sonicdale
Monday 1st January 2007 22:57 | How do they do that? |
Oh, the bit with the seat was nice.
Tandem jumping is crazy, and that Arthur got to jump on his first ride was classic. Classic!
Molly's experience with the movies on the flight was also funny. Airport, Alive, etc. And that she got tipsy was great too.
This story continues to impress. Good work. |
| Tuesday 2nd January 2007 10:27 | How do they do that? (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much, I hope you like the following chapter, I also hope you leave a review. All the best |
Ari
Tuesday 31st October 2006 21:21 | How do they do that? |
| This si absolutely excellent, HWNN. i love this series. I hope the next one comes out soon. (Even if I have alreaady read it ) We all want to recognise your excellent story telling. it's just the grammar that I help you with |
| Wednesday 1st November 2006 01:13 | How do they do that? (Author Response) |
Cheers Ari, thanks for the reveiw. It means alot. I'm starting typing up another fic, and writting up the fith chapter.
All the best.
Oh, and of course you recongnise me, It's me |
Ladybug
Monday 23rd October 2006 20:32 | How do they do that? |
| Oh gosh, that is utterly hilarious all the way through! FANTASTIC! By far the funniest yet - must be Molly's presence, hey? This will keep my smiling for the rest of the week, I'm sure. Well done! |
| Sunday 29th October 2006 11:19 | How do they do that? (Author Response) |
Thank you for this wonderful reveiw, It give's me joy joy feelings in my tummy, when someone reads my fic's and enjoys them. Even more when they find them funny. If you liked this one then hopefully, the next will give you a smile for a fortnight. Can you imagine Arthur with a Tank, and Sid with a Gun?
I look forward to your reveiw.
All the best |
Tarkas
Sunday 22nd October 2006 10:03 | How do they do that? |
I was professionally nervous about this chapter, but you carried it off extremely well. I won't be using Arthur's explanation of how a wing works in any of my classes, but I've seen worse, believe me...
“Not to worry, Mr Weasley, you’re in the hands of Engineers now.” All laughed along, although, Arthur’s was a nervous guffaw. To be honest he really didn’t know what an Engineer was. And he's not alone, more's the pity.
Quite a few spelling and grammar errors marred the chapter a little, but it's still a lot of fun. Oh, and FYI, it's "gyppy tummy" -- comes from Egypt, IIRC.
Phil, aeronautical engineer and teacher of same |
| Sunday 29th October 2006 11:15 | How do they do that? (Author Response) |
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, the explanation was Molly's veiw on it, so it's sort of been Mollyfied, LOL.
I'm not sure about the spelling, as it is beta'd and checked at PS, I'm sure only a few slipped through.
As I'm also hopeless at spelling and grammer, I wouldn't of spotted them if they came up to me and hit me across the head.
I am sorry, it marred the chapter. But if you would of seen it before, TKP looked at it, it would of looked a hell of a lot worse. He is the person that makes it readable, and any errors, must be placed at my feet, or hands, or whatever you want to call it, LOL.
I hope you read the next one, and enjoy it as much as this one. I think it is the funniest one yet. |
Wooster
Friday 20th October 2006 21:39 | How do they do that? |
Yay!!! You updated, and this is the best chapter yet! What a sweet ending. I love Arthur Weasley...I would be the number one fan of this radio show. And Molly was hysterical.
I can't believe you had him sky dive. Brilliant!
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| Saturday 21st October 2006 02:36 | How do they do that? (Author Response) |
I'm glad you enjoyed it, I had fun writing it. The next one is, to me the funniest yet. But that is just me, as tkp said, it was a long time coming, as he had to settle into Uni, I hope the next chapter is posted soon.
All the best and thanks for the review. |
