potters_love_redheads
Saturday 13th February 2010 16:41 | The Wedding |
| OMG! Combining their powers made them married!! Haha I love it, nice job! |
onebucdad
Saturday 31st January 2009 17:56 | The Wedding |
| i enjoyed it. Nice. |
Astrid
Friday 25th July 2008 10:48 | The Wedding |
| I love the ending! Good work. |
pyromain
Wednesday 6th June 2007 12:43 | The Wedding |
| The End was Perfect, A real suprise and as good as the get. Maried by preforming magic in unison. Beautifull Thanks |
CrumpleHornedKiwi
Wednesday 13th December 2006 01:22 | The Wedding |
I hope you can follow this up in the future - it's a great start to what could be a great full length story.
I like the idea of talking mirrors, I always have, and I've always wanted to haul off and slap someone the way Ginny did, that was great. |
twinsmom
Thursday 7th December 2006 21:04 | The Wedding |
Ummmm, more please.
I have so many questions. How did they join? When did they 'join'? What is that mirrow all about? Who is in the mirror?
Like I said, more please!
christy |
Neely61
Thursday 7th December 2006 09:46 | The Wedding |
| You can't possibly be planning to leave this story with a cliffie like that are you??? Are you insane??? At least a one shot follow up? Please? |
| Friday 8th December 2006 07:05 | The Wedding (Author Response) |
I am insane. Mwaaaa haaaa haaa haaaa haaa haaa!!
Seriously? I have a few ideas for follow-ups. I'll work through them as time permits. |
GWeasley
Monday 4th December 2006 17:15 | The Wedding |
| Wow I love it! So they are married so wonderful. I wonder how Harry is going to take this bit of news and what he will do about it. I hope you plan to continue this as it could be a wonderful story. Don't get me wrong I loved what is writen I just think with your writing that you could make this into a great novel lengt story. Good luk and I look foward to more of this if there will be any =) + = |
| Tuesday 5th December 2006 13:12 | The Wedding (Author Response) |
Again, Thank You. I appreciate all the compliments.
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snuffles007
Sunday 3rd December 2006 22:12 | The Wedding |
| Excellent hook on the end there. This one has tons of potential for more than just a one shot. I hope that you decide to let it go where it may. Either way, great story! |
LittleTom45
Sunday 3rd December 2006 13:11 | The Wedding |
| What a delightful story. Your style is very good. Too bad the story was so short, but than you left it at a point where you could continue (hint hint). I think every guy needs a gal like Ginny. We all need to be put in our place at times. Now the envelope... Puts a whole new meaning to the age old question "Anything you want t tell me?" Good work. Thanks |
LittleTom45
Sunday 3rd December 2006 13:11 | The Wedding |
| What a delightful story. Your style is very good. Too bad the story was so short, but than you left it at a point where you could continue (hint hint). I think every guy needs a gal like Ginny. We all need to be put in our place at times. Now the envelope... Puts a whole new meaning to the age old question "Anything you want t tell me?" Good work. Thanks |
daniel_r_crazy22
Friday 1st December 2006 21:17 | The Wedding |
| What is so shocking? So it says Ginny Potter. But very good story. And the mirror is cool. |
| Saturday 2nd December 2006 18:52 | The Wedding (Author Response) |
Thank you. I appreciate the compliment.
What is so shocking? So it says Ginny Potter.
Imagine you're a fifteen year old girl, almost sixteen. Wouldn't you be a little shocked to find out you're married? |
NurseRatchet26
Friday 1st December 2006 07:56 | The Wedding |
| OH MY GOD! Pleasetell nme you aren't leaving it like that! You just have to continue the story! Great job. |
stardust610
Thursday 30th November 2006 17:28 | The Wedding |
| Wonderful!! I liked what you did with the mirror. And that twist at the end was great! Are you going to continue this story? Write a sequel to it?? You can't just leave it like that!! |
claireanne1234
Thursday 30th November 2006 15:37 | The Wedding |
loved it,
can u do one about the aftermaff of the letter that would be so cool. |
MissPotter9
Thursday 30th November 2006 15:08 | The Wedding |
| i love! but i dont get the ending what was wrong? |
Astrid
Thursday 30th November 2006 13:57 | The Wedding |
| Lovely! |
girl from ipanema
Thursday 30th November 2006 13:38 | The Wedding |
| So, when the mirror reflected back their joined magic it actually joined them So, is this mirror somehow sort os a horcrux, not evil but holdsa piece or a reflection of somebody's soul. Or more like Hogwarts Headmasters' pictures? Obviously it has a personality, so how did it got in there? |
Connor Landon
Thursday 30th November 2006 13:04 | The Wedding |
| Very, very good. Enjoyed it and I hope to see more from you soon! |
Arnel
Thursday 30th November 2006 11:07 | The Wedding |
| Oh, my! We know what Ginny who thinking about as she was taking her OWLs! Hee, hee! I'm glad Ginny took matters into her own hands and did what Harry was hesitating to do. I'm also glad that she agreed to his request to stay at school/home and wait for him. She will definitely be useful to the trio, especially if she and Hermione work together on the research. This is a really good first chapter. I look forward to more of this story. |
purple_jelly_sandals
Thursday 30th November 2006 10:30 | The Wedding |
| ohhh! you should really continue this, you left it at such a teaser!!!!!!!!!! |
LauraGene
Thursday 30th November 2006 08:56 | The Wedding |
Are you planning to continue this story? I would love to learn more about the mirror and how exactly Ginny and Harry managed to get married without anyone - including themselves - finding out.
