Clare
Tuesday 8th December 2009 21:59 | Lost |
| Great chapter - the rita article is wonderfully cruel, the memory was excellent and what a cliffhanger at the end. |
| Tuesday 1st January 2002 05:15 | Lost (Author Response) |
| oh rita is so much fun to write |
blue_and_white_witch
Sunday 31st August 2008 08:07 | Lost |
| Okay Frankie needs to tell Harry straight away and someone needs to step on that evil little bug Rita and make sure that she has died before they lift their foot back up. |
| Tuesday 2nd September 2008 05:58 | Lost (Author Response) |
| Yes a painful death for Rita would be nice. |
gymnastgal19
Thursday 14th February 2008 15:51 | Lost |
huh... so i guess that harry remembers that he is harry... yeah that sure as heck would have to be approached the right way otherwise your in trouble lol
uh oh... im thinking that she's gonna be upset cause she knows that she wont stand a cahnce with "jack" anymore...
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| Saturday 16th February 2008 03:50 | Lost (Author Response) |
| I don't think she ever felt that way about Harry |
brown_eyes
Tuesday 10th April 2007 09:04 | Lost |
| This is one of the best if not the best post war stories there is for any pairing. It is that good and amazing it has not got more recoginotion. As for the chater itself, there is more discovered, Harry knows he is a Harry, Frankie knows, and Rita is up to her old games. Once again the chapter is emotion filled, with beautiful imagery, the plot is progressing crispy and the characterisation is second to none. Keep up the exceptional work! |
| Wednesday 11th April 2007 09:08 | Lost (Author Response) |
This is one of the best if not the best post war stories there is for any pairing.
Thank you so much. |
Patches
Friday 23rd February 2007 03:53 | Lost |
| Ok. Frankie know who Harry is. He believes he is Harry and that he remembers a red haired girl. Why is Frankie putting him off? Something doesn't sound right. p |
| Saturday 24th February 2007 03:44 | Lost (Author Response) |
| Your right, something isn't right at camp. |
Wooster
Friday 9th June 2006 01:56 | Lost |
All members of the press should DIE.
Except Rita Skeeter. She should be tortured slowly and made to live in total agony for the rest of her years. Evil, evil little bug.
Ok. Now that I've vented: Great chapter, great story, update soon 'cause we're on the verge of something exciting now! |
| Sunday 11th June 2006 16:25 | Lost (Author Response) |
All members of the press should DIE.
Except Rita Skeeter. She should be tortured slowly and made to live in total agony for the rest of her years. Evil, evil little bug.
I can't argue with that.
update soon
The small problem is that, as the world cup has started my productive levels may not be as good. |
HPfanatic378
Tuesday 6th June 2006 18:54 | Lost |
| What a good chapter! What a horrible cliffie! Update soon, please! Your story is so good. |
| Monday 19th June 2006 15:23 | Lost (Author Response) |
| Update is coming soon I promise. |
thisgrlrox
Monday 5th June 2006 22:31 | Lost |
| Oh Come On! Why did you have to end it there? I was biting my nails while reading this. So now Frankie knows he's Harry...what is she going to do? I can't tell if she's a good friend or has some alterior motive. Ugh! Please update soon so that I don't go nuts. Thanks. |
| Tuesday 6th June 2006 13:41 | Lost (Author Response) |
So now Frankie knows he's Harry...what is she going to do? I can't tell if she's a good friend or has some alterior motive. Ugh!
All will be releaved soon, but clues about character's personalities already litter the piece. |
WatcherOfTheSkies
Monday 5th June 2006 18:39 | Lost |
| Kathryn, i'm usually more of a lurker, but I had to respond to this story. I want my Chapter 5 (and 6 and 7...). |
| Tuesday 6th June 2006 13:39 | Lost (Author Response) |
I'm honoured I've got you to come out of your lucking status. Thank you for such kind words.
Chapter five will be up fairly soon, its in the first stage of pre-betaing at the moment. |
harryheartsbeeve
Monday 5th June 2006 14:00 | Lost |
| Hey, i didnt start reading this story till a little bit in, at first i thought it was one of those stories that dont have any of the main characters in it, and then I realized this is phoenixsong, it cant be all made up characters, and I'm glad I started reading it. I love the story so far, keep it up |
| Tuesday 6th June 2006 13:38 | Lost (Author Response) |
This story has its several original character, but I'd say there are just as many canon ones involved. With quite a lot of Harry Ginny fluff and heartbreak left to come.
I'm glad you decided to give the piece a read though and am even more pleased that you are enjoying it. |
timbers
Monday 5th June 2006 13:19 | Lost |
Rats! I was supposed to be the first reviewer!
In any case, I think this is progressing really well. There are quite a few conflicts developing, looking forward to seeing how they're resolved |
| Tuesday 6th June 2006 13:35 | Lost (Author Response) |
Rats! I was supposed to be the first reviewer!
