Dad
Saturday 20th March 2010 09:49 | Touched |
| Different, but excellent. |
Thorn
Tuesday 9th December 2008 14:08 | Touched |
| i don't really get it it's so chopy but I think the idea is good |
QuidditchLover
Sunday 11th November 2007 12:55 | Touched |
| i thought it was her being pregnant at first but then i started thinking that she was dying. clever, real clever. emilygail0323@aol.com |
gymnastgal19
Saturday 27th October 2007 14:01 | Touched |
Awww!!! I loved this!!! I thought that hermonie might be sick at first or something... but then i figured that everyone would be a little more worried lol
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twinsmom
Saturday 23rd June 2007 20:06 | Touched |
| Just a bit hard to read at first. But, I caught on fairly quick and loved it. |
Uzamaki-girl
Saturday 16th September 2006 18:14 | Touched |
| Great story. I could see how Ginny might feel that way. I listened to "New Resolution" by Azure Ray while reading this.^^ |
sonicdale
Wednesday 9th August 2006 02:20 | Touched |
Misdirection.
Sneakiness.
Confusance.
Okay, so I make up the last one.
About 2 paragraphs into this, I hand an inkling.
Halfway through was a strong hunch.
But the payoff was very well buried.
I don't see Harry and Ginny being all smiles and fun. They're passionate people - and you've depicted them nicely.
Good work. |
sonicdale
Wednesday 9th August 2006 02:20 | Touched |
Misdirection.
Sneakiness.
Confusance.
Okay, so I make up the last one.
About 2 paragraphs into this, I hand an inkling.
Halfway through was a strong hunch.
But the payoff was very well buried.
I don't see Harry and Ginny being all smiles and fun. They're passionate people - and you've depicted them nicely.
Good work. |
EmeraldPrincess
Tuesday 1st August 2006 15:14 | Touched |
I loved this, I loved this fic so much.
Poor Luna, and everyone else...
*sniff* It was great !! |
GryffindorDragon
Tuesday 25th July 2006 09:22 | Touched |
Nice story . . . though a bit confusing with the back and forth, hard to get a sequence in mind, but maybe you intended it that way. I certainly don't think that Harry would end up with a groupie and take so long to get together with Ginny. And what is a Mother's and Childrens' day?
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Ladybug
Monday 24th July 2006 02:32 | Touched |
| I really, really love this story. I read it when it was first posted and it lodged itself in the back of my mind and has been haunting me ever since. What's so clever about how you've written it is how every re-reading brings you a little closer to finding out how the story happens, although I don't think the reader needs to have it all worked out to fully appreciate it. I loved it the first time and I've now read it several times and it gets better every time. Outstanding writing, congratulations. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Sunday 23rd July 2006 21:05 | Touched |
| I liked it. And I like how it in a way went back and forth. Very good. |
SillyGillie
Sunday 16th July 2006 20:41 | Touched |
| Haha. And hear you had me worrying that Hermione was slowly dying. Nice little twist there at the end. |
meddymo
Wednesday 12th July 2006 21:02 | Touched |
| After having read a recent story of the week in which Hermione was dying, I had it in my head right up to the very end that that's where you were going with this one too. Nice job of hinting but not giving too much away. The episodic nature of the piece, though I know it was intentional, was a little difficult to follow at ttimes, but that did in some ways add to the effect of not knowing exactly what was occuring. All around a well written story. |
EJH0904
Wednesday 12th July 2006 17:56 | Touched |
| Slowly, slowly building towards a reunification of H/G... I liked this a lot; it had happiness, sadness, anger, hope, despair, and love all wrapped into rampant package. Nicely done! |
harry_ginnyphile
Wednesday 12th July 2006 17:39 | Touched |
| It took me a little bit to get the hang of the disjointed scenes, but once I did ... I fell in love with it! What a great fic, a terrific balance of R/Hr and H/G ... especially with the friendships in between. Loved it! |
jeanne
Wednesday 12th July 2006 08:12 | Touched |
| You are goooood!! To the very end, I thought that Hermione was getting updates on her chances of conceiving. But she was pregnant. Yes, you are gooood!!! And this fic was good. |
