DADAGinny
Friday 8th September 2006 10:01 | Things Change |
So nice to see something of her getting more of a clue as to why he suddenly up and kissed her after the Quidditch game.
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DaFalcon
Friday 25th August 2006 22:36 | Things Change |
| This was a very nice start. Bring on the next chapter. |
Evelyn
Friday 25th August 2006 06:33 | Things Change |
| AU, yes, but somehow, it still fits into the book. You built up the fight wonderfully. I loved the contrast between the short yes-no answers and then suddenly, everything bubbling out of Harry. Well done! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
| Friday 25th August 2006 08:09 | Things Change (Author Response) |
| Yeah, Ginny produced a lot of pressure in Harry! |
Sssith
Thursday 24th August 2006 09:29 | Things Change |
| Very enjoyable. A different path for the two of them, and a welcome one at that. The HBP H/G moment was a little sudden. |
| Friday 25th August 2006 08:01 | Things Change (Author Response) |
| Glad you like it. |
Mr Tibbles
Wednesday 23rd August 2006 05:45 | Things Change |
| I don't know where to start. I came across this chapter of yours today, and since it was the first of your work I had read so far, I had to read the rest immediately. I think your work is the best of Harry Potter fanfic I have come across so far, so I had to register in order to tell you. I love your style, the dialogues, the humour but the thing I love best is the way you paint the charackters and their interaction, especially Ginny and Harry. Hopefully there will be more soon!! |
| Wednesday 23rd August 2006 10:32 | Things Change (Author Response) |
I am, of course, greatly honoured that you registered with Phoenixsong because of my writing, but I'm also disappointed: YOU READ EVERYTHING AND LEFT ME ONLY ONE REVIEW?
Yes, there will be more. |
Yentila22
Wednesday 23rd August 2006 01:25 | Things Change |
| This is a terrific scene-such honesty...looking forward to more... |
| Wednesday 23rd August 2006 10:29 | Things Change (Author Response) |
| Enforced honesty - and that's the problem. |
Ladybug
Tuesday 22nd August 2006 21:30 | Things Change |
| Ooooh! *rubs hands together gleefully* This is great. I can see that you don’t like to take that corridor scene at face value, what with this and your Good Mood series. I’m right with you – I completely agree with your take on Ginny’s motivations, thoughts and knowledge about all the matters that were ‘under discussion’ at that encounter. Here, I particularly love how she wants Harry enchantingly clueless about what to do with a girl. I can’t wait to see where this goes next. With all that eye-flashing, I’d love to see a Harry–Dean confrontation, but I’m sure I’ll love wherever you take us. |
| Wednesday 23rd August 2006 10:28 | Things Change (Author Response) |
| Harry against Dean? Interesting thought. |
Felix Felicis
Tuesday 22nd August 2006 19:22 | Things Change |
Wow! Well done. I can't wait for the next chapter.
The funny thing is, I really didn't see this as AU at all. It fits so well with canon that it really doesn't have to be AU, unless future chapters dictate. Very good writing. I think you've captured Harry's inner turmoil about being in love with Ginny and not wanting to admit it - either to himself or her. I feel kind of bad for Dean, but hey, someone's got to sacrifice so Harry and Ginny can be happy.
Harry's admission was great. I like how you had him just spill it and I only wish I knew what was going on in Ginny's head when he said it. I bet he didn't get any essays written after that. This is so much fun. I'm glad you didn't let the plot idea go because this is going to be terrific! |
| Wednesday 23rd August 2006 10:27 | Things Change (Author Response) |
| Yeah, Dean's the looser in this respect, and he doesn't really deserve it, does he? He just fell for the wrong girl. |
hwimsey
Tuesday 22nd August 2006 17:12 | Things Change |
Great beginning. I liked the way you kept the emotions boiling like a pot on a stove, and then BLAM. Can't wait to see the next chapters? How long will the piece be??
Thanks for sharing this with us. |
| Wednesday 23rd August 2006 10:25 | Things Change (Author Response) |
| The pleasure is on my side. It's good to be back after a longish break and get some substantial reviews. - And there are two more chapters. |
keira azul
Tuesday 22nd August 2006 15:28 | Things Change |
| Very good Harry ranting! I liked it a lot! Keep up the good work! |
daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 22nd August 2006 15:10 | Things Change |
| That was a very good start. And I like how you used a lot from HBP. Very good. |
| Wednesday 23rd August 2006 10:23 | Things Change (Author Response) |
| Thanks. Building it into HBP was one of the main ideas. |
Ima Quidditch Fan
Tuesday 22nd August 2006 15:00 | Things Change |
| Whoa. I like it. Wish he had done that in HBP! What will she do with that bit of info? |
| Wednesday 23rd August 2006 10:23 | Things Change (Author Response) |
| Yes, I imagine that is a question Ginny is asking herself at the moment. |
acciobook
Tuesday 22nd August 2006 14:46 | Things Change |
Oh....this is a GREAT start and what a cool direction to take with a bit of OotP and HBP inspiration.
I love when H/G (or R/Hr) stories have their roots in realistic teen drama. I mean sure, the serious side of things with Voldemort, the prophecy, the horocruxes, etc....is always a factor. But when the kids get to worry about real life issues too it brings a reader more into the mind of the character.
I am thrilled to see the next chapter is already at 60% completion. I will be back to read more when it is time. I think you have really hit on a story idea that will hook a lot of people. |
| Wednesday 23rd August 2006 10:22 | Things Change (Author Response) |
| I hope you're right. Thanks. |
Grandma Kate
Tuesday 22nd August 2006 12:50 | Things Change |
| AU or not. It seems plausible to me. Poor Harry! |
| Wednesday 23rd August 2006 10:20 | Things Change (Author Response) |
| Who says AU has to be not plausible? Thanks for reading. |
