majolie
Wednesday 2nd January 2008 14:12 | The Cloak |
| Wow - interesting perspective. |
Evelyn
Sunday 18th June 2006 09:30 | The Cloak |
Very interesting. The cloak idea is already very good, but the whole perspective adds to it. It's a creepy feeling to have that rat watch everything. I think I'll have to read the first two books again just to see when Petztigrew may have been observing Harry...
Well done!
The only thing I wondered about was this: occasionally helping by invisibly levitating the crate containing the fast growing dragon Do you really think that an animagus in his animal form can do magic? |
Ladybug
Saturday 17th June 2006 22:48 | The Cloak |
| How intriguing and what an imaginative explanation! There were a few moments that left me a bit confused (because I don't have Philosopher's Stone memorised and I had to rack my brains thinking what a comment was referring to), but on the whole it's very cleverly and teasingly put together. It raises more questions than it answers, actually. |
critmo
Thursday 15th June 2006 09:41 | The Cloak |
| Interesting. Needs a little more explanation, though. |
cckeimig
Wednesday 14th June 2006 21:05 | The Cloak |
| Interesting take on things. But I'm not sure it works for me--why would he help Harry and still be looking out for how to help Voldie come back?? |
| Thursday 15th June 2006 00:35 | The Cloak (Author Response) |
Well, why would Dumbledore give him the cloak and allow 1st year Harry to face Qurirellmort?
Peter's got to keep his head down - if he knows Voldemort is coming back, he's got a problem because he'll be found out. I'm sure he had a fairly comfortable life at the Weasley's. Nobody, for example, fed him to an owl.
Keeping Voldemort gone is in Peter's best interest, IMNSHO.
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Hank
Wednesday 14th June 2006 14:06 | The Cloak |
| Wow. That was creepy... I've got chills running down my spine. Excellent job. I loved the storyline and the viewpoint. Very original, too. Still creeps me out, though... Thanks for sharing! |
| Thursday 15th June 2006 00:32 | The Cloak (Author Response) |
Why thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
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Mullvaney
Wednesday 14th June 2006 11:24 | The Cloak |
| Ooooo, very good! I'd always thought that Dumbledore had had the cloak, but this makes much more sense. i like the way you led us around, I thought at first that the "mystery charhacter" was Lupin. Very clever, good job! |
| Thursday 15th June 2006 00:31 | The Cloak (Author Response) |
Actually, Dumbledore *did* have the cloak. This story came out of a plot bunny that resulted form me *missing that rather important tidbit*, and so I was trying to figure out who had motive, means and opportunity to give Harry the cloak.
But I'm glad you liked the story!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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