JestrBob Sunday 8th November 2009 19:54 | Harry Potter: Metamorphosis |
Still active story, nice plot line. |
bjzl Wednesday 4th October 2006 22:37 | Harry Potter: Metamorphosis |
will you write soon. I can't wait for the next chapter. So please write it soon. |
Believer Wednesday 16th August 2006 17:56 | Harry Potter: Metamorphosis |
That was a great chapter! I love the presents that Harry got from Sirius... I want a motorcycle! Ron is so cute with his glares to Ginny... wary that she might take his best friend away from him . I can't wait till the next update. |
GryffindorDragon Tuesday 8th August 2006 18:10 | Harry Potter: Metamorphosis |
Interesting dreams, especially the scene with Sirius; but the part about the dueling with Harry ending up being stunned -- was that a flashback to his captivity? Sirius is quite a riot -- Fudge's reelection campaign Now I hope you're planning on doing anything with Slytherin (deatheater) girls giving Harry love potion. Nice gifts for Harry. Now he had better take Ginny for that ride .
more soon |
daniel_r_crazy22 Thursday 3rd August 2006 18:41 | Harry Potter: Metamorphosis |
I love the bike. And the book. Can't wait to see Harry's reaction when he reads the more 'detailed' parts. Very good. |
willow Thursday 3rd August 2006 14:58 | Harry Potter: Metamorphosis |
Fantastic chapter- bitterweet and funny! loved it all, from the dreams to 'the talk' to the bike.
my favourite quote is definitely
many enamoured witches may throw themselves at you." He gave Harry a sly look then, "It is up to you whether you catch any of them or not
*chuckles*
V. much looking forward to the next chapter!! |
crazyredhead Thursday 3rd August 2006 14:16 | Harry Potter: Metamorphosis |
i liked this so much i like the talk he had. And his birthday presents and Sirius prank very good. and i was upset for a second i thought Sirius was back oh well i cant wait for school to start for them. and have harry ride the motorcycle around school most likly not. hey please update soon |
Wooster Thursday 3rd August 2006 13:20 | Harry Potter: Metamorphosis |
Excellent! This is so awesome! Gotta love the return of the flying motorcycle. And the dream with Sirius and the part that came before it...I'm assuming that's a flashback? Or a memory? Anyways, both were really cool, and I love the idea of that book that James and Sirius put together. Finally: Yay for him asking Ginny to go riding with him. Very cute. What's with Ron though? Just the typical doesn't-want-anyone-dating-his-sister thing? I'm so psyched that you seem to be updating quickly, so PLEASE continue to do so. |