gymnastgal19
Monday 11th August 2008 16:44 | Monster |
huh... that one part where ginny started crying and saying "I'm such a slag; of course I'm comparing you to the other ten boys I've done this with this week. I'm such a slut..." She began to wail again. Harry had no idea what to say or do, and so he held her close. "Threw myself at you... threw myself at you and I know, I know, I've heard Charlie and Bill and even P-Percy t-t-talking about girls, I know what you m-must think and I'm so bloody scared... You think I'm a bloody hosepipe and a s-sc-scarlet — "
didnt make much sense....
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ProfessorBinns
Saturday 28th July 2007 14:42 | Monster |
| Wow! More great work. Our Harry would have been much happier had it worked out like this... |
GryffindorDragon
Monday 9th October 2006 14:59 | Monster |
'He wasn't pouring his soul in to you; he was sucking yours out.' -- too right; I glad you're not doing a person is horcrux thing; horcruces are objects
How interesting, Molly isn't going to charge after Ginny and chew her out for being a 'scarlet woman' .
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DaFalcon
Wednesday 2nd August 2006 19:59 | Monster |
| What a wonderful and beautiful chapter. Great Work! |
cckeimig
Thursday 23rd March 2006 20:08 | Monster |
| Wow. What a beautiful chapter. And the ending brought tears to my eyes. |
critmo
Sunday 19th March 2006 06:16 | Monster |
| Very intense. |
| Monday 20th March 2006 08:02 | Monster (Author Response) |
Very intense.
Thanks! |
Ladybug
Sunday 19th March 2006 01:26 | Monster |
| Oh, this chapter made me cry! Beautiful. I love Harry's wish to watch Ginny's hair grow grey. I thought Harry's fears about being a Horcrux, and Ginny's no-nonsense answer, were very well expressed. And Mrs Weasley ... I shed a tear with her. |
neesh
Thursday 16th March 2006 22:52 | Monster |
excellent!!!!
when is the next chp comin? |
| Thursday 16th March 2006 23:06 | Monster (Author Response) |
Soon, I promise! :-)
The fic is complete--the beta has it and all shall be revealed! |
MysterySilkRules_lol
Thursday 16th March 2006 17:41 | Monster |
| + forever! lol |
AmandaM
Thursday 16th March 2006 10:37 | Monster |
\"You had better take care of my babies, Harry Potter.\"
Aww! That was adorable. I loved this story - excellent characterization. It was really awesome how you tied everything in together - it wasn\'t all fluff, it wasn\'t all sex, and it wasn\'t all about the Horcruxes. Great job!
Amanda |
| Friday 17th March 2006 01:14 | Monster (Author Response) |
| Thanks! We'll be seeing more of Molly--and she won't necessarily be in her cute mode. ;-) |
crimson74
Thursday 16th March 2006 08:06 | Monster |
| I enjoyed this story, I hope you write more to it. Keep up the good work! |
| Friday 17th March 2006 01:15 | Monster (Author Response) |
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it so far.
There are four more chapters and an epilogue yet to come... |
Tan
Thursday 16th March 2006 07:45 | Monster |
| I really enjoyed this story and how it flows so nice. I hope you decide to add more to it. |
Rocky235
Thursday 16th March 2006 07:43 | Monster |
| I enjoyed that. Not only was it well written, but there wasn't a bunch of unneeded angst. |
| Friday 17th March 2006 01:16 | Monster (Author Response) |
I enjoyed that. Not only was it well written, but there wasn't a bunch of unneeded angst.
Well... There's SOME angst in there, after all. ;-)
But yeah--it's good to taste the sweet with the sour. |
Milygo
Thursday 16th March 2006 07:33 | Monster |
| I just read your story. It was very good. Is it going to be a one-shot? Or a full length, year seven story? I hope you continue with it. Thanks for the read. |
| Friday 17th March 2006 01:18 | Monster (Author Response) |
I just read your story. It was very good. Is it going to be a one-shot? Or a full length, year seven story? I hope you continue with it. Thanks for the read.
You're welcome!
In fact, there are four more chapters and an epilogue on there way. It's not a full-blown seventh-year/Horcrux Hunt fic, but it covers a lot of the bases (or at least the ones I was most interested in.)
I hope you enjoy the rest! |
parakletos
Thursday 16th March 2006 06:44 | Monster |
| And is there more to come or are we finished? |
| Friday 17th March 2006 01:19 | Monster (Author Response) |
And is there more to come or are we finished?
Four more chapters and an epilogue to come--already back to the beta, so they'll be posted soon.
Thanks for the feedback! (Or, in this case, the strongly implied interest! ) |
