detected intriguing. Perhaps the Ministry does only track wand magic, I suspect that they are able to track any magic done. And from the incident with Dobby in Book 2, it doesn't have to be done with a wand or even by the person themselves, only suspicious magic done on the premises (or vicinity from Book 5). You are also wrong about whatever plot Dursleys had to keep Harry out of school (the actions of the Dursleys indicate that a visit to Aunt Marge is not really on the agenda; at least not in the way they plan, and while Dudley's statement maybe an empty threat, it more likely reveals their actual plans); you seem to have forgot the ending of Book 5, where the order gave a very stern warning to Dursleys to leave Harry alone and backed it up with the need to hear from Harry that he's ok at least every three days (even Hermione's insistence that Harry right letters regularly is based on a different premise). Good start, still; I'm interested in how this develops.
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Muggle Witch
Friday 26th May 2006 11:48 | Consequence and Redemption |
| *screams* BD that was awesome!! It sucks you right in...lucky for me the next chapter is up *runs off to read next chaper* |
| Friday 23rd June 2006 21:48 | Consequence and Redemption (Author Response) |
| *screams* Mugglewitch! You're reading! I'm glad you liked chapter 1. Yay. |
parakletos
Thursday 6th April 2006 14:40 | Consequence and Redemption |
| Regarding your comments on the use of horn/ hooter: from a brit picking POV I wouldn't see anything wrong in using horn. Hooter is more likely to be used as slang for nose. |
| Tuesday 11th April 2006 17:58 | Consequence and Redemption (Author Response) |
| It's good to know that no matter if you subscribe to American or British english that the meaning of that sentence will not be lost! Thanks for setting the record straight as I'm hopelessly non-British (but I do like tea in the afternoon and sometimes eat bread without the crust...lol). |
obsidiana
Friday 31st March 2006 00:06 | Consequence and Redemption |
>>>Harry’s eyes closed and he fell silent. His labored breaths were the only indication of his struggle.
Poppy continued to work diligently and Molly remained at his side, her hand clasped tightly over his trembling fingers. She held him until it was over.>>>>>>
Wow, this was one of the best and most compelling stories I have found to read in a long time.
I read all eight chapters and I loved it all...I cried and I felt every angst riddled emotion you threw at me...thank you for sharing this story!
I hope you plan to update again soon.
Thanks again!
Sid
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| Tuesday 11th April 2006 17:22 | Consequence and Redemption (Author Response) |
| Reviews like this are really rewarding. Thank you very much. Hopefully the rest will not disappoint. |
cckeimig
Thursday 23rd March 2006 21:15 | Consequence and Redemption |
| I cracked up when Dudley punched Vernon in the back of the head, but the aftermath....yikes! You've got me hooked on this fic already! |
| Wednesday 29th March 2006 17:27 | Consequence and Redemption (Author Response) |
| Yes, let the Dursleys be ultimately responsible for their own demise. Poetic justice, don't you think? |
ninkenate
Wednesday 22nd February 2006 14:16 | Consequence and Redemption |
| Great start, BD! I look forward to seeing more and finding out what happens. I can't believe you left such a cliffy in the first chapter. Please update soon. |
| Thursday 2nd March 2006 00:18 | Consequence and Redemption (Author Response) |
| Ninc! Good to see you at a different venue. Thanks for dropping me a very nice "hello". Unfortunately, cliffies are my specialty. *wags eyebrows and grins* |
dophingirl79
Thursday 16th February 2006 19:54 | Consequence and Redemption |
| Good story so far, I can't until you update! |
| Thursday 2nd March 2006 00:16 | Consequence and Redemption (Author Response) |
| Thank you for leaving your comments. Next chapter will be up soon. Thanks for your patience. |
Allie Kiwi
Tuesday 14th February 2006 02:38 | Consequence and Redemption |
This story had me hooked right from the moment I read the first paragraph. I love your descriptive passages and turn of phrase. Am loooking forward to reading the rest of it here at PS.
Allie |
| Thursday 2nd March 2006 00:15 | Consequence and Redemption (Author Response) |
| Thanks Allie! Such kind and encouraging words, but I guess that's part of your job, eh? *wink* I'm looking forward to posting at PS as well. Cheers! |
Melindaleo
Monday 13th February 2006 07:09 | Consequence and Redemption |
Oh, I'm so happy to see this wonderful story posted here! I find it much easier to follow in this site. I hope you'll be able to catch up quicly so I can enable my author alert.
To be honest, I'd completely forgotten about he car crash, lol. I remebered as soon as I saw it, but I'd blanked it up This will be a good refresher for me. |
| Thursday 2nd March 2006 00:13 | Consequence and Redemption (Author Response) |
| Hi Melindaleo! Thanks for stopping by to say hello. I'm hoping to have this story updated here sooner than later so I can update on both site as the same time. Passing through this story again is a good refresher for me as well. lol. |
