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Ladybug
Friday 16th February 2007 06:47 | Air | | I get all excited when I see a WIP that's become completed ... Now I look forward to getting engrossed in this story from beginning to end. What a lovely first chapter, such a dramatic contrast between Oliver's uncle and father. Very smooth writing, it's a pleasure to read. | SillyGillie
Sunday 1st October 2006 22:13 | Air | | Really brilliant. Poor Oliver who knew he had such a horrible father. Loved it. | Arnel
Thursday 28th September 2006 08:17 | Air | | Congratulations on such a successful and fascinating first chapter! This is a story that I hope will be posted at regular intervals. Your characterizations are spot-on; I love the contrast in opinion of Oliver's uncle and father. It's very easy to see which man Oliver wants to emulate. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. | | Thursday 28th September 2006 09:53 | Air (Author Response) | Hi Arnel,
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I have thirteen chapters completed, so yes, the intervals will be quite regular. Chapter two is already with my beta. Hope you enjoy! | Evelyn
Monday 25th September 2006 15:40 | Air | | Looks like an interesting story. I really like your Oliver, I think... Love the man you've made out of him. And I'm eager to know how his relationship with his father develops. | | Monday 25th September 2006 15:53 | Air (Author Response) | Hi Evelyn,
Thanks so much for reading! Well- you've hit on two major themes of the story - Oliver's maturation, and his relationship with his father. We'll see how he comes out on both! | tante
Monday 25th September 2006 12:34 | Air | This looks wonderful.
I'm very interested to ride along with Oliver at the beginning of his career.
Great idea! Nice tight wrighting. | | Monday 25th September 2006 15:50 | Air (Author Response) | | Oh wow, my first official Phoenix Song review. Thanks so much for reading! Hope you stick with Oliver on that ride, because it's going to hit some bumps! |
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