harry_ginnyfan
Friday 7th December 2007 19:01 | Trouble in Store |
Nice story!
Cheers!
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pyromain
Monday 11th June 2007 12:30 | Trouble in Store |
| I really liked the story it seems like a really plausible future for Harry and Ginny. Thanks for the Story. |
Ladybug
Thursday 26th October 2006 20:35 | Trouble in Store |
| This is a most enjoyable story! I can’t believe how many different life-changing events you managed to weave into the anniversary – wedding, career change, moving, building, buying a business … oh, and don’t forget a baby! Very cleverly done, and a very imaginative, unique future for Harry and Ginny. I love that! |
| Wednesday 8th November 2006 12:18 | Trouble in Store (Author Response) |
| Thank you, what a nice review Yeah I did give them a lot of things to think about, didn't I? Perhaps that is why they both forgot their 'real' anniversary? |
St Margarets
Wednesday 25th October 2006 17:54 | Trouble in Store |
| I love H/G expecting moments. What a fun career for H/G. You've given them such a happy life full of mundane problems. A wonderful glimpse into the future for my favorite couple. |
| Wednesday 8th November 2006 12:19 | Trouble in Store (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the lovely review |
paladin
Wednesday 25th October 2006 14:50 | Trouble in Store |
Wonderful story. Quite original indeed.
I liked the idea of their taking over QQS in Diagon Alley; if there was ever something that Harry would love, to stay out of the spotlight, yet be near everyone, that’s it. The incredible thing was that you didn’t have either Hermione or Ron in it.
The opening scene provided kept a mysterious quality to the plot but the banter and good-natured fun they were having with each other added the comfortable quality that they had been together for some time. Setting a mood to a story is important and character association and degree of relations is important.
Filling in how they wound up as proprietors of QQS added to the meat of their history together. Establishing they had successful Quidditch careers then decided to make the leap is something that I’ve scene in real life. Well… not a husband and wife team. Or, people who play Quidditch. But there have been high-paid athletes who have decided to become ministers or mothers or…oh, heck a lot of things.
Yeah, I know, I’m yammering. You tied everything up nicely with the dates and times corresponding to anniversaries. The addition of bebe was sweet; taking their family to a whole new level.
Splendid job!
Cheers,
~S |
| Wednesday 8th November 2006 12:24 | Trouble in Store (Author Response) |
| Thank you for the lovely review, it's great to find out bits people like, and what they thought worked, establishing a bit of 'history' to the relationship, is something I do work quite hard to do, as I feel it does give the final relationship so much more, so it is doubly good that, that is one of the points you enjoyed the most. |
ninkenate
Tuesday 24th October 2006 14:15 | Trouble in Store |
| Very nice. Good play on the anniversary theme with everything surrounding one central anniversary. |
| Wednesday 8th November 2006 12:24 | Trouble in Store (Author Response) |
| Thank you. |
juliet
Tuesday 24th October 2006 03:58 | Trouble in Store |
This was a fantastic fic, notably because it was H/G although for a while I had a feeling it was R/H - most likely because he was in trouble for swearing. I like the idea that they own Quality Quidditch Supplies and almost had a tear in my eye when Harry opened up the sign with Potter and Son.
Well done. |
| Wednesday 8th November 2006 12:25 | Trouble in Store (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed my little story. |
redonthefly
Thursday 19th October 2006 00:21 | Trouble in Store |
| That is very clever -- I like fics that have Harry and Ginny being something other than Aurors. You truly exercised your creativity with this one. So Ginny went 7 months before telling Harry? Holy cow..she must be carrying that baby tight! Overall, great job. |
| Wednesday 8th November 2006 12:26 | Trouble in Store (Author Response) |
Hi, thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it.
No, Ginny was 3 months pregnant, it was their son who was due in seven months! |
hp4-sauce
Wednesday 18th October 2006 23:07 | Trouble in Store |
| That was fun. Finnigan & Dean Magical Builders? Well, why not? |
| Wednesday 8th November 2006 12:27 | Trouble in Store (Author Response) |
| Thank you, and why not indeed! |
Astrid
Tuesday 17th October 2006 21:07 | Trouble in Store |
| Haha, I love the two anniversaries, plus the son on the way. I heart and |
| Wednesday 8th November 2006 12:27 | Trouble in Store (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
RdeHwyll
Tuesday 17th October 2006 11:53 | Trouble in Store |
| Very nice story. You filled in just enough background to make the tale read well, without distorting canon beyond recognition. Good luck on the competition! |
| Wednesday 8th November 2006 12:29 | Trouble in Store (Author Response) |
| Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. |
GryffindorDragon
Tuesday 17th October 2006 10:58 | Trouble in Store |
Very nice . . . I like it.
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| Wednesday 8th November 2006 12:29 | Trouble in Store (Author Response) |
| thanks, glad you enjoyed it! |
Grandma Kate
Tuesday 17th October 2006 10:12 | Trouble in Store |
| Very cute! |
| Wednesday 8th November 2006 12:30 | Trouble in Store (Author Response) |
| thanks, glad you enjoyed it! |
Starbuck_23
Monday 16th October 2006 10:54 | Trouble in Store |
| Very sweet. Well done! |
| Wednesday 8th November 2006 12:30 | Trouble in Store (Author Response) |
| thanks, glad you enjoyed it! |