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lacyrachil
Thursday 30th November 2006 07:32 | The Wedding |
| Interesting ending...is there a follow up to this story? Seems like a great opportunity for one. |
hpchica
Thursday 30th November 2006 00:10 | The Wedding |
| Wow. Simply wow. Not to fluffy, and still well-written. Brilliant. Are you planning a sequal of any sort? That was a major cliffy you left us and I would hate to see the end of this haha... |
meddymo
Wednesday 29th November 2006 21:12 | The Wedding |
That was a very nice story, up until the ending. What in the world happened? Did the mirror marry Harry and Ginny without them knowing it? Who was the mirror? You left quite a few questions unanswered.
All that said, it was for the most part a nice piece. I like the way Harry and Ginny got back together and your characterizations were good. I just wish the ending had been a little more clear. |
| Thursday 30th November 2006 12:32 | The Wedding (Author Response) |
Did the mirror marry Harry and Ginny without them knowing it?[\quote]
Yes and no. The mirror was a magical witness, but Harry and Ginny married themselves.
Who was the mirror?[\quote]
The mirror isn't a person. She never was. But she's more than just a mirror, obviously. Hopefully I can make her clearer in the future. |
sweetdreamer285
Wednesday 29th November 2006 20:28 | The Wedding |
| G.Potter...I like it!+ |
Felix Felicis
Wednesday 29th November 2006 18:29 | The Wedding |
How wonderful! I love stories about Harry and Ginny meeting again at the wedding, and this one is outstanding. You've definately taken a different approach than many others and succeeded brilliantly!
I loved how they were both watching each other but never seeing. My favorite part, though, was Ginny attacking Harry and giving him a piece of her mind. That was due! Her personality showed through very well in this piece, from her fiery passion to her love for Harry. It was all very well done. Nicely written.
I liked the idea of the mirror, although I wish I knew more about how it worked. It was fun seeing Harry's reaction to a different personality than his friends. Harry and Ginny working together to repair it was a good idea and showed them something special about their relationship. The sum is greater than the individual parts is great and very true.
I was a little disappointed because I thought Ginny was going to get to go with Harry but, oh well. Hermione's point about her being in danger anyway was very true, and I can see her staying at Hogwarts and helping Harry out from afar. JKR will probably do it that way, too. Still, I wish she could go with him. Harry just won't be the same without her near.
The end was very touching. Of course we all know that Harry and Ginny are meant to be together but you showed that in a unique way. Good job! I'm going to add this story to my favorites now! Thanks for sharing it with us! |
ginnysohma
Wednesday 29th November 2006 16:56 | The Wedding |
| it says completed. and i haVE NO IDEA WHAT JUST HAPPENED!!!!!!!! its gonna drive me NUTS! brilliant story, though. |
mary-v
Wednesday 29th November 2006 16:33 | The Wedding |
| Woah! Amazing work, but there are just so many loose ends! There will be a sequel right? Because you left me all confused! Well confused in a good way. You wrote this magnificently, and I can't wait for, hopefully, another chapter! |
tante
Wednesday 29th November 2006 15:42 | The Wedding |
I thought it was easy to see that it was a charmed mirror and the woman in it belonged to the mirror and wasn't ever a human in the first place. She's just the mirror's voice, rather like the Weasley's talking mirror in their kitchen, but sentient.
I loved the duel between Harry & Ginny. lol.
“Together it is, then. Always.” *Que the dramatic horn music.*
Famous last words. *giggle*
Well done. Loved the abrupt ending, continued or not. it works. |
Abbey_anne
Wednesday 29th November 2006 15:38 | The Wedding |
| Awesome, please continue this story! I love it. Great piece of work! |
Bagelz
Wednesday 29th November 2006 15:17 | The Wedding |
| Intriguing ... looking forward to seeing where this goes! |
potternut190
Wednesday 29th November 2006 15:06 | The Wedding |
| Cute hook. Now I just need to reread it to figure out at what moment it took place. Just who is in the mirror? |
LisaK
Wednesday 29th November 2006 14:16 | The Wedding |
| Okay, I'm entirely confused... The ending seems a little abrupt, or else it seems like there is a lot missing from this...especially who the woman is, and an explanation of what happened. I liked the touch with the mirror though! |
amamama
Wednesday 29th November 2006 13:26 | The Wedding |
Interesting... H/G are soul bonded, thus husband/wife and Ginny is magically recognized as such? And what is the mirror like? A Py'rg? (Or was it P'yrg? Don't remember) Handing out advice and knowing everything? Neat mirror. Now, I wonder - with such an interesting start, are you going to continue this story? I know it says Satus:Completed, but still. A new one that follows this? Could be an interesting read, especially with that mirror around...
Thanks for sharing.
Cheers! |
| Thursday 30th November 2006 12:23 | The Wedding (Author Response) |
Hm. Soul Bonded? Could be. Married? Definitely.
The mirror was an idea I had. She's older than you'd think. But as she doesn't reside in Harry's head, I don't think I could count her as a P'yrg. |
TreyFury97
Wednesday 29th November 2006 12:35 | The Wedding |
Wow.... a cliffy if I've ever seen one. You've got one hooked reader here, and I anxiously await your next chapter.
Trey |
| Thursday 30th November 2006 12:20 | The Wedding (Author Response) |
| Thanks. I'll be working on what comes next as time permits. |
