FairyQueen
Saturday 20th October 2007 08:29 | It's Yours to Claim It All |
| This was really good! |
pyromain
Friday 29th June 2007 15:45 | It's Yours to Claim It All |
| I really like the story so far I hope you will continue this story I would love to read more. |
mary-v
Wednesday 24th January 2007 10:31 | It's Yours to Claim It All |
| Ohhh great chappie! I'm really looking forward to more! |
GryffindorDragon
Monday 15th January 2007 15:15 | It's Yours to Claim It All |
Nice start. Probably a mistake on the Ministry's part to keep Voldie alive
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daniel_r_crazy22
Thursday 11th January 2007 15:38 | It's Yours to Claim It All |
| That's a good start. I can't wait to see what Harry does to try and 'win' Ginny back. |
rupertgrintsgirl
Thursday 11th January 2007 15:06 | It's Yours to Claim It All |
excellent!!!
buh-bye hagrid neville andmoody.
and hello ron andhermione!!!!YAY!!! |
Melindaleo
Thursday 11th January 2007 07:52 | It's Yours to Claim It All |
Ooh, loads of potential in the start of this one! Voldemort is still alive, though? Hmm, interesting. I'm so sorry to hear about the loss of . I tend to avoid writing him at all because I find him hard, but I do think he means a lot to poor Harry. So much loss in such a short life.
Delighted to see his determined attitude regarding Ginny shining through though. She'll help him learn to cope better than anyone. |
Arnel
Thursday 11th January 2007 06:56 | It's Yours to Claim It All |
| An excellent first chapter. You've really caught my attention. I sincerely hope the next chapter is forthcoming soon. You've an excellent grasp of the characters' personalities and an interesting premise about what the ministry is doing with Voldemort. However, I'm a little miffed by why you killed off Neville and are letting Tonks live. Hmmm. Until next chapter... |
critmo
Thursday 11th January 2007 04:12 | It's Yours to Claim It All |
| Interesting idea: defeated, but alive. Poor Harry, I do hope they can make that coma permament ... or is there another Horcrux lurking somewhere? |
