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Tuesday 30th October 2007 16:07 | The Other World Cup | lol niice i had a feeling that the football star would have a signifigant other :p
the ending was funny with the suit cases
| lacyrachil
Monday 27th November 2006 13:44 | The Other World Cup | | That is funny...keep writing. | | Friday 1st December 2006 05:09 | The Other World Cup (Author Response) | | I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter - and trust me, it was really fun to write as well! | Evelyn
Tuesday 12th September 2006 09:32 | The Other World Cup | The last two paragraphs were hilarious.
And I really like the way you write Bill and Fleur, especially when she tries to get him jealous... | jeanne
Monday 11th September 2006 08:04 | The Other World Cup | | This was absolutely fabulous. What an imagination you have. I loved the part about their luggage being a part of a display in a Museum. Great. | daniel_r_crazy22
Sunday 10th September 2006 21:29 | The Other World Cup | | Haha. That was funny. And very good. |
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