101HP
Thursday 17th February 2011 15:30 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
Hi i have just started to read your story and i think im going to enjoy it
i do have one critizm though i have noticed that you write in a more of it comes to mind so i will write it down, not a properly thought out sentance, but i love any story that involves harry's parents |
| Thursday 17th February 2011 17:04 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate (Author Response) |
| Thanks so much for your review. My only excuse for that is that this was written about three years ago when I was just starting to write stories. I hope it will look better as you read on and the sequel. |
nightwing
Saturday 13th September 2008 18:58 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
| man this story is getting good I love it when harry's parents are alive always like reading stories like this even the ones that harry goes back in time and change historys |
Prongs739
Tuesday 5th August 2008 13:18 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
| That was an excellent introduction. I wonder who u are. |
| Wednesday 6th August 2008 16:46 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate (Author Response) |
| Thanks for this review. Check my profile. |
SpellBound
Monday 3rd December 2007 00:59 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
hmm still a little forced, and having to manuever so that harry finds the same things out in this story as in the other even though circumstances are drastically different seems hard. good luck with it. It's not all going to go exactly like the stories is it?
sherellyn |
harry fanatic
Thursday 1st March 2007 14:11 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
| i luv it! just seeing Harry and Ron inn a new perspective is awsom. great job. |
lacyrachil
Monday 18th December 2006 06:57 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
| This chapter goes much more indepth than you prologue and it makes it better for it. I really do like this idea and can't wait to see the differences as you write them. Be careful though - there are times that you switch between American writing and British writing. I can't wait to read more. |
Wooster
Saturday 29th July 2006 23:44 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
Hagrid seemed to frown, from the movement of his beard. "Never you mind, Harry. That's official Hogwarts business. Can't tell you I was at Gringotts today on an errand for Dumbledore. Oops, I shouldn't have said that. Come along now, best move on."
The more things change, the more they stay the same, eh? I really liked the way you still managed to incorporate the clues without their original introduction. All your changes are very believable...good job! |
crazyredhead
Thursday 27th July 2006 00:17 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
| omg harry is so cute. i like this so much haveing his parents alive and rose seems like fun. i cant wait for more |
GryffindorDragon
Friday 21st July 2006 11:28 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
| I thought it was nice to give Rose Mom's hair and Dad's eyes since Harry has Dad's hair and Mom's eyes. Nice to see Harry in keeping with canon character. I'd rather not see him strutting from the press. . . . Ahh, so you're going to follow canon plot with the Sorcerer's stone hidden at Hogwarts |
| Friday 21st July 2006 20:09 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate (Author Response) |
| I wanted Rose to be similar to Ginny in appearance, at least in the beginning. I also decided that Lily would not allow her son to become as arrogant as his father was. Thanks for your review. |
Bookworm
Tuesday 18th July 2006 08:16 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
| great chapter! |
WhiteWitch
Sunday 9th July 2006 16:01 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
"Charmed," Hermione said, but she didn't offer her hand to be shaken.
--What a prat!
Also- I'm glad that he didn't get put in Slytherin like so many other "Harry's parents lived" fics.
One more thing- I think that you should elaborate more on things such as the Sorting and feast. |
Believer
Saturday 8th July 2006 13:46 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
Firstly... why did Draco make that comment about the Weasleys being an 'upstart' family? I thought the Weasley family also came from old blood? Is this different for your story?
I like how everything is happening like in the book, but better because everyone is alive. lol. I don't know if that made a lot of sense. But it was suppose to be a compliment. I especially like how you gave the Weasleys more money and a stable income. I hated how Draco would always make fun of Ron's ill fortune of having less money than others.
I was wondering if you were going to put Hermione in this story. Maybe and will realise their feelings sooner this time around. Actually, before you had introduced Hermione I thought that Ron would end up with Harry's sister Rose and Harry would end up with Ginny. Guess that theory is squashed.
I wonder if Percy will still be all proper and uptight? Oh well... enough with the questions and this ridiculously long comment. Onto the next part! |
| Monday 10th July 2006 09:38 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate (Author Response) |
| Well, the Weasleys are purebloods but not an ancient line, which I think the Potters and Malfoys are. I'm trying to follow canon a bit in the ships, at least with and and with and . Of course, the way those happen will be part of the story. Thanks for the review. |
mary-v
Sunday 2nd July 2006 10:55 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
| I really enjoyed this chapter! There wasn;t much rushing at all, except near the end a bit, but it was a brilliant chapter! Nicely written! |
daniel_r_crazy22
Saturday 1st July 2006 20:43 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
| Wow. That was really good. And 45 chapters currently written. This is going to be long, but I hope it will be good. Keep it up. |
| Sunday 2nd July 2006 07:26 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate (Author Response) |
| Thanks for your nice review. I'm already up to chapter 50. The chapters will come up as my beta goes through them. |
