potters_love_redheads
Wednesday 17th March 2010 22:03 | Changes |
| Aww that's adorable!! I love the trick, soo funny. Nice work! |
gymnastgal19
Monday 11th August 2008 15:59 | Changes |
hehe nice story
you are a really good writter!
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fire_faerie
Monday 3rd December 2007 13:12 | Changes |
| HAHA! Naughty Ginny! Bad Hermione! |
| Tuesday 4th December 2007 21:40 | Changes (Author Response) |
HAHA! Naughty Ginny! Bad Hermione!
Mind, I think they got as good as they gave! The one I feel sorry for is poor Ron!
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pyromain
Saturday 1st September 2007 14:39 | Changes |
| how lovely he even had his fathers thing for playing with the snitch. |
QuidditchLover
Sunday 12th August 2007 16:33 | Changes |
you really scared me for a minute. i was really going to object if that was actually hermione and harry kissing. but you fooled me =]
emilygail0323@aol.com |
trentbusted
Monday 11th June 2007 21:11 | Changes |
That was an awesome story It was really funny When he was with I was like what the hell but i still didnt mind but then it was so much better that it really was I did notice it was a bit suss that hermione could catch the snitch like that....
Job well done |
| Monday 11th June 2007 23:40 | Changes (Author Response) |
That was an awesome story It was really funny When he was with I was like what the hell but i still didnt mind but then it was so much better that it really was I did notice it was a bit suss that hermione could catch the snitch like that....
Job well done
Thanks so much! I definitely felt... naughty writing this. I'm glad that you picked up on something, and that it was fun to read! |
No Idea Why I Smile
Wednesday 21st March 2007 14:27 | Changes |
teehee...
nough said |
cckeimig
Tuesday 13th March 2007 12:10 | Changes |
| Wonderful story! |
lacyrachil
Friday 1st December 2006 12:28 | Changes |
| What a nasty trick. I was shocked thinking he was telling Hermione all that stuff! |
Evelyn
Sunday 15th October 2006 05:29 | Changes |
Oh... that was EX-cellent.
I'll have to go back and read it again immediately. |
| Monday 16th October 2006 00:16 | Changes (Author Response) |
Oh... that was EX-cellent.
I'll have to go back and read it again immediately.
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! |
BZHGDM
Monday 9th October 2006 10:38 | Changes |
Well, this was cute. I enjoyed it immensely.
:blaise:
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| Tuesday 10th October 2006 12:09 | Changes (Author Response) |
Well, this was cute. I enjoyed it immensely.
:blaise:
Thanks! I had fun setting up this little mousetrap... |
hp4-sauce
Sunday 8th October 2006 23:32 | Changes |
| A clever idea and experty written, as always. As someone with two sisters, I felt for Ron though! |
| Tuesday 10th October 2006 12:08 | Changes (Author Response) |
A clever idea and experty written, as always. As someone with two sisters, I felt for Ron though!
Hee!
Yeah, I felt kind of sorry for Ron too.
Kind of.
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freshwater
Sunday 8th October 2006 22:18 | Changes |
| Quite delightfully done....and you've managed a very nice ending scene, too. That's something I don't often see with one-shots. |
| Tuesday 10th October 2006 12:07 | Changes (Author Response) |
Quite delightfully done....and you've managed a very nice ending scene, too. That's something I don't often see with one-shots.
Thanks! Yeah--I originally saw this as a typical fluffy one-shot where, once True Love has been revealed, as is well with the world... but once Ron came and went (poor boy), I realized that there was some unresolved stuff hanging in the air--and that it had the potential for an interesting scene.
Again, thanks! |
GryffindorDragon
Sunday 8th October 2006 16:13 | Changes |
Very cute story. I like the little surpise element of Hermione being Ginny . I also like how Harry turned the prank on Ginny. Poor Ron .
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| Sunday 8th October 2006 16:50 | Changes (Author Response) |
Very cute story. I like the little surpise element of Hermione being Ginny . I also like how Harry turned the prank on Ginny. Poor Ron .
Yeah, I feel sorry for Ron...
