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Monday 8th January 2007 12:14 | Rebuilding Tomorrow |
It is going to be interesting to see where you are going with this story. | girlspell
Monday 1st January 2007 12:37 | Rebuilding Tomorrow | I thought you captured Ron exactly. One of the most endearing things about Ron is his self doubts and his relying on Hermione to over come them. I really enjoyed this story. I just came across it by accident, read chapter 3 and then back tracked to the other chapters. Loved reading this view of Ron.
I like the idea of Harry wanting a "life" of his own and the freedom to enjoy it. | Curren
Friday 29th December 2006 04:01 | Rebuilding Tomorrow | | well, i kinda like the story, but i don't really see a reason for the foul language ron and harry are using. It feels quite out of character for them, as does some of the conversations they have. | | Friday 29th December 2006 05:17 | Rebuilding Tomorrow (Author Response) | | Ron especially uses the language because JKR said he was a boy who would swear loads, except her editors won't let her actually write the words. As far as OOC, I dunno how to respond to that. |
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