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Sunday 30th July 2006 13:22 | Consequence and Redemption | If Aunt Petunia and Dudley are dead, why doesn't Dumbledore know, as the wards must show; ah, but she just passed away. Vernon’s grey hair - when did Vernon age so much? Oh, let me guess, the woman reading the newspaper is Bella .
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Monday 20th March 2006 05:52 | Consequence and Redemption | Wow! I thought you had a great twist with the Dursleys taking Harry to hand him over and upped the anti with the car accident. Now Dudders and Aunt Petunia are gone and Uncle Vernon is more explosive than ever; great job of keeping this fic tense. With Harry not able to get word to anyone and the note that the mystery persons know where he is, you've set it up for a potentially great confrontation. I'm really looking forward to chapter 6.
~Fantastic effort! | | Thursday 23rd March 2006 18:28 | Consequence and Redemption (Author Response) | | Thank you again. I appreciate your review. At first, I really didn't want to axe Dud and Petunia as I really love to hate them, but, in the end, there was no way around it. May Dud rest in piggy peace and Petunia find happiness in a place devoid of magic and dust! | Arnel
Sunday 19th March 2006 07:30 | Consequence and Redemption | | Aaaaahhhh!!! Poor Harry! A freaked-out uncle and a nurse that thinks he's an incurable criminal are not what he needs at the moment. And then, on top of that, some deranged Death Eaters coming to get him? This is not good. You've done an excellent job on this chapter...it's entirely too short for my taste because I want to know what happens next! Please update soon...otherwise I won't have any fingernails left! | | Thursday 23rd March 2006 18:25 | Consequence and Redemption (Author Response) | | Harry, the juvenille delinquent, I thought that was pretty funny. *grins* This chapter was short and lacking any descriptive qualities at the end with the mystery wizard, witch, and the "newspaper" because...well...couldn't give too much away just yet. This is one of the shortest chapters I've written so far, and I usually tend to be quite verbose, so you might just wish for shorter chapters later on. lol. |
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