nightwing
Saturday 13th September 2008 19:19 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
| I worder how harry handle being married to ginny with her tember |
Prongs739
Tuesday 5th August 2008 13:55 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
Very interesting! Very interesting!
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ImmortalPhoenix
Saturday 27th January 2007 16:16 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
This was definitely interesting. Not really much to comment on here either. Great balance with detail again. I like how you're having that whole thing with Ron and Ginny.
Great chapter.
Immortal Phoenix |
lacyrachil
Monday 18th December 2006 07:47 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
| I do like the way Harry found out about Flamel but the whole story still feels a little rushed. I think maybe you just need to be a little more descriptive. You were fairly straight forward in describing Potter Manor but I'd like to have heard about the Christmas dinner and what they ate, the conversations they had, etc. I really do like this concept and can see it morphing into something really interesting. |
Wooster
Wednesday 2nd August 2006 10:08 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
I love how you've depicted Harry's home life. It fits how I imagine his life would've been perfectly, down to his collecting chocolate frog cards and spending time in his mother's library.
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crazyredhead
Thursday 27th July 2006 00:57 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
| lol this is very good i like the sister and the james you should have lily's sister come over some time i know they wont but just have them in it |
GryffindorDragon
Friday 21st July 2006 12:20 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
Ugh, did you have to bring the Dursleys in . Oh well, I guess it was unavoidable. Nice touch with Lily's reminiscing about how Petunia would treat the kids and Sirius in the will -- "She couldn't imagine any reason for that wish not to be followed" -- Oh, only Sirius in Azkaban thought to be responsible for her and James' deaths.
So you worked in the invisibility cloak. Better done, I think, was Ginny's Bat-Bogey-Hex accidental magic
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| Friday 21st July 2006 20:14 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate (Author Response) |
| Well, I had to mention the Dursleys a bit. Someone may wonder later on what happened to them in my story. Thanks for the review again. |
Bookworm
Tuesday 18th July 2006 09:22 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
| Still a lil rushed, but better than the last chapter. |
Believer
Saturday 8th July 2006 14:37 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
No Dursley's in this story? Hmm... it would have been nice if Harry and Dudley got along. If Harry's got the cloak now, where is the map?
I wonder if Ginny is "in like" with Harry yet?
on the awesome part.... and I'm onto the next! |
| Monday 10th July 2006 09:40 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate (Author Response) |
| You'll find out where the map is in Harry's next year. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Wednesday 5th July 2006 11:08 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate |
| I love how you kepted everything just changed. Or "twisted" it. lol |
| Wednesday 5th July 2006 17:20 | Harry Potter and the Twists of Fate (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review. I try to keep it partly in canon but changed in a way I think it would have happened if James and Lily were alive and had more children. |
