ibelieveintruelove
Tuesday 28th July 2009 23:07 | I Now Pronounce You... |
| Aw that was lovely!! I think I liked Ron's proposal the best - first he ends up almost proposing to his sister (hysterical!) and then because he isn't clear in his letter, both Hermione and Ron start freaking out by getting stood up for one another (the poor idiots). And then that wonderfully romantic gesture of getting down on one knee in the middle of the street while its pouring rain and slipping the ring on her finger. Sigh It was a lovely story - nice work! |
pyromain
Thursday 29th November 2007 08:46 | I Now Pronounce You... |
| didn't really like Ginny in this story. |
gymnastgal19
Saturday 27th October 2007 17:54 | I Now Pronounce You... |
i loved this story thanks for writting it
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joshua
Monday 6th August 2007 03:52 | I Now Pronounce You... |
| great story. enteratining |
emicav
Wednesday 18th July 2007 11:46 | I Now Pronounce You... |
| i really like the way you wrote this one and the one about chocolate frogs. the one thing i wish rowling would do was write from someone else's point of view, even if it is in 3rd person, along with harry. it was very sweet! congrats!emilygail0323@aol.com |
Aqua Fountain*
Tuesday 26th June 2007 23:46 | I Now Pronounce You... |
Great story! Hilarious, interesting, and entertaining. I generally avoid the wedding types, but I decided to give your's a go, and have no regrets whatsoever. Brilliant story!
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Felix Felicis
Friday 15th September 2006 21:14 | I Now Pronounce You... |
What a great story! I love the constant distraction that is Harry's mind. I can just see him being like that and you've captured it perfectly. I wish we could have seen more of the sweetness between Harry and Ginny but I guess that's been covered through the description of the wedding.
I love this plot and I'm so glad you shared it with us! |
Evelyn
Wednesday 13th September 2006 03:50 | I Now Pronounce You... |
Bravo!!!
This put a big, big smile on my face. Thank you so much for this funny, cute, entertaining, romantic, touching, and thoroughly excellent story. I coudn't have enjoyed it more. |
paladin
Monday 11th September 2006 11:09 | I Now Pronounce You... |
Yeah! As I expected, you came through in great fashion
First, congratulations on your marriage and best of luck for the coming years.
Now, sorry, to post reviews every other chapter but, hey, they came in quick succession and there are so many fics to read and review.
You capped this fic splendidly with chapters that equaled the first two by instilling character personalities again, for both Hermione then Harry. Hermione’s telling was exquisite because of the ‘long-winded’ recitation of the events as the story moved on. In my mind’s eye, I could hear a deep inhalation before continuing the next paragraph. The setting for this scene was great. I could picture a poor, muddy, soggy, Hermione in an obvious emotional state without effort. I could also sense the flip-flop of emotions between Ron & Hermione as the scene played out. Hermione hurt and ready to go; Ron, doing his best to collect his wits to make sure he told her ‘precisely’ what he wanted to. Hermione’s retelling of Ron dropping to his knee in the crowd was an excellent touch.
As for Harry, I really got a kick out of the fact that you had him discussing the pre-wedding partying but nothing in Ron’s chapter. I have always pictured Ron as someone will hold their own and see Harry as one who doesn’t regularly party too hard. Starting the chapter off with him reminiscing why it happened to him is classic ‘Harry’. Really great people often receive the best of blessings yet remain humble.
“Why did she pick me?”
Having Harry seeking the twins advice was a funny thought and you gave what I felt was an accurate depiction; Fred & George do not come off as match-makers. The description of the “cool” indifference with which Ginny is treating him made me twitch in my seat, as I have run across a vixen in my past, who could stew over... anything, actually. He’s an athlete for God’s sake, not Gildaroy Lockhart. They never do say anything … just expect you to ‘clue in’. He catches her when she least expects it and then it all turns out to be a mis-understanding. Just they way you told it.
The verse that you gave him, while on bended knee, was great; Harry speaking poetically is perfect for a special moment. I believe it can happen to anyone; hell, even a blind squirrel can find nut every now and then, right?
I tip my hat and raise my glass to you.
~Great job. |
critmo
Monday 11th September 2006 08:39 | I Now Pronounce You... |
| Wow, what luck for Ginny that Harry was really determined to make his move. Her reaction was cold enough to chase lesser wizards away. |
jeanne
Sunday 10th September 2006 17:28 | I Now Pronounce You... |
| This was a great four chapters. Excellent reading. At least you didn,t write them falling into marriage without thinking it over first. |
Delani
Sunday 10th September 2006 13:32 | I Now Pronounce You... |
*cough cough* Oh that is so adorably sweet! Lol, I really did love this. With a dour anniversary appraching those in the states, it really is nice to read something full of love and hope like this.
Delani |
Hajra
Sunday 10th September 2006 10:08 | I Now Pronounce You... |
First off - Congratulations Majick!
This was a great read. I really enjoyed the way you had each character give their version of evens the way they interpreted it. I loved the way both proposals go awry at first - but it all turns out well in the end! x |
XORynkleOX
Sunday 10th September 2006 08:24 | I Now Pronounce You... |
OH! Congratulations, Majick! I was wondering where this was leading...
Wow, Great job. It's really well written and you really grasp each character well. You should write a sequel...when you get the Honeymoon, first few years of marriage, and children under your belt, of course. Again, Congratulations and Great job.
(I must ask- Not meaning to pry- Did you write this as part of the proposal??)
This was really sweet,
Kathryn |
honourary_weasley
Sunday 10th September 2006 04:09 | I Now Pronounce You... |
" Short of wearing a badge saying 'Ginny Weasley is my girlfriend', I'm not sure how much more committed I could have been. Didn't I turn down all the groupies? Didn't I make sure she knew how I felt? "
Ahhh, Harry - the groupies indeed. Bet GinGin loved that.
Another great chapter, really sweet and the perfect conclusion - and yes, that is really what it's all about. |
BasketKiwi
Saturday 9th September 2006 22:21 | I Now Pronounce You... |
| Aaw! Another fantastic story, as usual. I love these quartets of yours. And that is SO CUTE! I was wondering why they were both posted on the same day. Congratulations!! xDD |
mary-v
Saturday 9th September 2006 21:41 | I Now Pronounce You... |
AWWWWWW! I really really loved this, but what really plastered a smile on my face rthgat just won't go away is your author's note!! Congrats Majick!
Anyways, I really loved this fic! It made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside!!
Brilliant work!
~Maria~ |
Grandma Kate
Saturday 9th September 2006 20:57 | I Now Pronounce You... |
Interesting quartet of stories with some interesting information -Draco and Gabriella, hmm?
Best wishes to Majick, as well |
