kopfsalat2000
Tuesday 11th December 2012 13:43 | You Tell Her |
| lovely that was really good. And yes, those anvil-sized hints |
bookish327
Monday 27th October 2008 08:37 | You Tell Her |
| I enjoyed the irony of Hermione being a Seer herself, considering how she felt about Trelawney while in school. The torture of not knowing what Harry and Ron were keeping from her was trying, but I'm sure you intended for us to feel the same suspense that Hermione was feeling. I really enjoy how you write all of the characters. Great insight. Thanks for sharing this with us. |
| Monday 27th October 2008 13:03 | You Tell Her (Author Response) |
| Thank you -- yeah, I couldn't resist that idea. |
majolie
Tuesday 4th December 2007 19:52 | You Tell Her |
| I loved this. I really enjoyed it, and was totally caught up wondering what the secret about Hermione was. Very entertaining. |
| Wednesday 5th December 2007 06:04 | You Tell Her (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much! |
pyromain
Sunday 3rd June 2007 08:18 | You Tell Her |
| This is quit a nice story, I thinks I need to read the other 2 storys that gave you the idea to write this one. I really liked the prophecy it was good. |
| Friday 30th November 2007 04:13 | You Tell Her (Author Response) |
Thanks -- although I should warn you the Strinx one is very long and still a WIP.
(Sorry this reply is so late -- I just noticed that I'd hit the wrong button and added a reply as another review. D'oh ..._ |
Patches
Saturday 21st April 2007 03:04 | You Tell Her |
| Boys really don't understand girls. Girls imaginations can create problems that never existed! Just give a girl a reason to worry and the problems just keep on growing! This was very well done. I like the way all the characters react to each other. And finally Harry discovers that he really needs Ginny in his life. That is a biggie too! Thanks for writing. I look forward to more stories from you. |
| Saturday 21st April 2007 09:46 | You Tell Her (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I think Hermione particularly is by nature a worrier. I'm glad you like the way they work together, it was the first time I'd tried writing the Trio in a serious story. |
topbabe
Saturday 14th April 2007 10:45 | You Tell Her |
| Wow brilliant story!! |
| Saturday 21st April 2007 08:53 | You Tell Her (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
ibelieveintruelove
Saturday 7th April 2007 17:58 | You Tell Her |
| Wonderful story! I loved the idea of Hermione as a Seer and the prophecy, and Harry was very clever to use the prophecy to bring Ron and Hermione together, even though it really meant Ginny! Great story, I love your work! |
| Saturday 7th April 2007 19:12 | You Tell Her (Author Response) |
| Thank you -- it just seemed like a fun idea to write, with Harry's actions there to give one last twist! |
ifiger
Saturday 24th February 2007 17:25 | You Tell Her |
That is a blody great story, how they turn around the Seer thing is great...
And Harry's plan at the end well it's beautifuly writen...
I don't know what els to say as there is so much
Well Done |
| Sunday 25th February 2007 04:01 | You Tell Her (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much! Glad you liked Harry's plan at the end, I added that as I thought it needed one more small twist there. |
SillyGillie
Sunday 1st October 2006 21:43 | You Tell Her |
| What a fantastic story. really cute. Frazzled Hermione is as enjoyable as ever! |
| Monday 2nd October 2006 16:01 | You Tell Her (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
freshwater
Sunday 1st October 2006 00:29 | You Tell Her |
| Brilliant! Very clever and well-developed. Nice tie-in with HBP canon --particularly the T/R and loss of powers bit-- and it was fun reading Hermione's perspective and the boy's anxiety. Loved the "anvil sized hints" too! |
| Sunday 1st October 2006 13:09 | You Tell Her (Author Response) |
| Thank you -- I couldn't resist the 'anvil' line. |
GryffindorDragon
Tuesday 26th September 2006 09:12 | You Tell Her |
Nice piece. You do a good job of keeping the reader wondering (and Hermione too ) what they need to tell her.
