potterlovesginny Monday 9th March 2009 12:54 | One Last Time |
Really nice story! i agree with all the original readers that a happy ending was needed, and I now feel all warm and fuzzy now. I also liked the way you portrayed Ginny's character in the first chapter. In most fics, Ginny gets really angry at Harry, and/or tries to follow him, and basically doesn't accept his decision. i don't know why they all just change Ginny from acceptance at the end of HBP, that's how JKR meant her to react. Anyway i liked the way you made her so understanding. |
gymnastgal19 Tuesday 25th March 2008 13:19 | One Last Time |
aww ww ww!!! cute ending
although i thought that harry said that he didnt want anyone to know... not just yet anyway...
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majolie Thursday 3rd January 2008 20:52 | One Last Time |
Thanks - I needed the happy ending. |
pyromain Sunday 25th November 2007 06:59 | One Last Time |
This story was originally only the first chapter, but after someone's pleas that I show the happy ending, I complied. (I'm a sucker for happy endings.) Anyway, I hope you liked it. Thanks for reading!
And I loved it so I must thank you for both chapters. |
Novera Tuesday 13th June 2006 15:20 | One Last Time |
awww. soo soo sweet, i love it
every one should read it |
Wednesday 21st June 2006 10:41 | One Last Time (Author Response) |
Thank you! |
Evelyn Sunday 11th June 2006 04:47 | One Last Time |
Huh? I haven't reviewed this yet? I read this again today (see, it's a good story) and I noticed I hadn't told you how much I liked it!
So here it is. I loved it.
The song in the first chapter sets a beautifully quiet atmosphere. It fits very well with the short scenes. Really lovely.
Aaand the second chapter... I think the first chapter was already excellent, it could stand alone. But the second was just too sweet... It put a big smile on my face. Thank you! |
Wednesday 21st June 2006 10:41 | One Last Time (Author Response) |
Thank you very much!
I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I'm also happy you picked up on the quiet atmosphere. I think H/G right now is very sad, but in a quiet, bittersweet kind of way. We'll just have to wait and see if it changes at all in book 7. |
Connor Landon Tuesday 6th June 2006 11:44 | One Last Time |
Oh, this was so beautiful! Despite the fact that it is waaay too short for my liking, this is an awesome story! Both Ginny and Harry stayed very in character; I loved Ginny's stubborn determination. The way they both were acting just made me want to slap some sense into them! You did a great job explaining their actions. But they got their happy endings, which is great because if anyone deserves to live happily ever after, it is Harry Potter. Thanks for sharing with us! |
Tuesday 6th June 2006 13:16 | One Last Time (Author Response) |
Thank you!
I agree, if anyone deserves his happy ending, it's Harry. |
Ladybug Saturday 3rd June 2006 23:10 | One Last Time |
Hehe - a most satisfying ending! I love Dobby, he's a star in my book! And I'm pretty fond of McGonagall, too, in this little scene. Very nicely done. |
Monday 5th June 2006 23:55 | One Last Time (Author Response) |
Thank you!
I'm rather fond of McGonagall as well. She's one of those people who can be incredibly infuriating but who is always rather amusing when times are good. |
aschowin Saturday 3rd June 2006 18:46 | One Last Time |
It certainly was a happy ending. I enjoyed McGonagall's reaction to Voldemort's demise, and that Harry was only interested in a decent meal. Good story. |
Monday 5th June 2006 23:53 | One Last Time (Author Response) |
Thank you!
I think if I had just defeated the Dark Lord, I'd be a little impatient to get some decent food too. That, and he was particularly interested in another diner. |
Grandma Kate Saturday 3rd June 2006 09:30 | One Last Time |
Aren't we all suckers for happy endings? This is very satisfactory. |
Saturday 3rd June 2006 14:50 | One Last Time (Author Response) |
Thank you. I'm glad you like it. |
Ima Quidditch Fan Saturday 3rd June 2006 08:43 | One Last Time |
And what a wonderful happy ending it is!!! thanks |
Saturday 3rd June 2006 14:51 | One Last Time (Author Response) |
Thank you! |
LittleTom45 Saturday 3rd June 2006 02:44 | One Last Time |
Yes I did enjoy it. |
Saturday 3rd June 2006 14:51 | One Last Time (Author Response) |
Thanks. I'm glad. |
harry_ginnyphile Friday 2nd June 2006 21:02 | One Last Time |
Again, another fine chapter. I too am a complete sucker for happy endings, especially where H/G are concerned. Anytime my favourite pair are happy and together, it makes my shipper's heart go pitter-pat!!! I had a blast betaing this fic for you ... you are a talented writer. Brilliant! |
Friday 2nd June 2006 21:08 | One Last Time (Author Response) |
Thank you!
I think poor Harry deserves to have his own way for a change. He can't feel alone forever. Yay for H/G. *giggle* |
thisgrlrox Friday 2nd June 2006 12:57 | One Last Time |
I'm a sucker for happy endings too. Thanks for giving us one...although, I thought the first part could have stood alone. Well done! |
Friday 2nd June 2006 20:11 | One Last Time (Author Response) |
Thank you!
I also thought the first chapter could have stood alone. However, I do like the resolution, if only to show my optimism for the end of the series. |