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Reviews For The Beginning by Bella

DaFalcon
Tuesday 13th October 2009 23:44
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Beautiful.
Thorn
Monday 8th December 2008 11:49
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awwwwwww I love that james saves lily from the dementor!!!!!!
chiantiqueen
Thursday 20th December 2007 05:23
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Brilliant!! I love your L/J stories, there aren't enough of them for my liking! Great job and I look forward to the next update of Following the Natural Curve.
Serenity47
Saturday 24th February 2007 06:30
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I love it
love that sirrius had a hand in trying to get them together. i also love the idea of something really big getting them together and also it having something to do with voldemorts rising. Very cute.
thanks

luv Serenity47
Novera
Saturday 1st July 2006 00:16
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i have been wating for the next ch. for a loong, loong time
WHERE is it,
beautygirlbest@gmail.com
Wednesday 9th August 2006 20:23The Beginning (Author Response)
I'm sorry, this is the conclusion of the story! I'm glad you're so into my story, however!
SillyGillie
Sunday 2nd April 2006 18:21
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Aw how adorable! Yayay! James and Lily together finally. The lead up to this point was so cute. James, such a life saver, I guess it comes in the family! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!
Friday 7th April 2006 07:23The Beginning (Author Response)
Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Unfortunately, this is the last chapter - just these two sections. I have to keep on with Following the Natural Curve. Thank you for your review!
cckeimig
Friday 31st March 2006 20:15
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This was wonderful! I really enjoyed reading it.
Interesting that her ex wasn't really affected by the Dementors...had he been knocked out? Was he responsible for the attack? Hmmmmm.
Love your James, too.
Friday 7th April 2006 07:22The Beginning (Author Response)
Thank you very much. And yes, her ex was affected by the dementors - he was too weak to do anything, really - they drained him before going on to her, who they tried to Kiss. And no, Jantzen wasn't the cause of the attack (unfortunately). Thanks for reviewing!
Kate98
Monday 27th March 2006 21:04
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What a marvellous story! Funny, romantic, and believable.
Friday 7th April 2006 07:20The Beginning (Author Response)
Thank you very much, especially for calling it believable!
daniel_r_crazy22
Sunday 26th March 2006 18:33
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i loved it
Monday 27th March 2006 08:09The Beginning (Author Response)
Thank you very much, I'm glad!
Guns 'n' Ginny
Sunday 26th March 2006 17:16
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This is only a one-shot?
Stinks, for this is one of the best Maduerers Era fic I've read in a long time.
Monday 27th March 2006 08:09The Beginning (Author Response)
Thank you very much, I really appreciate it. Unfortunately, yes, it is a one shot, as I'm currently embroiled in writing a different L/J fic and I don't think it would be a good idea to write another. Oh well. Thanks again for your review.
Thunder's Shadow
Sunday 26th March 2006 15:41
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Wow...Just, amazing.

I kind of wish that he didn't get into the Hospital Wing tho, and when she walked in the Great Hall the next morning, she just went up, said, "Thank you", and started snogging him....Hmm, bit of a plot bunny I'd say.

Anyway, great job!
signed,
Samantha
Monday 27th March 2006 08:08The Beginning (Author Response)
Well, you certainly are welcome to act on your plot bunny, otherwise it might gnaw at your brain and make you nuts. (Definitely not good.) I'm glad you like it. Thank you so much!
willow
Saturday 25th March 2006 05:57
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i agree, wow.





Monday 27th March 2006 08:07The Beginning (Author Response)
*grin* Thanks. Glad you liked it.