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| Wednesday 27th September 2006 09:50 | You Tell Her (Author Response) |
| Thank you! Glad it kept you interested. |
Hank
Monday 25th September 2006 10:50 | You Tell Her |
| That was brilliant! And funny!!!!! |
| Wednesday 27th September 2006 09:40 | You Tell Her (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
hp4-sauce
Sunday 24th September 2006 21:59 | You Tell Her |
| That was different and very good. Sybil Trelawny would be proud. |
| Wednesday 27th September 2006 08:48 | You Tell Her (Author Response) |
| Thank you! Poor old Sybill -- she doesn't even know that she's a real Seer. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Sunday 24th September 2006 20:11 | You Tell Her |
| Nice. And I kept wondering what the big secret was myself. And I thought that Hermione would take it worst too. Very well written. |
| Wednesday 27th September 2006 08:46 | You Tell Her (Author Response) |
| Thank you -- I guess she was so relieved it wasn't another disaster they were keeping from her that she was OK with it! |
lilyp
Sunday 24th September 2006 16:28 | You Tell Her |
| Very good indeed! Funny, with a lot of hints and references. Very well written. I really loved it. |
| Sunday 24th September 2006 16:45 | You Tell Her (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
Astrid
Sunday 24th September 2006 13:03 | You Tell Her |
| Hahaha, this is awesome. Great build-up to the revelation. I love how Harry didn't play the whole thing. Good work. |
| Sunday 24th September 2006 13:22 | You Tell Her (Author Response) |
| Thank you. I thought it needed a little last twist at the end! |
critmo
Sunday 24th September 2006 10:58 | You Tell Her |
Priceless. That's my favourite line:
"He'd better not be sniggering behind my back. He'd just better not, that's all. Or this time, it'll be eagles I set on him." |
| Sunday 24th September 2006 12:18 | You Tell Her (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I quite enjoyed writing that line. Poor Ron. |
Ladybug
Sunday 24th September 2006 08:06 | You Tell Her |
| Such an enjoyable tale! That is so funny, and it's even better second or third time round - then I noticed all the little clues you planted on the way and the irony of it all: at least before she'd walked out on that ridiculous fraud Trelawney. I love this story, and I think all the characterisations are absolutely spot-on and it's mysterious and funny and a little bit fluffy, too. Great work! |
| Sunday 24th September 2006 13:21 | You Tell Her (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I did try to drop a few hints to what was going on, although I was counting on the basic idea being unlikely enough that it would be hard to guess. I'm glad the characterisations worked, it's the first time I'd tried to write the Trio in a semi-serious piece. The R/Hr fluff wasn't originally intended, it sort of grew out of the fact that it's immediately post-HBP. |
Starbuck_23
Sunday 24th September 2006 07:17 | You Tell Her |
| Oh, that bit about anvil sized hints was just great! Brilliant reference. |
| Sunday 24th September 2006 12:17 | You Tell Her (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
MercuryBlue
Saturday 23rd September 2006 22:28 | You Tell Her |
| Well, I'm impressed. Even worked in JKR's anvil-sized hints line. |
| Sunday 24th September 2006 12:17 | You Tell Her (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
LittleTom45
Saturday 23rd September 2006 21:07 | You Tell Her |
This was so funny. You really had me going. I though their secret was that they didn't want her cooking any more because she was terrible. I got really started wonder what was going to happen when he pulled the pensive. You could really go far with this story. The idea that only part of prophecies only partly heard is very good. That could be a whole diversionary tactic in another story.
The construction of this story was very good and it flowed really well. You kept the audience captivated from the start. We had a mystery to solve and some comedy at the same time. It was very entertaining. Thanks
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| Sunday 24th September 2006 12:08 | You Tell Her (Author Response) |
Heh. I imagine Harry would be the cook out of the three of them, having had plenty of practice with the Dursleys!
Glad you enjoyed it -- it's basically a oneshot, as I very much doubt that Book 7 is going to include Seer!Hermione, but I tried to make the background and other activities plausible as the sort of thing they might be doing.
Thank you very much! |
rdprice29
Saturday 23rd September 2006 18:04 | You Tell Her |
| This was really, really good. I really enjoyed reading it, great job! |
| Sunday 24th September 2006 12:01 | You Tell Her (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
