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Sunday 2nd December 2007 17:01 | Harry's Last Letter | wow! that was amazing! you really got harry's attitude! i feel so bad for harry! losing everything because of a stupid prophecy...
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Monday 14th November 2005 11:52 | Harry's Last Letter | | Wow. That was so perfect! I think that's what Harry's letter would really be like: angry, confused, and basically miserable. I liked how you crossed some things out, and how some of the things after the crossed-out things didn't make sense if you didn't read the crossed-out thing... I hope you know what I mean. Anyway, great job, and I loved it and hoped that he got the letter somehow or another! n.n | angelmorph
Wednesday 17th August 2005 22:00 | Harry's Last Letter | Interesting... Like the way you have things crossed out. How'd you manage that? Had to read twice: Once with all the text an once with only why he didn't cross out. Some of it isn't very clear if you ignore the cross-out but given Harry's state of mind when writing this that makes sense. It's a shame he crossed out all the colourful bits, those that made me laugh.
Angelmorph | snowball
Thursday 26th May 2005 19:50 | Harry's Last Letter | | Vey typical Harry anger. Well written, but I like Remus' letter better | Mariposa
Thursday 7th April 2005 10:05 | Harry's Last Letter | | I like how you made sure his two trains of thought keep intersecting. And how it comes across as he's moved onto the acceptance stage of grieving. |
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