D.A.D.A.chik
Tuesday 27th November 2007 21:28 | Follow Your Heart |
| ok, so i'm not that old and have bedtime which techniclly is now. but i just came across this story and i'm choked up! its taking all my effort not to cry aloud! i love it! |
Patches
Thursday 20th September 2007 16:13 | Follow Your Heart |
| To Valerian, I am so glad you have written this story. I am really enjoying it. I hope you are still writing more of this story. It has been a while since you updated. I am really looking forward to the "rest of the story". Thanks for writing. I really appreciate what you have written so far. Patches |
martin83
Tuesday 28th August 2007 16:35 | Follow Your Heart |
loved ur story just wondering if when its going to be finished its the first one i read on this site and i loved it
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Patches
Tuesday 27th March 2007 14:58 | Follow Your Heart |
| This is a really sad beginning. I hope it gets better. Ginny has to see the light now! Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. p |
Believer
Saturday 19th August 2006 14:33 | Follow Your Heart |
| Ohh! That's so sad. Harry can't die! |
Bookworm
Sunday 30th July 2006 16:38 | Follow Your Heart |
| Wow! Great chapter! |
Wooster
Monday 1st May 2006 06:07 | Follow Your Heart |
Oh, so sad. Come on Ginny! You bloody waited for him to notice you for five years, what's the big deal???
Good chapter, I'm mad at the character, not at you. Cool idea about why he's dying.
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ImmortalPhoenix
Friday 14th April 2006 15:10 | Follow Your Heart |
Great so far! Can't wait for the next update.
Kortnee |
paladin
Thursday 13th April 2006 21:36 | Follow Your Heart |
Fantastic way to open the story! You really capture the attention of the reader with this beginning and pull them in.
Harry dying in a hospital bed screaming for the woman he loves and she's so close but bitterness has its grip around her heart. Or, will it wane when confronted with the object of years of affection.
You've set the tone of expectation with this chapter. We're all waiting to see you bring it the rest of the way.
~Great job! |
daisymom
Thursday 13th April 2006 12:29 | Follow Your Heart |
| okay so you hook me with just one chapter and leave me hanging! LOL. Can't wait till you finish! |
sweety_sorbey
Thursday 13th April 2006 09:06 | Follow Your Heart |
| I love it! I really liked the way you kept Ginny in character - most post-HBP stories see her crying her eyes out, waiting for Harry to come home, but I like your idea better. Please update soon! |
Tesgirl123
Thursday 13th April 2006 06:46 | Follow Your Heart |
| Its interesting. I would have thought that you would start with a fight between Harry and Ginny but I am intrigued by this opening. Update soon! |
cckeimig
Wednesday 12th April 2006 12:04 | Follow Your Heart |
| Wow. What a heavy situation to start out with. Bravo! I want more! |
SillyGillie
Tuesday 11th April 2006 21:15 | Follow Your Heart |
| Loved it. Oh so sad. I can't believe that Ginny wouldn't go to Harry's room, even if he was just calling for her. How come she's only upset that he was screaming for her? What difference does it make whether he was calling or screaming she should've been with him for ages. Poor Ron, Hermione and Mrs. Weasley. I think Ginny would've given Harry her love ages ago. Brilliant job nonetheless. I can't wait to see what happens. |
Eglwlf
Tuesday 11th April 2006 20:26 | Follow Your Heart |
| Summary and chapter do not match. Chapter was good nevertheless, but an update or two would be nice to see soon. |
| Wednesday 12th April 2006 20:21 | Follow Your Heart (Author Response) |
| There's more to come on the next chapters! I hope you wait for them to come. |
Connor Landon
Tuesday 11th April 2006 18:03 | Follow Your Heart |
| This is awesome! I'm almost crying! I really hope you continue with this, it's a very nice start. |
Lulabelle
Tuesday 11th April 2006 17:06 | Follow Your Heart |
| Ginny giving up on Harry? Never! But I can see your point. I hope you plan on updating this soon because this little chapter leaves me wanting more! |
MysterySilkRules_lol
Tuesday 11th April 2006 13:31 | Follow Your Heart |
OMG, you had better update soon!!!!!!
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EmeraldPrincess
Tuesday 11th April 2006 11:17 | Follow Your Heart |
*cries*
u have drawn tears form my eyes!!
its sooooo sad!! UPDATE SOON!!! |
Curren
Tuesday 11th April 2006 10:39 | Follow Your Heart |
| agree with critmo, the story doesn't really feel consistent and in character... i'd even say, you try to make it too touchy. Still interested in updates, though |
critmo
Tuesday 11th April 2006 06:02 | Follow Your Heart |
| Off, for a touching start, however, I cannot believe that they let Harry "scream" for Ginny for two weeks without giving her the slightest hint. Also, it's not really like Ginny to suspect that they're hiding something from her and she's ignores it. |
Allie Kiwi
Tuesday 11th April 2006 04:40 | Follow Your Heart |
| This chapter certainly tugs at the heart and draws you in, wanting to read more. It's great to see this at PhoenixSong, and I look forward to reading the story as it unfolds! |
aschowin
Tuesday 11th April 2006 01:10 | Follow Your Heart |
| Wow! It was easy to see where you were going in this chapter, but the emotional weight of that is so intense, you just blew me away. Great job! I really hope there is more to this, and soon. |
clareindil
Monday 10th April 2006 23:25 | Follow Your Heart |
Much much much too short!
An excellent intense start. Waiting with bated breath for next installment. |
EJH0904
Monday 10th April 2006 19:14 | Follow Your Heart |
| That was so amazingly intense - all the worry and guilt and angst - it's fantastic! The only problem is there isn't any more! Please update soon and let us know what happens... some time like, oh I don't know - yesterday would be good! |
GinnylovesHarry
Monday 10th April 2006 17:07 | Follow Your Heart |
| Wow. This is quite a powerful piece. I love the theory that Harry used up all the love in him to defeat Voldemort. Awesome! Can't wait to read the next installment! |
Rensselair
Monday 10th April 2006 15:45 | Follow Your Heart |
| I'm intrigued...looks like the foundation for a great story. Update soon please! |
