LtsHrIt4ThBoyz
Monday 12th February 2018 11:58 | An Unexpected Visitor |
Hmm...Uh...Ok. So, I'm brand new to this site and just discovered this story. I'm always late to any party (ADHD), but I still thought you might enjoy knowing that there are still readers, out here, continuing to enjoy your story...and I did enjoy this story; even if it is way too short for such an evocative and well done piece!
I've always felt that, if anyone should have noticed the signs of an abused child, it was Severus. Of course, I also feel that if the gigantic Fashion Mistake relayed the conditions of Harry's home life to Sev and was still intent on returning him to that same environment, then the old whiskered wanker should be brought up on charges of Criminal Neglect and Aiding and Abetting in the past Abuse of a Child and Conspiracy and Collusion to Cause Further Harm to a Minor, but that's just my opinion.
I quite enjoyed your tale: Thank You!
MelJ |
sbmcneil
Wednesday 1st February 2017 15:41 | An Unexpected Visitor |
| Very nice! |
LilacQueen
Tuesday 14th September 2010 03:00 | An Unexpected Visitor |
Well done! Personally I think this would be a great beginning to more chapters. What happens next? How does this change Severus? In what way? His relationship with harry could change? How? Would his teaching change?
All of these questions and a few others come to mind. Naturally all these changes would not happen at once but this is the beginning of summer. Severus has a lot of time to think. |
majolie
Thursday 3rd January 2008 11:50 | An Unexpected Visitor |
| Great story. I always like to see Snape's inner conflict. |
Aqua Fountain*
Monday 7th May 2007 05:14 | An Unexpected Visitor |
I really thought I already reveiwed this . . . well, anyway:
BRILLIANT I mean, it's so short but it's BRILLIANT. Snape is so human here. It's just BRILLIANT
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cckeimig
Friday 5th January 2007 23:13 | An Unexpected Visitor |
| Oooh, I like it! Very well done. |
Astrid
Thursday 6th July 2006 21:39 | An Unexpected Visitor |
| , this is deep. Good work. |
Wooster
Thursday 29th June 2006 07:43 | An Unexpected Visitor |
| Oooh...that was really interesting. Great little one-shot. |
| Friday 30th June 2006 09:54 | An Unexpected Visitor (Author Response) |
| Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked it. |
shadowknight133000
Saturday 24th June 2006 16:43 | An Unexpected Visitor |
| Very nice. i liked how you wrote this. it seemed to me like something that most people would have had trouble with expressing. bravo. |
| Friday 30th June 2006 10:00 | An Unexpected Visitor (Author Response) |
| thanks for reading and the generous review. I'm glad you liked it. |
GryffindorDragon
Thursday 22nd June 2006 06:59 | An Unexpected Visitor |
| Too bad something like this didn't really happen to change Snape's bad attitude toward Harry. Maybe the story would have come out differently . . . at least maybe Harry wouldn't have hated potions so much |
| Friday 30th June 2006 09:57 | An Unexpected Visitor (Author Response) |
| Or atthe very least it would be harder for Snape to convince himself Harry is just like James. Thanks for reviewing. |
Melian
Sunday 18th June 2006 16:11 | An Unexpected Visitor |
| Fantastic! I really enjoyed this story. Thank you! |
| Tuesday 20th June 2006 15:57 | An Unexpected Visitor (Author Response) |
| glad to hear you enjoyed it. thanks for taking the time to review. |
Shadow Hider
Saturday 17th June 2006 23:00 | An Unexpected Visitor |
| very nice |
| Tuesday 20th June 2006 15:57 | An Unexpected Visitor (Author Response) |
| thanks for reading and reviewing |
critmo
Saturday 17th June 2006 09:51 | An Unexpected Visitor |
| I don't really believe you, but it's an amusing idea, nevertheless. |
| Tuesday 20th June 2006 15:57 | An Unexpected Visitor (Author Response) |
| I appreciate the criticism. Thanks for your honesty and for reading and reviewing. |
occlumens
Friday 16th June 2006 16:23 | An Unexpected Visitor |
| Awwww. I love it! I don't think that there will ever be an understanding quite as powerful now, but I still hold onto that small bit of hope that they will understand each other a little better by the end. |
| Tuesday 20th June 2006 15:55 | An Unexpected Visitor (Author Response) |
| definately hoping from this end too. thanks for reading and reviewing. |
angelmorph
Friday 16th June 2006 14:00 | An Unexpected Visitor |
| I really liked this snapshot. Too bad Harry wasn't actually brave enough to have this conversation. Keep up the good work... |
| Tuesday 20th June 2006 15:54 | An Unexpected Visitor (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review. I still have hope for Harry...we'll see! |
ohboehm
Friday 16th June 2006 09:30 | An Unexpected Visitor |
Dear Enero,
I enjoyed your story; it is an intriguing "What if...." I value stories that demonstrate that there is an openness to good, a possibility of hope, for everyone. Snape's reaction here is only a 'baby step' as yet--which could lead to an AU (Big Time!)--but that is how we shape our lives: one action at a time.
Thank you for your story!
Owen (ohboehm@aol.com) |
| Tuesday 20th June 2006 15:51 | An Unexpected Visitor (Author Response) |
| Thanks so much for your review. I'm still keeping this concept in mind and we'll see if anything comes of it. |
thisgrlrox
Friday 16th June 2006 08:28 | An Unexpected Visitor |
| What an interesting tale. I really enjoyed it. Things may have been different had that really happened. You have a very easy writing style and I enjoyed this little story very much. Way to go! |
| Tuesday 20th June 2006 15:49 | An Unexpected Visitor (Author Response) |
| I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I love reading reviews so thanks so much for leaving yours and for reading. |
Curren
Friday 16th June 2006 04:20 | An Unexpected Visitor |
| harry is being way too mature is this snapshot... but still, on the whole it's a nice piece |
| Tuesday 20th June 2006 15:07 | An Unexpected Visitor (Author Response) |
| I appreciate you sharing your thoughts. Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
juliet
Friday 16th June 2006 02:50 | An Unexpected Visitor |
| I really enjoyed this - it would be very Harry to do something like that. And Snape would hate it! |
| Tuesday 20th June 2006 15:05 | An Unexpected Visitor (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
