pyromain
Sunday 24th June 2007 12:47 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds |
| Ginny acting like a real girl? This is funny, I really liked it. |
| Monday 25th June 2007 09:46 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds (Author Response) |
| I think that every girl will act like a real girl at some point... Even strong witches like Ginny. Thanks for reviewing. |
Patches
Sunday 29th April 2007 23:04 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds |
| A very good insight on Ginny's part. Lavender is lonely. That is sad. Of course Ginny has something to hope for. We all hope for that. Thanks for writing. p |
| Monday 30th April 2007 01:41 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
No Idea Why I Smile
Saturday 28th April 2007 13:27 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds |
awww...thats so sad, but really good. Though, i must admit, when i opened this to read it, i had hoped it would involved loads of neville, because he's my favourite character, but i really liked this
Tricia |
| Saturday 28th April 2007 20:12 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it despite missing Neville! |
ibelieveintruelove
Wednesday 18th April 2007 21:22 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds |
Poor Ginny and Lavender. I don't really like Lavender, but you wrote her really well, and I'm feeling sorry for her in this story.
Good job, it was a great read! |
| Thursday 19th April 2007 00:33 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
Aqua Fountain*
Monday 2nd April 2007 01:37 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds |
That was so sweet. Bitter-sweet though.
So has Pravati gone then? Or too busy with Dean or something? She's gone right?
I feel so much sorryer(if that's even a word) for Lavender than for Ginny right now. You were able to put so much into a conversation with Lavender, which I think is amaizing.
Keep up the awsome work
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| Monday 2nd April 2007 02:22 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm so glad you liked Lavender. And yes, she's all alone because Parvati's gone; her parents have taken her home (only in my universe, of course). |
lacyrachil
Thursday 7th December 2006 12:57 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds |
| I truly can't believe in a world where Harry is not at Hogwarts. I think that above all - even Dumbledore's death - stunned me. I can only imagine the loneliness Ginny would feel. Heck, I can't imagine a world without new HP books either...but I suppose we soon shall find that out as well. Good writing, thanks. |
| Thursday 7th December 2006 13:07 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds (Author Response) |
I can't imagine a world without new HP books
Yep, join the club.
Thanks again; I do like to write about Ginny, so I'm glad you like to read it. |
Mira Miracle
Thursday 31st August 2006 15:15 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds |
You've done a great job with the girls' characterization. I love how you lead Ginny through different waves of emotions - from annoyance to understanding - and let her overcome her prejudices towards Lavender. Lavender is very nicely done, too, you've managed to give her a personality beneath all her girly stuff. Poor girls! I just hope that they'll be able to give each other some comfort.
They should form a companionship of left-behinds, Ginny thought. C.O.L.B sounded rather good, didn't it?
You've done a great job with this fic. Instead of focusing on the Horcruxes, you lead your readers into the mind of the left-behinds. This is pretty unique and really wonderful. |
| Thursday 31st August 2006 15:37 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds (Author Response) |
Ooh... A review for my old little story! Thanks a lot. Funny, I like this one better than the others and it gets fewer reviews... I think I told you, I'm more of a reader than a writer.
I'm trying to write a bit of a follow-up though. Trying, because it's been ages since I started. |
itsme07863
Saturday 12th August 2006 11:27 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds |
| likedd it alot. good job |
| Sunday 13th August 2006 08:00 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you took a look at my other stories, too! Thanks for the review. |
Delfino
Friday 5th May 2006 14:28 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds |
| Aww, what a sweet ending. You did really well on capturing Ginny's personality. The C.O.L.B. part cracked me up . My favorite part was that little stray piece of intelligence about Harry from Lavender. Great job. I really liked this. |
| Friday 5th May 2006 23:14 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds (Author Response) |
| Glad you liked it! |
occlumens
Friday 5th May 2006 11:40 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds |
| Very sweet. I think you did a good job with the characterization of Lavender. There have to be some of those types of girls in the magical world too, don't there? |
| Friday 5th May 2006 23:13 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds (Author Response) |
| Oh yes. I had fun modelling her after some peole I know... |
Jacynthe
Friday 5th May 2006 09:28 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds |
| Very nicely done. It seems to me you got both of them just right in their quiet self-absorbed despair -- especially the much-maligned Lavender, poor thing. It's really quite touching to see her shyly and awkwardrly reaching out for a new friend. The under-stated ending struck just the right tone. |
| Friday 5th May 2006 23:12 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds (Author Response) |
| Yes, poor Lavender... Thanks for the review! |
Ladybug
Friday 5th May 2006 02:33 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds |
Oh, again I have to say - poor Ginny. I can really sympathise here with her loneliness. The conversation between them was wonderfully written - very insightful, I think, into both Ginny and Lavender's characters. Ginny moves from indifference to annoyance to anger to surprise, I think, and finally to understanding, of sorts. I love how Ginny kept stopping herself from dwelling on Harry and is trying to make the best of a bad situation. And I really feel for Lavender. I think you've fleshed out her character really well - she has real depth under her airheadedness. Love it!
This line just stabbed me in the heart: Ginny's plate looked like battlefield. Lovely story, Evelyn. |
| Friday 5th May 2006 08:10 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds (Author Response) |
I'm so relieved to hear that Lavender sounded understandable, even likable. I was afraid she was a bit too jumpy...
Thank you |
honourary_weasley
Friday 5th May 2006 00:34 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds |
that was so sweet, and you captured Ginny very nicely. well done!
forever |
| Friday 5th May 2006 08:08 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds (Author Response) |
| Thanks a lot. I'd love to add a Lavender smilie, but there doesn't seem to be one... |
parakletos
Thursday 4th May 2006 14:17 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds |
| I enjoyed this a lot; I thought the tone was just right. It was nice to see Lav Lav with some depth. Thank you. |
| Friday 5th May 2006 08:05 | A Companionship of Left-Behinds (Author Response) |
| Thank you. I'm glad you liked it, especially Lavender. |
