gymnastgal19
Sunday 14th October 2007 15:15 | A Golden Day |
| wow! interesting! nice way to connect the way harry feels now to how he felt in the fifth year! |
crazyredhead
Tuesday 1st August 2006 10:58 | A Golden Day |
this is very good i like it alot but what happen ok back to reading
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daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 27th June 2006 15:32 | A Golden Day |
| What do you mean he felt nothing more? |
Shadow Hider
Wednesday 21st June 2006 23:29 | A Golden Day |
| this is a great start, I can't wait to read more |
harry_ginnyphile
Wednesday 21st June 2006 11:44 | A Golden Day |
| What an awesome prologue! You've really drawn me in, can't wait to read the rest of the story! I've already added you to my author update list ... brilliant! |
jessy
Wednesday 21st June 2006 10:32 | A Golden Day |
oh sorry! i thought this was a completed one!
sorry again!
hurry up 4 the next
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jessy
Wednesday 21st June 2006 10:27 | A Golden Day |
| bloody hell! u killed our hero!: |
Milygo
Wednesday 21st June 2006 08:17 | A Golden Day |
| That was a really good first chapter. It really drew me in. I can't wait to read more. |
thisgrlrox
Tuesday 20th June 2006 20:19 | A Golden Day |
| What an intense chapter! I hope eveyone is allright. Ron's goodbye sounded kind of final which makes me cringe. Nicely written chapter. I'm looking forward to reading more. |
Kalarien
Tuesday 20th June 2006 19:00 | A Golden Day |
| Thanks! The next bit should be coming soon, so keep an eye out! |
hwimsey
Tuesday 20th June 2006 18:55 | A Golden Day |
I really enjoyed this chapter. You write action incredibly well. Quotes I loved:
the mouth stretched open beyond the limits of the jaw
Just like now, stuck, imprisoned by a body that wouldn’t work, helpless, helpless, helpless...
His lungs felt like fire.
Ah, what happens next? Update soon, I'm sure this is going to continue to be a great story.
Thanks again for the awesome writing.
hwimsey
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| Thursday 22nd June 2006 17:20 | A Golden Day (Author Response) |
| I would be remiss if I didn't give musings, my beta, credit for that last one--she added it to help a last minute change to be a little more believable. But I will take credit for the others! Thanks! |
Aniubis
Tuesday 20th June 2006 18:40 | A Golden Day |
| Very nice opener. Can't wait for the next. |