Almost. XD |
Jacynthe
Sunday 8th October 2006 14:57 | Changes |
| The initial misdirection would probably been a bit more effective if we didn't all know that the House Rules here forbid certain things, but you certainly had me wondering what you were up to. I can't help but question, though, if Canon-Harry would have been quite so quick on the uptake (no doubt that Ginny was spot-on the whole way). And poor Ron, scarred for life ... |
| Sunday 8th October 2006 15:12 | Changes (Author Response) |
The initial misdirection would probably been a bit more effective if we didn't all know that the House Rules here forbid certain things, but you certainly had me wondering what you were up to. I can't help but question, though, if Canon-Harry would have been quite so quick on the uptake (no doubt that Ginny was spot-on the whole way). And poor Ron, scarred for life ...
Yes, indeed, poor Ron! I feel almost sorry for what I put him through...
Almost. ;-)
My rationale for having Harry pick up on what was going on so quickly was that, in addition to performing an athletic maneuver that Ginny is infinitely more likely to pull of than Hermione, Ginny committed a series of small mistakes that I'd like to think prepared Harry subliminally: she cut straight to the point with Harry, something Hermione never does, she knelt on the ground without any fuss or preamble... she dropped a book on the ground for goodness sake!
Even so, your point is well taken; consider it poetic license.
And it's been interesting--I've posted the fic on a couple of non-H/G sites--Fiction Alley and The Quidditch Pitch; so far the reaction has been essentially the same. Clearly the fact that I write mostly H/G (with occasional guest stars) gives the game away. Still, it's gratifying that I get as much of a response as I do. And I have to say that I'd hate to have a hard-core H/Hr read this without any forwarning--if they survived, they might take out a contract on me! |
mary-v
Sunday 8th October 2006 11:42 | Changes |
OH! I absolutely adored this~ And I am so joining that LJ site!
I really really did love this though!! |
| Sunday 8th October 2006 15:05 | Changes (Author Response) |
OH! I absolutely adored this~ And I am so joining that LJ site!
I really really did love this though!!
Thanks!
It's a great community--some of my favorite fic authors are involved, so I feel honored to be in the mix! |
lilyp
Sunday 8th October 2006 10:56 | Changes |
| Well, it's a prank on us too. But as these are H/G sites we know that there must be some justification. I love this story and this version is even better than the catchmysnitch's one or maybe I read it more attentively. |
thisgrlrox
Sunday 8th October 2006 10:12 | Changes |
| I was a bit scared there for an instant. Thank goodness you put me out of my misery quickly. Very nicely written story. I enjoyed the fun interplay between Harry and Ginny. Way to go! |
| Sunday 8th October 2006 15:04 | Changes (Author Response) |
I was a bit scared there for an instant. Thank goodness you put me out of my misery quickly. Very nicely written story. I enjoyed the fun interplay between Harry and Ginny. Way to go!
Hee! Well, I wouldn't want the misery to go on too long!
Thanks! |
J.R. Lewis
Sunday 8th October 2006 08:18 | Changes |
| That was cruel, mean, evil, underhanded and a few other things. Well Done!! |
| Sunday 8th October 2006 08:33 | Changes (Author Response) |
That was cruel, mean, evil, underhanded and a few other things. Well Done!!
I'm dreadfully sorry--and thanks! |
critmo
Sunday 8th October 2006 06:11 | Changes |
| ::grinning from ear to ear:: Poor Ron. |
| Sunday 8th October 2006 08:34 | Changes (Author Response) |
::grinning from ear to ear:: Poor Ron.
No kidding! Though I do feel rather badly for Hermione--she isn't exactly cut out for this kind of thing!
And I'm glad this made you smile! |
~delusion~
Saturday 7th October 2006 23:57 | Changes |
that was a rotten trick they did. I mean, it's okay to play it on Harry, he's not that emotional, but playing it on Ron is just so mean.
BUT EXTREMLY FUNNY! |
| Sunday 8th October 2006 08:38 | Changes (Author Response) |
that was a rotten trick they did. I mean, it's okay to play it on Harry, he's not that emotional, but playing it on Ron is just so mean.
BUT EXTREMLY FUNNY!
Well, I do feel a bit guilty for putting Ron through that myself. But I honestly thing that Hermione didn't think of it as in any way a trick--she was simply trying to help everyone. Then she got a bit... carried away.
Ginny, on the other hand, definitely knew it was a trick, and a rotten one at that. But she did it anyway. After all, anything's possible if you've got the nerve! |
