gymnastgal19
Sunday 11th May 2008 20:36 | The Shuttered Night |
| nice story |
gymnastgal19
Friday 11th January 2008 19:37 | The Shuttered Night |
interesting story. you tend to read ones though with harry being the last one of them to die and that...
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pyromain
Saturday 23rd June 2007 14:20 | The Shuttered Night |
| a trully lovely tear jurking story. I really love to rad that harry and ginny and also ron and hermione had a long and good live after there painfull years in school. thanks for this lovely story. |
lacyrachil
Sunday 26th November 2006 20:41 | The Shuttered Night |
| That was beautiful. Amazing. Thank you for writing. |
| Friday 1st December 2006 20:17 | The Shuttered Night (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much- it was my pleasure. |
Ladybug
Sunday 29th October 2006 20:49 | The Shuttered Night |
| That is just so … beautiful and peaceful and WHOLE. Lovely, lovely scene. Thank you! |
| Monday 30th October 2006 12:49 | The Shuttered Night (Author Response) |
| Thanks! Given how much turmoil the trio and co. are in at the moment, it was nice to just imagine it all as over and long past. |
St Margarets
Wednesday 25th October 2006 17:17 | The Shuttered Night |
| Aw, this is so sad, yet so beautiful. What a wonderful passing for Ron, to be guided by the one who loved him the best. I like how you wove in all the other events for the main characters as well. A perfect winter's tale. |
| Monday 30th October 2006 12:50 | The Shuttered Night (Author Response) |
| Thank you. I had initially thought of doing this as a Harry/Ginny moment, but somehow Ron and Hermione seemed to work much better here. |
ninkenate
Tuesday 24th October 2006 18:08 | The Shuttered Night |
| That was very sweet. Good job. |
| Monday 30th October 2006 12:51 | The Shuttered Night (Author Response) |
| I'm very glad you liked it! I'm a complete sucker for angst myself. |
Arnel
Friday 20th October 2006 21:28 | The Shuttered Night |
| Since this story started out so sadly I was all prepared for a good cry. Luckily Hermione saved the day and made Ron's passing something of an adventure. Nicely done. |
| Monday 30th October 2006 12:52 | The Shuttered Night (Author Response) |
| I'm glad it wasn't too heart-breaking after all. Thanks for the review! |
Mira Miracle
Friday 20th October 2006 08:21 | The Shuttered Night |
I love how much emotion you put into this. Fandom tends to see Ron as the funny sidekick, but you show that there's much more to him than jokes.
The dying scene was very beautifully written: I like the impression of Hermione coming to fetch him and Ron being glad about coming with her.
The life you showed in small glimps is just the one I wish him to have: happy, full of love, many children and a big family. The last sentence just added to this; Ron truly is someone who loves with all his power.
Very good job! |
| Monday 30th October 2006 12:56 | The Shuttered Night (Author Response) |
| Wow... thanks for the fantastic review. I think you're right in that Ron tends to be occassionally overlooked, though not intentionally of course, but he's really the one who started it all for Harry. It's kind of nice to think of Ron being kind of like the chronicler, if you will, of all the events in Harry's life and everyone else they love. I just love the idea of Hermione and everyone else waiting for him patiently. Thanks again! |
RdeHwyll
Tuesday 17th October 2006 15:28 | The Shuttered Night |
| Very good tale well told... I was touched by the quality of emotion you put into it. Good luck in the competition. |
| Monday 30th October 2006 12:57 | The Shuttered Night (Author Response) |
| I'm very glad the depth of emotion came through- that was completely what I was going for. Thanks for the review! |
honourary_weasley
Tuesday 17th October 2006 04:04 | The Shuttered Night |
*has tears running down her face*
That was ... beautiful. And so sad. And beautifully, tragically, perfect. |
| Monday 30th October 2006 12:58 | The Shuttered Night (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much, this really kind of sums up what I was going for. And I'll take the fact that it made you cry as the ultimate compliment! |
Grandma Kate
Monday 16th October 2006 20:39 | The Shuttered Night |
| Very sweet and moving. |
| Monday 30th October 2006 12:59 | The Shuttered Night (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I love to think that my pieces have touched people in at least some way, and angst is my absolute favourite. |
GryffindorDragon
Monday 16th October 2006 15:21 | The Shuttered Night |
Very bittersweet. I do like how you have events transform the day -- from the horror of the last battle to anniversaries and birthdays.
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| Monday 30th October 2006 13:03 | The Shuttered Night (Author Response) |
| Thanks. I had some initial difficulty coming up with the actual date, but I think a winter anniversary is so much more atmospheric somehow. And of course, it had to be associated with happy times too. Thanks again! |
CrumpleHornedKiwi
Monday 16th October 2006 14:52 | The Shuttered Night |
| It's nice to imagine Ron as a creaky old man with a long beard, but also weird to think of our appilyfavourite characters as lived long wizard lives and then passing on happily, and content. Thanks for a quiet and reflective interlude. |
| Monday 30th October 2006 13:04 | The Shuttered Night (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I tried really hard to get the right amount of introspection, and I'm really glad that came through. |
