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Cronje
Friday 2nd December 2005 06:49 | Harry Potter and the Torch of Caelum | | Interesting plot so far. My only complaint is that you call Madame
Bones 'Sharon'. According to the books, her name is Amelia Bones.
| sonicdale
Tuesday 3rd May 2005 21:37 | Harry Potter and the Torch of Caelum | Hm. Sirius is back. We'll see how that affects Harry.
I'm not sure where you're going with this - the plot seems a bit too
muddy right now. New characters, resurrected characters. Need some
direction! Let's see if Chp. 3 has it...
Good work. Can't wait to see the trial.
| Bucktavius
Wednesday 23rd March 2005 17:54 | Harry Potter and the Torch of Caelum | | i like the story. interesting twist with the other dimension |
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