sarah_90
Tuesday 26th June 2012 14:32 | The Last of the Horcruxes |
| very cute story! |
Dad
Thursday 30th December 2010 08:35 | The Last of the Horcruxes |
My apologies if you still read your reviews. I read this ages ago and was just clearing out mu
y bookmarks list and re-read this story. I should have left you a review first time round because it is a little cracker. Well done. |
| Thursday 30th December 2010 11:00 | The Last of the Horcruxes (Author Response) |
Thanks!
I keep meaning to go back and write more, but things keep getting in the way. |
potters_love_redheads
Saturday 13th February 2010 16:41 | The Last of the Horcruxes |
| Aww that was so cute. Nice job! |
potters_love_redheads
Saturday 13th February 2010 16:01 | The Last of the Horcruxes |
| Aww that was so cute. Nice job! |
DaniKay
Tuesday 17th February 2009 20:47 | The Last of the Horcruxes |
aww, LOVED IT!!!
DaniKay
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onebucdad
Saturday 17th January 2009 07:04 | The Last of the Horcruxes |
| short sweet and to the point well done. |
gymnastgal19
Sunday 31st August 2008 16:28 | The Last of the Horcruxes |
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lockdalf
Tuesday 22nd July 2008 00:46 | The Last of the Horcruxes |
| wow, amazing... I usually do not read short stories, just the novel length ones, but this time, when most of my update list is quiet for a while, I decided to give a try to a story of the week. And good I did indead... Thanks for a nice and very beleivable story... though I had a bit hard time getting Dhugals lines, as English is not my first langauge, and still, I have learnt with Americans, so Scotish dialect is far from easily understandable for me... |
saulick
Monday 21st July 2008 10:49 | The Last of the Horcruxes |
| Very nice story. Well told and fast paced. Thanks! |
pyromain
Wednesday 6th June 2007 13:26 | The Last of the Horcruxes |
| I always love it when a story end with Harry and Ginny together, eleminating Snape is a plus and Malfoy well he will not be missed either. |
lacyrachil
Monday 27th November 2006 11:31 | The Last of the Horcruxes |
Also, in the future maybe don't use such heavy accents for characters...I have no idea what Dhugal was saying at any point:
"Harry, whit kin' of fankle die ye cowp intae?" |
| Monday 27th November 2006 11:38 | The Last of the Horcruxes (Author Response) |
Also, in the future maybe don't use such heavy accents for characters...I have no idea what Dhugal was saying at any point:
"Harry, whit kin' of fankle die ye cowp intae?"
Yeah, that may have been exaggerated a bit too much.
"Harry, what kind of mess did you get yourself into this time?" was the original line.
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lacyrachil
Monday 27th November 2006 11:30 | The Last of the Horcruxes |
| Writing something from your own imagination takes a lot of courage. I want to commend you on that. This particular story just didn't sit well with me. None of it really fits the characters or the situations. I think it could easily be made into a much longer story with more connecting information. The characters and their actions need a lot of work though. Keep writing. |
| Monday 27th November 2006 11:39 | The Last of the Horcruxes (Author Response) |
| Well, thanks for reading it. I'm sorry it didn't sit well with you. Hopefully the next one will work out better. |
tante
Wednesday 29th March 2006 20:46 | The Last of the Horcruxes |
You've a lovely mix of fluff and action in this story. I LOVED the flaming duel in the last chapter. I like having the majority of this chapter from Dhugal's point of view. He's an interesting character. I'd like to see more of his interaction with Harry in another fic sometime. I know the dialect was a pain and a half to write, but it really gives him life and interest. Well Done!
The proposal moment between Harry and Ginny is quite romantic. As well as Ginny's determination to heal Harry's wounds despite her own injuries. It adds intensity to the scene. |
Swell
Monday 27th March 2006 01:57 | The Last of the Horcruxes |
Thank YOU.
A very satisfactory ending. |
| Monday 27th March 2006 07:17 | The Last of the Horcruxes (Author Response) |
| Thanks. I'm glad you like it. |
Ladybug
Sunday 26th March 2006 18:47 | The Last of the Horcruxes |
| A very satisfying end! Thanks for this clever little story - a great mix of mystery, action and romance and a very interesting premise about destroying all knowledge of the horcruxes. I love how you wrote Dhugal's Scottish dialect and, though it took some concentration to read, it really gave an authentic feel to his character. Great work! I hope you come up with some other interesting twists to explore. |
| Monday 27th March 2006 07:16 | The Last of the Horcruxes (Author Response) |
I love how you wrote Dhugal's Scottish dialect and, though it took some concentration to read, it really gave an authentic feel to his character.
I had actually written it out as I was "hearing it," rather than trying to write it phonetically. Going back and doing it over made me change some things around, which worked better, but it was rough. I had to work at a sentence or two, then walk away for a bit.
I do have to thank Tante for pushing me to do that, however. She's right, it does lend some authenticity to the character. |
