pyromain
Sunday 24th June 2007 10:53 | Letters |
| who would have thought that Lavender would give Ginny advice which is usefull to her. |
| Monday 25th June 2007 09:54 | Letters (Author Response) |
Not me, at least not before I wrote this
Thanks again. |
Patches
Sunday 29th April 2007 22:00 | Letters |
| A melancoly interlude. Poor Ginny. Still in love with Harry and he is with her but she can't dwell on it. So hard to write a letter to her mother. Should she tell the truth or try to be upbeat? Leave it to Lavender to put in a word of wisdom. Who would have thought it? Thanks for writing. I enjoy your little stories. p |
| Monday 30th April 2007 01:45 | Letters (Author Response) |
| Thanks again; I'm really enjoying following you as you go through my stories |
lacyrachil
Thursday 7th December 2006 12:30 | Letters |
| Who'd have thunk it Lavendar Brown with helpful advice. Good job. |
| Thursday 7th December 2006 12:50 | Letters (Author Response) |
| Thanks, you've made my evening! Glad to know someone still reads these stories. |
itsme07863
Saturday 12th August 2006 12:08 | Letters |
| ....more???? i liked tho. but i hope u plan on writing more. lol. |
| Sunday 13th August 2006 08:02 | Letters (Author Response) |
| Thanks, I am planning on writing more. In fact, I'm doing it right now. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Wednesday 9th August 2006 15:41 | Letters |
| Umm. Okay. It didn't really explain all that much. But the writing itself was very good. |
| Wednesday 9th August 2006 17:49 | Letters (Author Response) |
| Yeah, well. *laughs* First try, I guess. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Wednesday 9th August 2006 15:41 | Letters |
| Umm. Okay. It didn't really explain all that much. But the writing itself was very good. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Wednesday 9th August 2006 15:40 | Letters |
| Umm. Okay. It didn't really explain all that much. But the writing itself was very good. |
Delfino
Wednesday 3rd May 2006 14:31 | Letters |
| Hmm. I liked it. I was confused, at first, why Crookshanks was with Ginny, so I'm glad you explained it . The conversation between Ginny and Lavender was amusing, although I was a bit confused at the ending. Are you continuing this? Either way, I liked it. Very creative. |
| Thursday 4th May 2006 02:49 | Letters (Author Response) |
No, I'm not exactly continuing this, but there are more stories about Ginny to come (and Lavender - I love writing her ). There's going to be one very soon, actually, which takes place before this little scene.
Thanks for the review. |
critmo
Sunday 30th April 2006 07:29 | Letters |
| As some of the others, I like the oveall tone, the details, etc., however it doesn't feel finished, or - to be a little brutal - it could use a little more substance. |
| Sunday 30th April 2006 07:47 | Letters (Author Response) |
| Right... I'm posting another story soon - feel free to tell me if it's more substantial. Thanks for reading and reviewing! |
Astrid
Friday 28th April 2006 14:36 | Letters |
| Wow, who would've thought Lavendar would have the solution? |
| Saturday 29th April 2006 07:56 | Letters (Author Response) |
| Full of surprises, isn't she? Thanks for reviewing. |
Macsr71
Friday 28th April 2006 09:04 | Letters |
| Not sure I really understand the point here, was this an excercise in writting, if so, well done, good pacing, point of view stays constant, if just an angsty moment ok, if the start of something larger I say go for it as a story about how people learn to really communicate, or communicate without really saying it is always a good read. |
| Friday 28th April 2006 13:42 | Letters (Author Response) |
| Uh... Nice sentence. As for the story, I was writing a few short stories about Ginny, so this is one of them. I was trying to understand her character, so it is a bit of a study, if you like. |
Ladybug
Thursday 27th April 2006 20:16 | Letters |
Lovely story, Evelyn. I think your pacing is really good, with Ginny alternately staring into the fire and responding to those around her. It’s interesting to see how her mind sways from one side to the other, regarding whether she should be completely honest with her mum or be reassuringly cheerful, depending on the conversation around her.
Poor Ginny, left behind and having to put up with people like Betty and Lavender when all she can think about is her family and closest friends.
This story has a very realistic air about it. Great writing! |
| Friday 28th April 2006 08:10 | Letters (Author Response) |
Yes, poor Ginny.
And ladybug, great summary... You have listed everything I wanted to get across.
Thanks! |
Ima Quidditch Fan
Thursday 27th April 2006 15:14 | Letters |
| Interesting story. I think you have captured Ginny, and exactly the environment of a shakey Hogwarts opening. Nice job! |
| Friday 28th April 2006 08:06 | Letters (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
aschowin
Thursday 27th April 2006 15:03 | Letters |
| I enjoyed what you wrote. It was an interesting perspective, and you did really well with Ginny's thoughts and personality. I also felt like you cut the story off before the ending though, before you got your point across. It seemed she was conflicted about what she wanted to say, and the reader doesn't see that resolved. The way you ended it was pretty clever, it was just too soon. Anyway, you did a good job, hope to read more soon. |
| Friday 28th April 2006 08:06 | Letters (Author Response) |
| I'm hoping to post another story about Ginny quite soon - I hope you'll be satisfied with the ending of that one... Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