I know, this slow review is just shocking, what will I do with you. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Monday 5th June 2006 12:43 | Lost |
| Well. Now that Harry knows he's Harry, When is everone else going to find out. And I wonder how they are going to react. But also, Harry knows he is Harry, but what he dosn't know is that he is Harry Potter, so I wonder how he is going to react when he learns that bit. |
| Tuesday 6th June 2006 13:34 | Lost (Author Response) |
| Well its a start isn't it. As for the reaction, well, my mum always told me that the best things come to those who wait. |
paladin
Monday 5th June 2006 11:20 | Lost |
Brilliant effort!
I liked the way you built up the frustration in Harry/Jack as he became incensed with Rita's latest diatribe on him or one of his friends. The fact that he couldn't explain it was a great depiction of how our subconscious can react to things that we aren't consciously aware of.
The confrontation with yet another Slytherin mongrel gave a great quality to this fic but you really did a spledid job with the memory scene. Some thing of serious substance for his gray-matter to chew on.
You left the edge in the story with a great cliffhanger of an ending to the chapter with the foreknowledge of many hurt feelings to come. Of course, some very wonderful feelings as well, yeah?
~Cheers! |
| Monday 5th June 2006 12:24 | Lost (Author Response) |
Brilliant effort!
Thank you. You are very bad for my ego. But thank you.
I liked the way you built up the frustration in Harry/Jack as he became incensed with Rita's latest diatribe on him or one of his friends. The fact that he couldn't explain it was a great depiction of how our subconscious can react to things that we aren't consciously aware of.
Cheers, and its not the last time you will see Harry's reaction to Rita.
Slytherin mongrel
He's an interesting character.
a spledid job with the memory scene. Some thing of serious substance for his gray-matter to chew on.
He's slowly getting there.
You left the edge in the story with a great cliffhanger of an ending to the chapter with the foreknowledge of many hurt feelings to come.
True more than one character is going to be hurting in the not to distant future. |
Curren
Monday 5th June 2006 10:23 | Lost |
| i had to reread it twice to fully get it, it was confusing that you didn't put the flashback in italics... great chapter on the whole though, can't wait for the next update |
| Monday 5th June 2006 12:19 | Lost (Author Response) |
it was confusing that you didn't put the flashback in italics
the flashback and newspaper was intially in italics but something went wrong in the upload, but my beta has promised to look at it when she gets in from work.
great chapter on the whole though, can't wait for the next update
thank you |
Curren
Monday 5th June 2006 10:23 | Lost |
| i had to reread it twice to fully get it, it was confusing that you didn't put the flashback in italics... great chapter on the whole though, can't wait for the next update |
Jorgie
Monday 5th June 2006 09:57 | Lost |
| Hey! you cant leave us there! ok you can but it isnt very nice. Great chapter we eggerly look forward to the next. |
| Monday 5th June 2006 12:17 | Lost (Author Response) |
Hey! you cant leave us there! ok you can but it isnt very nice
I've never claimed to being a nice person. |
valeriean
Monday 5th June 2006 00:53 | Lost |
Tch! I really hate cliffhangers! Darn that Frankie! It was so obvious to me that she figured it out. Why can't Harry remember? Surely he must have heard of the many stories of Harry Potter and his famous lightning bolt shaped scar on his forehead? Exactly like the third scar on his face? Urgh!!
Well, anyway, I'm hoping that Ginny and Harry meet in the next chapter. The hopeless romantic in me thinks that Ginny will walk in the tent and see Harry. And poof! Harry will instantly recognize her as the woman from his memories. Yey!!
Update soon!! |
| Monday 5th June 2006 12:16 | Lost (Author Response) |
Why can't Harry remember? Surely he must have heard of the many stories of Harry Potter and his famous lightning bolt shaped scar on his forehead? Exactly like the third scar on his face?
Well his scar is no longer a lighting bolt, instead its kinda routed to split his face with cuts.
Also who would imagine they are Harry Potter? You'd never dream you were that famous.
The hopeless romantic in me thinks that Ginny will walk in the tent and see Harry. And poof! Harry will instantly recognize her as the woman from his memories. Yey!!
I'm a hopeless romantic too, but its not going to be that easy.
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juliet
Monday 5th June 2006 00:49 | Lost |
| This is cruelty in its most wicked form. I love this story and am very much looking forward to the next updated chapter. It was a good release of the tension to have some form of recognition on Harry's part, and I am very interested to know what Frankie is up to. |
| Monday 5th June 2006 12:13 | Lost (Author Response) |
This is cruelty in its most wicked form.
evil laugh
It was a good release of the tension to have some form of recognition on Harry's part,
I thought it was about time he had some.
I am very interested to know what Frankie is up to.
You'll find out soon, promise. |
Trelawney2213
Sunday 4th June 2006 22:36 | Lost |
| Excellent ending. Jack's confusion radiates off the page. |
| Monday 5th June 2006 12:11 | Lost (Author Response) |
| Cheers mate |
